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Posted By: CeeDee Air 2 - 05/18/14 09:21 PM
A little tune that came to me whilst tinkering on the piano, now arranged in BIAB for piccolo, guitar, piano, accordion viola and violin.

https://soundcloud.com/cd-songs/air-2

Hope you like it : smile

Chris
Posted By: dani48 Re: Air 2 - 05/18/14 11:08 PM
Hi, Chris !!:))


How nice a tune this is !:))
Really beautiful progressions
all through !:)) I enjoyed it
much !:))

Cheers
Dani
Posted By: Al-David Re: Air 2 - 05/19/14 12:24 AM
Hi!

Nice to "meet" you! Very pretty! We really enjoyed thew relaxing aura of this one. Best to you ...

Al & Di
Posted By: Greg Johnson Re: Air 2 - 05/19/14 02:13 AM
Really pretty music! Would have liked to hear a different lead instrument (more organic and natural) carry the melody (which is beautiful). Try a string instrument or solo horn for the melody! Nice stuff! Take care. Greg
Posted By: Charlie Fogle Re: Air 2 - 05/19/14 03:36 AM
Nice tune and good arrangement. I enjoyed it.

Regards,

Charlie
Posted By: floyd jane Re: Air 2 - 05/19/14 01:37 PM
Very pretty song, Chris. And a good mix - floyd
Posted By: olemon Re: Air 2 - 05/19/14 01:54 PM
Fitting title. I'm not sure about the accordion (or organ) in the intro, and there might be a couple spots where the bass is playing a wrong note...I think. At about 1:03 is one such place. Hopefully others will listen and give you some more feedback.

Very enjoyable melody, just may need a few edits to let it shine. You can get help with that in the other forums.

It sure brought images of England to me, and that was before I noticed your location:)
Posted By: boehm Re: Air 2 - 05/19/14 04:47 PM
Hi Chris,

Pretty tune and good arrangement.
I enjoyed it.

Guenter
Posted By: Digital Angel Re: Air 2 - 05/20/14 12:15 AM
Hi there! Had a listen and was pleasantly surprised. If you can get the flute to somehow change to a Irish tinwhistle then you could develop this into a cool piece.



DA...
Posted By: RichMac Re: Air 2 - 05/20/14 06:05 AM
Like it! Could imagine this on bagpipes somehow. Cheers.
Posted By: JoanneCooper Re: Air 2 - 05/20/14 09:24 AM
Hi CeeDee
Welcome!
I enjoyed the lead instrument. It was so pure.
Kind regards
Posted By: Janice & Bud Re: Air 2 - 05/20/14 04:34 PM
A lovely tune. The mx is very supportive. I really enjoyed listening.

J
Posted By: Scott C Re: Air 2 - 05/21/14 01:22 AM
Beautiful song. Excellent tinkering. Melody is excellent
Posted By: MarioD Re: Air 2 - 05/21/14 01:36 AM
This is a really beautiful song. I like the instrumentation you have now.

If I could make one suggestion it would be to add some realism to the piccolo. By realism I mean have some volume changes like when one starts to blow into the piccolo and a fad out when one runs out of air. That coupled with some vibrato in spots would make it sound more real IMHO.

But even if you don’t change a thing this is one great song.
Posted By: tommyad Re: Air 2 - 05/21/14 04:24 PM
Chris, Nice melody and a relaxing listen. Thanks for posting. Tom
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