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Posted By: rsdean All The Broken Bones - 11/11/13 02:08 AM
Here's a song called All The Broken Bones.

BIAB RTs - recorded and mixed in GarageBand.

Thanks for listening! smile

Bob
Posted By: Scott C Re: All The Broken Bones - 11/11/13 01:14 PM
Loved it. Excellent lyrics
Posted By: rsdean Re: All The Broken Bones - 11/11/13 04:19 PM
Scott,

Thanks - much appreciated.

Bob
Posted By: dcuny Re: All The Broken Bones - 11/11/13 11:31 PM
As usual, you're second to none when it comes to writing evocative lyrics.

Nice.
Posted By: Sundance Re: All The Broken Bones - 11/12/13 04:35 AM
Nice production too Bob.
Posted By: dani48 Re: All The Broken Bones - 11/12/13 08:29 AM
Hi, Bob !:))

Seems to me you are
depicting the weather
up here North ! :))
When the rain turns to
ice we´ll really get
broken bones up here !!!!:))
I must join in with David
regarding your lyrics !!
They´re just great !!:)))


Cheers
Dani
Posted By: JoanneCooper Re: All The Broken Bones - 11/12/13 08:52 AM
Hi Bob

I am not too sure what is going on with my internet but it keeps stopping and I don’t seem to be able to get a good listen. I liked what I heard though and the lyrics are thought provoking
Posted By: rsdean Re: All The Broken Bones - 11/12/13 11:00 AM
David,

Thanks - very kind of you. I appreciate that.

BTW, I'm following your Vocaloid progress - it's very impressive - looking forward to more.

Bob
Posted By: rsdean Re: All The Broken Bones - 11/12/13 11:01 AM
Thanks Josie! smile

Bob
Posted By: rsdean Re: All The Broken Bones - 11/12/13 11:01 AM
Dani,

LOL! Thanks. Much appreciated.

Bob
Posted By: rsdean Re: All The Broken Bones - 11/12/13 11:03 AM
Thanks Joanne - hope your internet problems get sorted. Hope to catch you on StreetJelly one of these days.

Bob
Posted By: Guitarhacker Re: All The Broken Bones - 11/12/13 01:16 PM
channeling Bob Dylan again?

Very cool stuff there.

No major crits with this, ..... cool ......

Excellent job.
Posted By: rsdean Re: All The Broken Bones - 11/12/13 08:59 PM
Hey Herb,

LOL! Thanks - appreciate the listen. smile

Bob
Posted By: Noel96 Re: All The Broken Bones - 11/13/13 08:04 AM
Hi Bob,

This a very inventive arrangement! It sounds like you have a lot of fun putting this one together. It's a great hook. I agree with David. I, too, found these lyrics very evocative. Thanks for giving me the opportunity to have a listen.

All the best,
Noel
Posted By: tommyad Re: All The Broken Bones - 11/13/13 01:23 PM
Bob, this one kind of reminds of the sound that the Band used to get on some of their records. The organ and harmonica really add to the vibe. Nice production and great lyrical content. Take care, Tom
Posted By: Janice & Bud Re: All The Broken Bones - 11/13/13 10:11 PM
"Imagery, in a literary text, is an author's use of vivid and descriptive language to add depth to their work. It appeals to human senses to deepen the reader's understanding of the work."

That's what the dictionary says. I say "you have it in abundance!" Yep, as used by other responders to this post "evocative" comes to mind. Nice endeavor all the way around.
Posted By: rsdean Re: All The Broken Bones - 11/13/13 11:34 PM
Noel,

Thanks - I always appreciate your views.

Bob
Posted By: rsdean Re: All The Broken Bones - 11/13/13 11:35 PM
Tommy,

Thanks very much. I love The Band. Appreciate the kind feedback.

Bob
Posted By: rsdean Re: All The Broken Bones - 11/13/13 11:37 PM
Janice & Bud,

Thanks so much for listening and for your kind comments. It is very appreciated.

Bob
Posted By: Achordocaster Re: All The Broken Bones - 11/14/13 08:18 PM
Bob,
Well I'll 2nd whats already been said... Great evocative lyrics, but then your a master of that! grin

Nice job,

Greg
Posted By: Danny C. Re: All The Broken Bones - 11/14/13 08:27 PM
Strong lyrics Bob, you can write man!

Later,
Posted By: rsdean Re: All The Broken Bones - 11/15/13 12:09 AM
Greg,

Thanks. So kind of you - I really appreciate that.

Bob
Posted By: rsdean Re: All The Broken Bones - 11/15/13 12:10 AM
Danny,

Thanks for listening and for the compliment - much appreciated.

Bob
Posted By: floyd jane Re: All The Broken Bones - 11/15/13 04:38 AM
Bob,

A nice driving feel to that. The organ was a good choice.
Thought the drums could come up some to fit the drive of the guitar strum.

Cool title.

floyd
Posted By: rsdean Re: All The Broken Bones - 11/15/13 12:51 PM
Floyd,

Thanks - appreciate the listen and feedback.

Bob
Posted By: gruverider Re: All The Broken Bones - 11/16/13 10:05 PM
this is the second song of yours that I've heard. count me as a fan
Posted By: rsdean Re: All The Broken Bones - 11/17/13 12:49 AM
Gruverider,

Thanks - very appreciated.

Bob
Posted By: F.M.M. Re: All The Broken Bones - 11/17/13 04:57 PM
hi bob kept me engaged all the way well done all has been said eric
Posted By: rsdean Re: All The Broken Bones - 11/17/13 06:17 PM
Eric,

Thanks very much for your feedback.

Bob
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