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Posted By: PgFantastic I Have Been Redeemed/Rock Gospel - 01/15/12 06:31 PM
Here is my first song using biab 2012, it is a pop/rock gospel song. Great work by the way to the folks at PG, another home run on the new version!

Realtracks are 387 bass elec metal
1683 Acoustic Guitar Rhytm pop
drums pop promise ev16^1-4Sn,SNOH
1686 electric guitar rhythm
1687 Electric Guitar pop gritty

I Have Been Redeemed
Posted By: dcuny Re: I Have Been Redeemed/Rock Gospel - 01/15/12 06:42 PM
Nice work all around!

My only thought is that the chorus is crying out for something to give it more weight - perhaps doubling the vocal, or adding harmony?

Anyway, good job as usual.
Posted By: Sundance Re: I Have Been Redeemed/Rock Gospel - 01/15/12 07:10 PM
I love this Robert! My new fav or yours!

I'd like to have maybe a little hotter bass and kickin' harmony on the chorus but it sounds good to me as is and it's a great song.


Well done!


Josie
Posted By: Noel96 Re: I Have Been Redeemed/Rock Gospel - 01/15/12 07:37 PM
Hi Robert,

What a great piece of work. You've set a new height to the songwriting bar with this one.

All the best,
Noel
Posted By: Kemmrich Re: I Have Been Redeemed/Rock Gospel - 01/15/12 07:41 PM
I love that drum part during the verses -- real simple and effective. It is a really good mixing of instruments on this one. Yea, maybe need to kick up the chorus a little more, but it is a super great start.

Kevin
Posted By: MarioD Re: I Have Been Redeemed/Rock Gospel - 01/16/12 03:07 PM
I think this is your best to date.

I do agree about the chorus harmonization. You may want to give it a try.
Posted By: Ian Fraser Re: I Have Been Redeemed/Rock Gospel - 01/16/12 03:39 PM
That's an impressive list of songs, Robert,
and your new one is a very strong one. A great mix.

I agree with the others about the need for harmony.
The line "I have been redeemed" - would be even more
powerful harmonized - maybe a woman's voice.
The percussion choice and use was great too.

Well done. Ian
Posted By: rsdean Re: I Have Been Redeemed/Rock Gospel - 01/16/12 04:52 PM
Robert,

Great song. You have really hit your stride with this one...

Bob
Posted By: PgFantastic Re: I Have Been Redeemed/Rock Gospel - 01/16/12 06:54 PM
I appreciate the comments. I will try and work on these. As always all you folks are so helpful! Much thanks!
Posted By: George Nelson Re: I Have Been Redeemed/Rock Gospel - 01/17/12 10:15 AM
Hi Robert,

I agree with the others.
Great song.

Best regards
George
Posted By: Skyline Re: I Have Been Redeemed/Rock Gospel - 01/17/12 10:50 AM
Nice work as per usual Robert, the song builds nicely.
When the vocals crank up it was so Neil Young-y!
Yes, some 3rds vox harmonies would be great on the chorus.
Maybe pan the acoustic rhythm guitar more to the left and the electric more to the right?

Your songwriting goes from strength to strength.

John
Posted By: Steve Young Re: I Have Been Redeemed/Rock Gospel - 01/17/12 04:51 PM
Robert,

Great song! I agree that this is one of your best. And of course, a great message! I also agree about adding harmonies, etc. But again, one of your best!

Keep it up!

Steve
Posted By: airtcon-161 Re: I Have Been Redeemed/Rock Gospel - 01/18/12 03:25 AM
Hi Robert, nicely put together. As other's have said, the adding of some harmony would really round out the song. I don't know if you can sing harmony(I can't) but in BIAB is a very good vocal processor which produces some amazing results if you work at it. The harmonies on my latest upload were done that way. It is very easy to use. Try it, this program is full of surprises. Nice job on this one. Keep at it.

Cheers

Nelson
Posted By: RobbMiller Re: I Have Been Redeemed/Rock Gospel - 01/19/12 12:02 AM
Good way to deliver a message. You can tell you believe what you are singing.
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