(Where Are You) Little Miss Sunshine - 05/19/12 11:37 PM
Re: (Where Are You) Little Miss Sunshine - 05/27/12 05:38 AM
Hi Carpie,
I like this song. It's quirky, happy, fun and I thought you did a nice job on the lead vox too. Your voice fits this really well. Personally, I might have made one of the verses a bridge with a little different melody to give the audience a change there and maybe put a lead lick or harmonica or something in the breaks. But that's just me. It's fine the way it is. Your ending could be a tad tighter and the harmony on the second chorus is a bit nice and tighter than the "where" on the first chorus - but I'm sure you know that already.
Sweet fun. I enjoyed it! Keep writing.
I like this song. It's quirky, happy, fun and I thought you did a nice job on the lead vox too. Your voice fits this really well. Personally, I might have made one of the verses a bridge with a little different melody to give the audience a change there and maybe put a lead lick or harmonica or something in the breaks. But that's just me. It's fine the way it is. Your ending could be a tad tighter and the harmony on the second chorus is a bit nice and tighter than the "where" on the first chorus - but I'm sure you know that already.
Sweet fun. I enjoyed it! Keep writing.
Re: (Where Are You) Little Miss Sunshine - 05/27/12 06:05 PM
Re: (Where Are You) Little Miss Sunshine - 05/28/12 03:26 PM
Dana, what a terrific song and performance. Thanks for letting us hear this one.
You have a superb voice and delivery style - so like Jackson Browne it could be him!
An excellent acoustic guitar sound - BIAB or yours?
Nicely recorded and mixed too.
John
You have a superb voice and delivery style - so like Jackson Browne it could be him!
An excellent acoustic guitar sound - BIAB or yours?
Nicely recorded and mixed too.
John