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Real Tracks include -bass elec funk smooth
Syncopated acoustic guitar
Syncopated elec guitar
Me on live vocals and lead guitar
Very nice production. Love the vocal. Guitar work is outstanding. Thanks 4 sharing.
My Music
Super mix, great backing tracks and rhythm and the vocals were super. I really liked you guitar playing, great job. Plus the lyrics were outstanding.
To really nit-pick I didn’t like the ending. Personally I would have had an abrupt ending with the last “think”. Again that is just my opinion and others may not agree.
Still this is one fantastic song.
Mario,The abrupt ending you talk about is exactly what I tried to do. I just couldn,t get it right. I may go back and try a couple of other things because I don't like this ending either, I just kind of settled for it. Thanks for your comments and you are spot on about the ending. Tom
Tom, one thing you may want to try is with a cymbal crash at the end. Create a midi drum track and write a cymbal crash were you want it. It is very easy to do with midi.
If you don’t know midi or are having problems just let me know and I will try it here. Just don’t be in a hurry as things are hectic around here right now; you know life getting in the way of music making, again:-}
Very smooth Tommy.
Nice mix.