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Posted By: msfrancis I'm A Lucky Man (remix) - 07/14/12 08:35 PM
I changed some of the lyrics and phrasing but all muisc still just BIAB. Any comments would be greatly appreciated.

Thanks

http://soundcloud.com/msfrancis/im-a-lucky-man
Posted By: Sundance Re: I'm A Lucky Man (remix) - 07/14/12 10:19 PM
Hey Msfrancis,

I like you idea. This is only my opinion so take it for what it's worth or disregard whatever - the problem I have with this song is the chorus is "today" - it's our hero's wedding day and suddenly we're all at the wedding. Personally I think it would be more effective to rewrite your chorus in the past tense. The production is a little intense for a wedding song. jmho

Thanks for sharing. Nice production.
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