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Posted By: Ronnie Fields Let Me Tell You What's Real - 02/02/23 11:35 PM
I wrote this song several years back, after realizing that about 90% of the TV that we watch is Reality, when the reality is Jesus is coming soon.
https://soundcloud.com/ronniefields/let-me-tell-you-whats-real

_SLACKER.STY Slacker 90s Quarter-Pulse Rock
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Posted By: rayc Re: Let Me Tell You What's Real - 02/03/23 03:45 AM
A couple of more dBs on the main vocal are needed Ronnie.
Nice band.
Posted By: Brad Williams Re: Let Me Tell You What's Real - 02/03/23 03:54 PM
Hey Ronnie, not your usual backing band - I like it. Neat closing guitar lick too. I agree with Ray - the vocal needs to come up, particularly in the verses. It was difficult to hear, but I liked what I could hear. I like the line about "I don't care about catchin' alligators ...", but I didn't hear any reference to it in any of the verses, or maybe an added bridge would be nice to shore it up some. I liked the feel of this song, and the message of course, a lot.

Brad
Posted By: Ronnie Fields Re: Let Me Tell You What's Real - 02/04/23 08:48 PM
Brad, it was a reality show that featured someone catching alligators, like Louisiana cops or something like that!!
Posted By: NigelSpiers Re: Let Me Tell You What's Real - 02/04/23 10:40 PM
Hi Ronnie,

I like it - a good catchy song.

I agree with the others - vocals up by 2Db in the verses. The vocals in the choruses are at a good level.

Best Regards
Nigel
Posted By: dcuny Re: Let Me Tell You What's Real - 02/05/23 03:51 AM
Catchy pop! smile

As others have said, a boost on the verse would be helpful.
Posted By: B.D.Thomas Re: Let Me Tell You What's Real - 02/05/23 08:36 AM
Catchy chorus, I like that.
As others have said, the verses need a little remixing.
Posted By: firesong Re: Let Me Tell You What's Real - 02/06/23 02:06 PM
Hey Ronnie...unique approach and clever lyrics...yeah, raise the vocal in the verses...great band and style for the theme...tongue-in-cheek true...works for me!
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