Check out this song I wrote to my youngest son on his 2nd birthday. Let me know what you think of it!
http://soundcloud.com/user5604784/little-manCheers!
Somar - very nice all the way around. well-written lyric and a great melody. wonderful sentiment. nice choose of tracks - interesting and tasteful. and a well done mix. what's not to like...
I really liked it. Great job. (And welcome to the forum!)
Nice job on this tune. Good topic and well arranged and produced. Might have a touch too much reverb here and there (early fiddle?) for that more contemporary country sound -- but it is a pretty minor point. Nice change into the chorus/bridge. Pretty good singing, too. Excellent mixing of BIAB sounds. This is a good a song as I've heard around these parts.
Very well done. And when it's close to the heart it is even better.
First class song and production. Well done!
Very well done! Like the change up around 4:01. Thanks for sharing!
My Music
A really groovy track. Are the handclaps from RealTracks?
I especially like the backing vocals.
Good voice.
Thumbs up.
Guenter
Very nice song, good vocals & mix too! Also like the variation you did at 4:00.
Nice job!
Greg
Fun to listen to. I did notice a change in the tone of your singing at the end which I am not sure helped the song finish up uniformly, perhaps this was intentional. In any event, it's a very good song.
Hi somar,
I really enjoyed listening to this. It's very engaging in every way - music, words, performance, production. What a wonderful lifetime gift to give you son.
Regards,
Noel
Yep, it's all said, but also wonder about the hand clap (I don't think is a RT) but it lends a little "(River Dance" type of groove to it.
Later
It’s all been said, super heart felt song with super lyrics and backing tracks. Your vocals ain’t too shabby either, great job on that!
I really like this!
Somar,
Welcome to the forum. Thanks for sharing your music.
I sure liked the song. I especially liked your vocals (both lead and backing tracks). I think the hand clapping was a very nice touch.
We hope to hear lots more from you!
SD
Somar,
I almost missed this and I'm so glad I didn't.
You've got the gift. This is top shelf. What a great contemporary sound. Personally I wasn't crazy about the switch in the vocal and switching into the long ending tag of "baby you've got to help yourself". I think it would've been more powerful to stay with your hook - jmho. But what a great song and production. And I love your voice.
Two big thumbs up here. One of the best songs I've heard on this forum.