Here's a song about growing older - hope you enjoy. All RT's in BIAB and mixed to a Tascam DP-008. Thanks for listening...

Bob

http://soundclick.com/share.cfm?id=10271938

There was a girl with shimmering hair
Sometimes her name escapes me
She was always running through the falling rain
How long would it take her to love me
Slow and easy as a river winds
Those days play out around me
The warm north wind is leaving again
And the days of autumn surround me

Chorus:
Goodbye, Silver Girl, we've come to the end of our world
So long, Silver Girl, I'm glad we gave it a whirl

Silent strangers and early days
A well worn welcome home
The ghost of your love still lingers on
Like a slow burning candle at dawn
Storm warnings and sinking ships
We never heeded with much precision
Finding home sweet home and naming the dog
Those were the big decisions

Chorus: repeat

Two rivers and a summer dance
Someone that I used to know
Now the best days that I can remember
Is when we'd take the long way home
Sometimes there is a voice I hear in my head
Like you're calling from a telephone
And it follows me down the long hallway
So I am not traveling alone

Chorus: repeat

All I can say is WOW!

This is one fantastic song.

Great vocal, lyrics and mix. Two thumbs up.

Hi Bob,

I'm sitting here listening on my headphones right at this minute.

The minute your song started playing, I was whisked back to the folk/pop era of the 60s/70s. Then, as your song unfolded, I found myself sitting here with my foot tapping and singing along with the choruses.

Thanks for a great listen!
Noel

Hey Bob,

Like Noel, I also found myself singing along with the choruses.
Good Job.

Greg

Mario, thanks so much for the kind words. Glad you enjoyed it!

Bob

Hey Noel, thanks - your words are very appreciated. The 60's/70's was my era for music

Bob

Greg, thanks for listening and your kind comments.

Bob

Bob,
Its all been said. Good job!
Marty

Marty, thanks for listening - much appreciated.

Bob

Bob, I real winner. 'Loved it.

John

Hi Bob,

What i like best about your writing is the way you paint your lyrical images without getting overly poetic. That's easier said than done and a huge credit to you as a writer in my opinion. I also think you choose nice melodies.

I'm sending you a PM with some specific comments because I don't want to break etiquette here since you didn't ask for any critique.

John, thanks - much appreciated.

Bob

Josie, thanks so much - heading over to my PM now

Bob