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Posted By: rsdean Another Story To Tell - 10/05/13 01:33 PM
Hey All,

Here's one I've been meaning to record for a while now. This is called Another Story To Tell.

All BIAB RTs - Produced/Mixed in GarageBand. Thanks for listening!

Bob
Posted By: Sundance Re: Another Story To Tell - 10/05/13 03:24 PM
Hey Bob,

Reminds me of Harry Chapin and your voice sounds great on it. My fav line is the wishing well. Nice organ too.
Posted By: Janice & Bud Re: Another Story To Tell - 10/05/13 03:28 PM
Strong, strong imagery along with fine vocals and production to support the lyrics. This one sticks with you. Thanks.
Posted By: rsdean Re: Another Story To Tell - 10/05/13 05:20 PM
Hey Josie,

Thanks so much - I appreciate that! smile

Bob
Posted By: rsdean Re: Another Story To Tell - 10/05/13 08:09 PM
Janice & Bud,

Thanks for the very kind words. Glad you enjoyed it.

Bob
Posted By: Scott C Re: Another Story To Tell - 10/05/13 08:49 PM
An excellent song. The lyrics were excellent. Well done
Posted By: Skyline Re: Another Story To Tell - 10/06/13 09:21 AM
Originally Posted By: Scottt709
An excellent song. The lyrics were excellent. Well done


+1

Some excellent imagery, Bob.

John
Posted By: rsdean Re: Another Story To Tell - 10/06/13 11:39 AM
Scott,

Much appreciated - thanks.

Bob
Posted By: gibson Re: Another Story To Tell - 10/06/13 11:57 AM
What can I say that hasn't been said before.
Another excellent production,

keep them coming!!

Alyn
Posted By: rsdean Re: Another Story To Tell - 10/06/13 02:27 PM
John,

Thanks for taking the time to listen and comment.

Bob
Posted By: rsdean Re: Another Story To Tell - 10/06/13 04:26 PM
Alyn,

Very appreciated - thanks!

Bob
Posted By: Guitarhacker Re: Another Story To Tell - 10/07/13 11:26 AM
Again, very much in the line of Dylan. I like it


The chord prog on the 1st 3 lines of each verse reminded me instantly of
Don't Worry, Be Happy.....

I would have liked to hear it go to a chorus somewhere but that doesn't seem to be the way you write. Oh well.....
Posted By: tommyad Re: Another Story To Tell - 10/07/13 12:31 PM
Bob, This one was well recorded and sung. Great line--Another story. I think Herb makes a good point about a chorus of some kind. However the song stands on it's own very well. Nice work. Tom
Posted By: rsdean Re: Another Story To Tell - 10/07/13 05:23 PM
Herb,

Thanks - every once in a while I write a chorus... LOL!

Bob
Posted By: rsdean Re: Another Story To Tell - 10/07/13 05:23 PM
Tommy,

Thanks - appreciate the listen and feedback.

Bob
Posted By: dani48 Re: Another Story To Tell - 10/07/13 08:48 PM
Hi,Bob !

It may or may not have been said,
but I am very impressed especially
with the poetic talent that is so
abundant on this site. Your tune
was no exception to me. Brilliant
lyrics to a good tune, what could
be better ??

Cheers
Dani
Posted By: rsdean Re: Another Story To Tell - 10/08/13 02:10 AM
Dani,

That's very kind of you. Thank you for listening.

Bob
Posted By: PgFantastic Re: Another Story To Tell - 10/08/13 04:42 AM
Some excellent lyrics and the production is outstanding. thanks for sharing!



My Music
Posted By: rsdean Re: Another Story To Tell - 10/08/13 09:58 AM
Robert,

Thanks - I really appreciate that.

Bob
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