Here's a song called
All The Broken Bones.
BIAB RTs - recorded and mixed in GarageBand.
Thanks for listening!
Bob
Loved it. Excellent lyrics
Scott,
Thanks - much appreciated.
Bob
As usual, you're second to none when it comes to writing evocative lyrics.
Nice.
Hi, Bob !:))
Seems to me you are
depicting the weather
up here North ! :))
When the rain turns to
ice we´ll really get
broken bones up here !!!!:))
I must join in with David
regarding your lyrics !!
They´re just great !!:)))
Cheers
Dani
Hi Bob
I am not too sure what is going on with my internet but it keeps stopping and I don’t seem to be able to get a good listen. I liked what I heard though and the lyrics are thought provoking
David,
Thanks - very kind of you. I appreciate that.
BTW, I'm following your Vocaloid progress - it's very impressive - looking forward to more.
Bob
Thanks Josie!
Bob
Dani,
LOL! Thanks. Much appreciated.
Bob
Thanks Joanne - hope your internet problems get sorted. Hope to catch you on StreetJelly one of these days.
Bob
channeling Bob Dylan again?
Very cool stuff there.
No major crits with this, .....
......
Excellent job.
Hey Herb,
LOL! Thanks - appreciate the listen.
Bob
Hi Bob,
This a very inventive arrangement! It sounds like you have a lot of fun putting this one together. It's a great hook. I agree with David. I, too, found these lyrics very evocative. Thanks for giving me the opportunity to have a listen.
All the best,
Noel
Bob, this one kind of reminds of the sound that the Band used to get on some of their records. The organ and harmonica really add to the vibe. Nice production and great lyrical content. Take care, Tom
"Imagery, in a literary text, is an author's use of vivid and descriptive language to add depth to their work. It appeals to human senses to deepen the reader's understanding of the work."
That's what the dictionary says. I say "you have it in abundance!" Yep, as used by other responders to this post "evocative" comes to mind. Nice endeavor all the way around.
Noel,
Thanks - I always appreciate your views.
Bob
Tommy,
Thanks very much. I love The Band. Appreciate the kind feedback.
Bob
Janice & Bud,
Thanks so much for listening and for your kind comments. It is very appreciated.
Bob
Bob,
Well I'll 2nd whats already been said... Great evocative lyrics, but then your a master of that!
Nice job,
Greg
Strong lyrics Bob, you can write man!
Later,
Greg,
Thanks. So kind of you - I really appreciate that.
Bob
Danny,
Thanks for listening and for the compliment - much appreciated.
Bob
Bob,
A nice driving feel to that. The organ was a good choice.
Thought the drums could come up some to fit the drive of the guitar strum.
Cool title.
floyd
Floyd,
Thanks - appreciate the listen and feedback.
Bob
this is the second song of yours that I've heard. count me as a fan
Gruverider,
Thanks - very appreciated.
Bob
hi bob kept me engaged all the way well done all has been said eric
Eric,
Thanks very much for your feedback.
Bob