Story about a loan shark.

Big Band style number that i submitted to FAWM this year.
Used style J_BASIE2, added RT's for sax, piano, guitar, organ.

http://soundcloud.com/tanomusic/dollar-bill

Great lyrics and good job on the melody too - with a stronger vocal and a real band I think I could hear this being done on Public radio - they have a show or two that feature vocal jazz or with the gentle humor maybe Garson Keillor. Best of luck!

Clever song! Like Pete said, with some real musicians, etc., this song has some real potential.

Steve