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Posted By: Rob4580 Can you do? New original - 04/24/13 05:25 AM
Hi all.

Another new tune.
All comments welcome.

Regards Rob

Can You Do?

****** Song Summary *************
Title: Can you do
File:Can you do 2.SGU
Key=C , Tempo 85, Length (m:s)=3:11
No intro. 64 bar chorus, from bar 1 to bar 64. Repeat x1 chorus
No Melody
No Soloist track.
Song is saved with Volume, Pan, Reverb, Chorus, Bank0,
Song is saved with bar changes for RealDrums Changes,
Style is _POPOMSL.STY (Med-Slow PopBallad w Organ(85 RS)

RealTracks in style: ~701:Bass, Electric, PopHalfNotesSync Ev 085
RealTracks in style: ~365:Guitar, Acoustic, Fingerpicking Ev 085
RealTracks in style: ~362:Guitar, Acoustic, Strumming Ev 085
RealTracks in style: ~689:Organ, B3, Background Pop Ev 085
RealDrums in style: NashvilleEven8^5-a:Snare, HiHat , b:Snare, Ride

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Vocals and Harmonies me myself and I

Mixed with reaper.

Can you do? Like i do.
Can you see like I see.

Do you need like I need?'
Do yoy want? Like I want.

There aint nothing that we cannot talk about.
There aint nothing that we need to leave out.

Will you be? Like I'll be.
Do you give? Like I give.

Will you stay? Like I stay.
Are you strong? Like Im strong.

Who knows what in store but you will be with me.
We will stand the storms togeather we'll be free

Fill

Some times its auckward when you have to be alone.
But I,ll be back again and you laying in my arms


can you smile? Like I smile.
Are you proud? Like Im proud


Will you stay? Like I stay.
Are you strong? Like Im strong.
Posted By: ROG Re: Can you do? New original - 04/24/13 05:51 PM
Hey Rob.

Great song. Shades of Buffalo Springfield in there somewhere.

The chord sequence is all the more effective for being kept simple and the track has a good groove.

The vocals are good, but personally I'd like to hear you power it a bit more. You've got a good rock voice, but it sounds like you're holding back. Have the confidence to let it go a bit more, particularly in the overdubs at the end and it could be great.

Good work.

ROG.
Posted By: Rob4580 Re: Can you do? New original - 04/25/13 09:15 PM
Hey Rog.
Thanks for the advice and thanks for the tip.
I will certainly take that inboard .
Regards Rob.
Posted By: Sundance Re: Can you do? New original - 04/29/13 03:47 AM


Great retro feel to this one Rob.

Really enjoyed it.
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