I changed some of the lyrics and phrasing but all muisc still just BIAB. Any comments would be greatly appreciated.
Thanks
http://soundcloud.com/msfrancis/im-a-lucky-man
Hey Msfrancis,
I like you idea. This is only my opinion so take it for what it's worth or disregard whatever - the problem I have with this song is the chorus is "today" - it's our hero's wedding day and suddenly we're all at the wedding. Personally I think it would be more effective to rewrite your chorus in the past tense. The production is a little intense for a wedding song. jmho
Thanks for sharing. Nice production.