Ive been crying

Posted by: Rob4580

Ive been crying - 03/20/12 07:08 PM

Hey guys here is anew one Ive been messing around with.
Not that happy with the fill.
But here it is any way.

All comments invited.

Regards to all Rob.

Sound cloud

Ive Been crying

Well I been crying since the day you left.

You went away and left me in a mess.

Well I been crying all day.
Please write me a letter say your coming back some day.

I went to the doctor and check my self.
He was concerned about my state of health.

Coz Ive been crying all day.
When you travel round can you drop back my way.
.........................................................................
I made me a promise to the stary skies.
Forgive your indesrcetions and your blatant lies.

All you have to say is that your coming home again.

.........................................................................

Now your been gone just a year or two.
I still get indegestion and Ive had the flue.

But Im still crying all day.

Wont you give me a call and say your coming back to stay.

Wont you give me a call and say your coming back to stay.

Wont you give me a call and say your coming back to stay.

****** Song Summary *************
Title: I been crying
File:I been crying.SGU
Key=C , Tempo 120, Length (m:s)=2:38
4 bar intro, 71 bar chorus, from bar 5 to bar 75. Repeat x1 chorus
No Melody
No Soloist track.
Song is saved with Volume, Pan, Reverb, Chorus, Bank0,
Song is saved with bar changes for RealDrums Changes,
Style is _CBOOGSL.STY (Country Boogie Slow w AcG(110RS))
Style MIDI Instruments are :
RealTracks in style: ~539:Bass, Electric, Pop Sw 120
RealTracks in style: ~950:Guitar, Acoustic, Rhythm CountryBoogieA-B Sw 110
RealTracks in style: ~956:Guitar, Electric, Rhythm CountryBoogieGrittyA-B Sw 110
RealTracks in style: ~953:Guitar, Electric, Rhythm CountryBoogieCleanA-B Sw 110
RealDrums in Song: NashvilleSwing8^6-a:Snare, OpenHat , b:Sidestick, HiHV

Vocals me
Intro and fill me
Posted by: rsdean

Re: Ive been crying - 03/21/12 06:39 AM

Hi Rob,

Nice song. I enjoyed your vocal - sounds like a mix of early Elvis and Johnny Cash - very cool vibe.

Bob
Posted by: Tommyc

Re: Ive been crying - 03/21/12 06:53 AM

Yeah kinda Elvis-e Wild Man of Cooloola Cove just need a lead guitar in the break.
Posted by: gibson

Re: Ive been crying - 03/21/12 10:44 AM

I like the backing vocals and the early rock vibe, good stuff.
Posted by: SpaceDog

Re: Ive been crying - 03/21/12 12:44 PM

Very nice. I also liked the backing vocals. Thanks for sharing.
SD
Posted by: vzudell

Re: Ive been crying - 03/21/12 03:37 PM

Your songs all seem to have that "laid back" easy to listen to feeling. I like that.
Nice vocals!

Val
Posted by: Steve Young

Re: Ive been crying - 03/21/12 10:17 PM

Rob,

Another good one! Like has been said, this has a nice "Elvis" quality. Good job!

Steve
Posted by: Sundance

Re: Ive been crying - 03/21/12 10:58 PM

Cool rockabilly. Agree with SpaceDog - those backup singers answering was perfect touch. You had my toes tapping.
Posted by: Rob4580

Re: Ive been crying - 03/22/12 04:30 AM

Wow guys.
Dont know what to say.

Thanks heaps.
Sure know how to give a guy a big ego.