Hi again, here is a new composition, I have tried to take on board the comments from my last post, so see what you think.
The Instruments are mostly Sample Tank, Guitars are BinB as are Strings etc.
Thanks
Link https://soundcloud.com/royg1707/fragilechildrenfin

Great song, great sung, great mix ready for publishing,
could you give more production details, have you used a pro studio)

Hi Royg,

nice ballad. Well sung.
Thanks for sharing.

Guenter

Thanks for your comments, no I haven't used a pro studio, I have Cubase for production and a small home set-up.
Thanks again.

Beautiful work, good clear vocal and I love the piano; thanks for sharing!

Very large sound. I might have dialed the overall reverb and those ahhs back just a bit but that's all purely subjective.

I like the way the arrangement builds. The vocal is really pretty with that wonderful Cat Stevens quality you have in your voice and it's a lovely message song.


Josie

royg -

A cool sound - pretty song. The piano and strings work well to deliver the message. When the strings drop out about 2:10 and when they come back in at about 2:30 it's a bit abrupt. A fade out and then fade back in there would be nice - a little thing.

Enjoyable.

floyd

Thank you for the comments, it's nice to get other peoples views, I will re visit the reverb and have a listen.
Thanks again.

Thanks for the comments, I did think about fade in but didn't get around to it, maybe I will give it another go and see how it sounds.

Thanks again.

Nice feel!! Love the vocal and arrangement! Very cool. Take care. Greg

Thanks a lot for listening.

Hi, Roy !:))


This is a really nice tune
with stellar vocals !:))
IMO there is a little of
Neil Diamond in your voice
but not too much (chuckle) !!
I enjoyed this one very much !!:))


Cheers
Dani

Roy,

I immediately thought Neil Diamond, too.

Very nice. Thanks!

Nice song, the vocal is very good. I like the melody. Nice big sounding mix. I enjoyed it. Tom

Very, very nice! I really like this song and performance. I agree with the Neil Diamond comparison, and like Josie, I can hear a little Cat Stevens, when you are singing more softly. A good combination.

Steve

Wow really enjoyed this song. Love your voice. Well done. Very high quality

Roy,

This was a pleasure to hear. A very heartfelt performance coupled with musicianship on all levels - writing, arranging, presentation and production.

More please!

All the best,
Noel

Hi Roy
Very nice song with some heartfelt lyrics. Right up my street. Good one.

Very pro sounding production on this one. The mix is very supporting of the vocal. Nice work!

Thanks for your comments, always appreciated.

Just had a listen to The Song That Never Was, really nice, great vocal and backing vocal, the Lady sounds great, (might have liked the vocal a bit louder), but nice sound and song.
Thanks

Had a listen to My Tunes, really liked them, thanks.

Just found your Soundcloud page, very nice, great Country voice and sound.
I like.
Thanks

Thanks so much, glad you liked the song.

Thank you for listening, not sure what Neil would think, but glad you liked the song.
Thanks again.

Thanks, been looking for your music but can't seem to find the link.Can you help?

Thanks, glad you liked the song, tried the music link on your reply. but page not available, will try again later.

Just been listening to your Soundcloud posts, very nice, really enjoyed the music. Thanks.

Thanks for your comments, I had a look at your Vimeo sight, very nice, very well done, some good work.

Thanks for listening, had a listen/look at Walk the change on Youtube, liked it a lot, nice vocals, well structured song, nice Video.

Been listening to your posts on Soundcloud, very nice, sweet vocals and production, will listen some more.
Thanks