Nice! It's seems like the kind of song that you'd use that "mammoth reverb" sound on the drums. And you forgot to bounce the percussion between the speakers every eighth note!
One real nit - the kick is a bit loud an up front for my taste. Other than that, nice and smooth.
As RHarv mentioned the drums though not a problem are the weakest part of the composition, If it were my project (which it isn't) , I'd consider a light jazz brush set of realdrums. Just a thought.