Hi all.
This is a re - recording of a tune I wrote some time ago.
All comments welcome.


Sound Cloud

You know I lay awake at night too often.
And I know the memorys not easily forgotten.

You know I had it made but that was yesterday.
Now whole world keeps crowding in on me.

It often seems I get many so things wrong.
But why would I stay on sinking ship so long.

And insanity, she often visits me.
Now whole world keeps crowding in on me.

You may stop and ask are things ok. ( You ask are things ok)
And I reply to you it depends on the day.

But never mind those things that cross my mind.
Now whole world keeps crowding in on me.

The whole world keeps on crowding in on me.
The whole world keeps on crowding in on me.



You know I had it made but that was yesterday.
Now whole world keeps crowding in on me.
Now whole world keeps crowding in on me.
Now whole world keeps crowding in on me.


****** Song Summary *************

File:Crowding in on me.MGX
Key=C , Tempo 120, Length (m:s)=3:04
No intro. 88 bar chorus, from bar 1 to bar 88. Repeat x1 chorus
Melody has 4819 notes, Melody harmony is < no harmony >(0)
No Soloist track.
Song is saved with Volume, Pan, Reverb, Chorus, Bank0,
Style is _CONSHPS.STY (Country Shuffle (136 RS))
Style MIDI Instruments are :
RealTracks in style: ~539:Bass, Electric, Pop Sw 120
RealTracks in style: ~372:Guitar, Acoustic, Strumming Hank Sw 120
RealTracks in style: 617:Pedal Steel, Background Shuffle Sw 136
RealDrums in style: CountryShuffle: a: CountryShuffleb: CountryShuffle
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Leed guitar intro me.
Harmonies and vocal me

Added strings and piano

Edited with Cakewalk music maker 6

Sound Cloud

Rob,

Well Soundcloud she ain't working for me to day, so can only comment on the lyrics.

Not bad kinda dark, but I like kinda dark so it works for me .
I'll stop back later and see if I can hear the music.

Tim

Hello Tim.
Checked out Sound cloud think its working now.
Thanks for trying ant way.

Insanity, she often visits me too! Good one IronBarkBob!

Hey Tommyc. Sounds like we are two of a kind.

hi rob nice mix all tracks fit well together thanks for sharing eric

Rob,
Nice job! Very smooth sound. The bass caught my ear. Did you tinker with the RT generation much. It's very interesting.
SD

Hey Space dog.

I just added some eq to the bass as I like it to stand out a little more in the mix.
Thanks for asking.

A really nice combination of sounds. I really like it!

Val

Rob,

Good job on this one! Good arrangement, and vocals. Thanks for sharing it!

Steve

Thank you Vzudell and Steve Young.

Rob,

Overall, I really enjoyed listening to this one. There is a nice groove going on which I think may be largely due to the cool bass line.

Thoughtful dark lyric.

A few comments which, as always, represent nothing more than my opinion and are intended to be constructive.

The intro may be a little too long – you have a good song here. I would be starting the vox right there at 0:17.

There is too much reverb or echo or something on the background vox.

Somehow I don’t think that the key change comes off on this occasion.


Marc

Thank you mglinert your comments are what I want to hear.
Thought provoking.
Regards Rob