Hi All,
Here's another new one. This is called
I FALL.
When the day unfolds
Morning’s in town
Her eyes are like diamonds
Shining down
She is near
She is near to me
Her hair it tumbles
The world is small
And I fall
I will live
I will live
Wherever she is
I will live
And everything is new again
Nothing in the past
Wherever she looks
She sees it all
And I fall
For her days
For her nights
For her years
For her love
I will crawl
I will fall
I can see her love light
I can see her love light
Her hair it tumbles
The world is small
And I fall
And I fall
For her days
For her nights
For her years
For her love
I will crawl
I will fall
I fall
I fall
I fall
BIAB Tracks:
3786: Bass, Synth, MinimalHipHopHeld 095
3784: Synth, Rhythm, MinimalHipHopGhostPads 095
4009: Guitar, Electric, Rhythm, ModPopHushMuted2noteLoAlt Ev16 95
3329: Guitar, Electric, Rhythm, LoungeFunkSwells Ev16 080
MIDI SuperTracks: 4437:Synth, Pad, SysthMasterDreamingTripPulseDelay
RealDrums: 1:UrbanPopEv16BrokenWIres^2
RealDrums: 2:Soul70sPerc Ev16
As always - thanks for listening!
Bob
Nicely done Bob.
Interesting lyrics as we have come to expect from you and fitting instrument choice.
Maybe the vocal could come up a couple of dbs.
Vic
Bob,
Loved! listening to that!
Your writing style (lyrics) and vocal work well with this "modern" treatment.
And a fine treatment it is! Cool choices for tracks. The combination of synth pads and 2-note guitar is a great choice. Drum choices work, too.
The nice thing about this is it "sounds modern" (I'm getting to where I hate hearing that phrase again) without "trying". It just IS.
Excellent job creating this. I'd call this a HUGE success.
fj
(cool cover)
A REALLY cool arrangement/choice of RTs Bob.
They contrast & highlight your vocal tracks.
Cool. Reminds me of Susan Vega in some ways.
Well, that's different in the best sort of way.
Dark and brooding arrangement, cool percussion, great vocal. Crunchy and synthy. Nice build, too.
I like it!
Hi Bob,
Very different! And very cool indeed.
Nice to see you push the sides of the envelope, well done!
Vic,
Thanks - much appreciate the listen and comment. For this type of instrumentation / production I prefer the vocal to be a bit "tucked in".
Bob
Man, I really look forward to what you post, Bob. Never disappointed. I like how you surround your unique voice with the sounds and instruments you chose. The synth bass is a great choice for this hypnotic song.
Really nice pop sounding song Bob!
Different vibe, sound and groove than you have used before.
I like this style on you!
Unexpected but welcome style change from you. What a great arrangement, excellent selection of BIAB instruments, I really like that 4009 guitar and the combination of the drum tracks. Really engaging dark mood is a perfect fit for the deep love expressed in the lyrics. Kind of funny contrast to your lighter arrangements that have more melancholy story. Vocal track is full of intimate passion. Maybe your best so far.
Janne
Floyd,
I appreciate the kind words. It means a lot - thanks so much.
Bob
Bob, love this groove and instrumentation.
Great vocal and lyrics.
This is different from most posts here but I really like it!
Absolutely an outstanding song.
Ray,
I appreciate that - thanks.
Bob
Different in a very good way.
Cool arrangement choices, and your vocals have the perfect haunting quality for the song.
Reminds me a bit of The Cure.
Bob
A bit different and very engaging. Great choice of band.
I enjoyed it.
Peter
Dave,
Much appreciated - thank you.
Bob
Marty,
Much appreciated. Thanks.
Bob
Bob,
Very cool opening! Really like almost ascetic arrangement & lyrics. Vocals A+. I think you should do more experimental tunes like this. Enjoyed it and thank you for sharing.
Misha.
Hi Bob
Great intro followed by a TOP song
Excellent melody and great singing
One of your best songs
Many greetings
Andi ;-)
David,
Thanks so much.
Bob
Bob...love the band you assembled...your voice is compelling in this type of environment...the song has a haunting, abstract element that works well for the lyric...interesting and enjoyable!
Janne,
Thanks. That's very kind of you.
Yes, that 4009 guitar is a great track. It tended to go off beat a bit, so had to be edited / managed. I was happy with the end result.
Bob
Well, I REALLY loved this one. The lyrics are stunning, and your treatment of them, through the music, is excellent ... very "psychedelic", allowing us to get a picture in our mind of the lyrics in a more "unconventional" manner (i.e. painting, instead of telling, as it were). Anyway ... bravo. Absolutely loved it.
Mario,
Thanks - I appreciate that.
Bob
Brian,
Thanks - that's very kind.
Bob
I like what you did with the instrumentation. You've created a mysteriousness in the sound.
Good lyrics, as I expect from you.
This is one of your best. Very memorable and compelling.
Misha,
Thanks - much appreciated.
Bob
Dan,
Thanks - much appreciated.
Bob
James,
That's very kind - thank you.
Bob
Scott,
Thanks - that's very kind of you.
Bob
Hi, Bob !
Wonderful tune !
I enjoyed it very much
the ambience is so
excitingly mysterious !
Cheers
Dani
It's really cool to hear people here starting to get into using synths and exploring other genres other than what they are comfortable in. That's how we grow as writers and musicians.
Nice... yeah the vox could come up a bit in some places.
Herb,
Thanks. Appreciate the feedback.
Yes, there are some great sounding synths.
Bob
What a cool intro Bob. So different. Really ominous. Lovely delicate vocal and lyric. Really well done...
Scott,
Thanks - I appreciate that.
Bob
As Marty mentioned this is indeed hypnotic.
floyd stated it best: "The nice thing about this is it "sounds modern" (I'm getting to where I hate hearing that phrase again) without "trying". It just IS."
Yes! but it's also reminiscent of Steve Winwood’s 80’s sound.
Which we much like.
Great lyric - another poem for Janice’s collection of yours
Kudo!
J&B
Janice & Bud,
You both are so kind. I truly appreciate your support. Thank you so much.
Bob