Hello everyone! This is my 2nd draft of this song and I feel the structure has improved a lot. I feel there's a few little word changes that could be made though, so I'd really appreciate any recommendations!
Love, Rinse, Repeat
©2020 JohnMAFS
V1
It’s so sad
You hold your hand
Close your eyes
And pretend it’s your man
And it’s so bad
Your life’s so bland
Without his touch
Without his plan
Pre-Chorus
People say, “girl don’t you cry
Find another, and you’ll be just fine”
Surprise, surprise
Your hearts’ out to dry
And you’re back on the horse
For another ride
C
Come on girl, I can’t believe
Love to you’s just rinse and repeat
Please be with me
I’m all you need
Stop playin’ these games of
love, rinse, repeat
V2
It’s so sad
When one love ends
You barely stand
‘Til a new one begins
And it’s so bad
After all these tears
You’ve forgotten the boys
From the early years
(Pre-Chorus)
(Chorus)
Bridge
I’m such a fool
For loving you
Cuz love to you’s
Just filling shoes
Yet every time
I see you cry
I wish that I
Could make you mine
(Chorus)