Just posted this to FAWM..used style _BOSAAMP.


https://soundcloud.com/tanomusic/upside-down

I've been madly making other posts to FAWM because I'm trying to get done by next week. The others really need refining in order to be worthy of posting here.

Thanks in advance for any feedback!

I like this song a lot, Tano... It moves, it's mellow, and the progression is interesting, although I couldn't always follow it...I had a little trouble at 2:44, when you modulate, and the vocal seems to come unglued. Don't know what to suggest, maybe don't modulate to B, or maybe try and find a more definitive way of getting there.

But very nice vibe, and -- what can I say -- the sticky bun syndrome.

Thanks Brallan..I'll take a look at that portion later on..

Hi Tano,

Very tasteful music! I enjoyed listening to it. I have to congratulate you on some incredibly creative rhyming in you lyrics.

All the best with FAWM!
Noel

Thank you Noel

Very nice chord progression and tune.
Best success with FAWM.
Didn't know that you participate.

Guenter