Another one I just finished

Here's one I called "With All My Heart",
feat. Don "Donny" Clark on Trumpet.

Cheers, Daniel

http://www.songramp.com/mod/mps/viewprivtrack.php?trackid=57058

Suggestions, critiques and tips on mixing, levels etc. are most welcome.

****** Song Summary *************
Title: With all my Heart
File:With all my Heart.MGU
Key=D , Tempo 85, Length (m:s)=3:59
Style is _CSWNGBP.STY (Country Ballad w AcStrm(85 RS))
RealTracks in style: ~535:Bass, Electric, Pop Sw 085
RealTracks in song: ~689:Organ, B3, Background Pop Ev 085
RealTracks in song: ~~971:Guitar, Electric, Rhythm CountrySwingGrittyA-B Sw 085
RealTracks in song: ~530:Guitar, Acoustic, Strumming Hank Sw 085
RealTracks in song: ~494:Trumpet, Jazz Ballad Sw 085
RealTracks in song: ~1096:Piano, Acoustic, Rehearsal Showtunes Sw 085
RealDrums in Style: NashvilleSwing8^2-SideStck,Ride
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Very nice Daniel!

Daniel,

I thought this was pretty cool.

I listened to it several times.

The only critique I would have is the panning. I'd like to hear some of the supportive instruments panned more to the L & R, everything seems kinda pushed to the middle. Maybe pan the organ 50 or 60% R and the Rythm guitar 40 or 50% L, maybe the trumpet 5 or 10% either way (experiment with different extremes). I think it would add more separation to the instruments and maybe make it more spacious sounding. I would pretty much leave the bass & drums center.

JMHO

Nice Job,

Greg

Hello Peter. Thank you!

Hello Greg
Thank you very much for your critique, exactly what I'm looking for. I'm inexperienced when it comes to mixing. I'm always trying to build a "sound stage" with enough separation for the instruments, yet it should still sound sort of natural on headphones. Your input is most welcome, I shall try it out.

Daniel

Daniel, I liked this very much. Great job!

Bob

Thank you Bob.
I enjoy almost every song posted here by anyone but I don't normally comment on it. Your duet with Josie is a real treat, something special. Just thought I'd mention it while I'm posting my thanks to you.
Daniel