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Posted By: rsdean "Maybe She's" - New Song - 12/28/12 08:55 PM
Hi all,

Here's a new solo folk song called Maybe She's . All backing is BIAB/RT's, with the addition of my Gibson B-25 playing acoustic lead on the break. Hope you enjoy!

Bob
Posted By: boehm Re: "Maybe She's" - New Song - 12/29/12 01:56 AM
Nice point of your lyrics in the end.
Good use of BIAB.

Happy new year.

Guenter
Posted By: seeker Re: "Maybe She's" - New Song - 12/29/12 04:59 AM
Bob,

Excellent work. The simple sounds, your vocals and lyrics
telling a sad story capped off by the last two lines.

Thank you for sharing your music with us!
Posted By: austin51 Re: "Maybe She's" - New Song - 12/29/12 05:03 AM
Bob,

I enjoyed Maybe She's a lot. I especially like the imagery of your lyrics here.

The sound of your voice works well with the very nice tune.

Overall sounds great. For me the song would flow better without the extended La-la, na-na portion.

I would do one line of la-s and one of na-s then to the last verse. Because your lyrics are so compelling I wanted to get to the final verse sooner.

Just one opinion out of a possible 7,088,211,000 and counting.
Posted By: JoanneCooper Re: "Maybe She's" - New Song - 12/29/12 06:13 AM
Great song Bob. I enjoyed listening
Posted By: rsdean Re: "Maybe She's" - New Song - 12/29/12 01:19 PM
Guenter,

Thanks for listening and commenting. Much appreciated.

Bob
Posted By: rsdean Re: "Maybe She's" - New Song - 12/29/12 01:20 PM
Frank,

Thanks so much for listening.

Bob
Posted By: rsdean Re: "Maybe She's" - New Song - 12/29/12 01:24 PM
austin51,

Thanks for the thoughtful comments. I was on the fence about the extra line in the break. In the end, I decided to leave it in.

Bob
Posted By: rsdean Re: "Maybe She's" - New Song - 12/29/12 01:25 PM
Joanne,

Thanks so much.

Bob
Posted By: gibson Re: "Maybe She's" - New Song - 12/29/12 02:06 PM
I like the song a lot (and the guitar in the picture!)

good work

Alyn
Posted By: rsdean Re: "Maybe She's" - New Song - 12/29/12 05:20 PM
Alyn,

Thanks - much appreciated.

The guitar was built for me by Peter Dudley. Here's a link that describes its features... http://dudleycustomguitars.com/028overview.html

Bob
Posted By: Noel96 Re: "Maybe She's" - New Song - 12/29/12 09:19 PM
Hi Bob,

Just a couple of days ago I was sitting here, reading through the forums and wondering how things were going for you because it's been a while since I've a read a post! Now here you are!! Spooky

You've got my vote. In my opinion, the song, its mix and its production have worked hand in hand to create an enjoyable work of aural art. You got me thinking "Nice one, Bob. I like it."

Happy 2013!
Noel
Posted By: rsdean Re: "Maybe She's" - New Song - 12/29/12 11:03 PM
Noel,

Thanks - that means a lot. The last several months were very busy, so not much time for posting, etc. Looking forward to spending more time in the "studio".

Bob
Posted By: floyd jane Re: "Maybe She's" - New Song - 12/30/12 02:13 PM
Bob - liked the simple arrangement and the simple acoustic lead over the la la la. Especially liked the image "The smell of skin and whiskey coming from her dress".
Posted By: PgFantastic Re: "Maybe She's" - New Song - 12/30/12 06:07 PM
Love the lyrics! Great mix and vocal! Thanks for sharing!


My Tunes
Posted By: rsdean Re: "Maybe She's" - New Song - 12/30/12 07:29 PM
Floyd,

Thanks very much. Appreciate the feedback.

Bob
Posted By: rsdean Re: "Maybe She's" - New Song - 12/30/12 07:30 PM
Robert,

Thanks. So glad you enjoyed it.

Bob
Posted By: Steve Young Re: "Maybe She's" - New Song - 12/30/12 11:10 PM
Bob,

I always look forward to hearing any of your songs. You always inspire me to be a better lyricist. This one does not disappoint. The imagery of your lyrics is always outstanding. (And by the way, like Noel, I have been missing hearing more from you.)

Steve
Posted By: rsdean Re: "Maybe She's" - New Song - 12/31/12 01:09 AM
Steve,

Thanks for the very kind words. I really appreciate that.

It's been very busy around here for the past few months (you know how that is) I hope to get some more music time in now.

Bob
Posted By: Don Gaynor Re: "Maybe She's" - New Song - 12/31/12 02:49 AM
Another keeper, Bob! Thanks for the link.
Posted By: rsdean Re: "Maybe She's" - New Song - 12/31/12 01:30 PM
Don,

Thanks very much.

Bob
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