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Posted By: jgriffith Brilliant Things - 04/27/14 03:16 AM
Hello!

I'm just looking for some feedback on my song with the help of Band in a Box of course! Thanks in advance.

https://soundcloud.com/john-griffith/brilliant-things
https://soundcloud.com/john-griffith/brilliant-things-slow-rock-remix
Posted By: sixchannel Re: Brilliant Things - 04/27/14 07:21 AM
Originally Posted By: jgriffith
Hello!

I'm just looking for some feedback on my song with the help of Band in a Box of course! Thanks in advance.

https://soundcloud.com/john-griffith/brilliant-things


Nice track, John.
What was you and what was Band In A Box, then it could be discussed further?
What tracks and Style created the framework for example.
Would sound better at the start if you trimmed the "count in" off.
Cheers
Ian
Posted By: RichMac Re: Brilliant Things - 04/27/14 10:27 AM
Thoroughly enjoyable!
Posted By: jgriffith Re: Brilliant Things - 04/27/14 02:13 PM
Thanks for the input! It's really appreciated! I updated the song without the count-in.

The playing wasn't me, I composed it on computer and used baib for refinement.

Tracks used were:

Bass: Bass, Electric
Piano: Banjo
Drums: Mandolin
Guitar: Guitar, Acoustic
Strings: Fiddle

I used the Amplitube Rock-country ElBass style... It seems to sound much better.
Posted By: boehm Re: Brilliant Things - 04/27/14 02:25 PM
Hi John,

and you cleaned the ending!
Welcome to the forum.
Enjoyable tune.
Where have the drums gone?

Guenter
Posted By: sixchannel Re: Brilliant Things - 04/27/14 03:14 PM
Originally Posted By: jgriffith
Thanks for the input! It's really appreciated! I updated the song without the count-in.

The playing wasn't me, I composed it on computer and used baib for refinement.

Tracks used were:

Bass: Bass, Electric
Piano: Banjo
Drums: Mandolin
Guitar: Guitar, Acoustic
Strings: Fiddle

I used the Bluegrass Band 8th based style


Nicely cleaned up, John
I guess you put the Mandolin where the drums were is what you are saying?
cheers
ian
Posted By: jgriffith Re: Brilliant Things - 04/27/14 04:54 PM
Correct
Posted By: jgriffith Re: Brilliant Things - 04/27/14 04:57 PM
I will add drums shortly... thanks!
Posted By: Greg Johnson Re: Brilliant Things - 04/27/14 05:18 PM
Really nice track. Would make great film music! Would be interesting to hear a more natural classical piano sound. Good stuff!! Take care. Greg
Posted By: jgriffith Re: Brilliant Things - 04/27/14 06:25 PM
Thanks for the input Greg! I wouldn't mind hearing it in a movie too... How?

I will put out some more score's similar to this one... I have lots!
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