Hi, friends !

My old girlfriend was over and I could not help
falling for her charm ! We had a romance on
a spiritual level and when she left me I felt
a longing I have not felt since my wife died !
This prompted me to write down this little tune
for her

http://app.box.com/s/ztvwvv6rtln32go0y0m7


Style:POPWLZ3STY Pedal Steel and Mandolin
Instruments:

Bass: 1178, Bass Elec
Piano: 1187, Pedal Steel
Drums: Realdrums Poprockwaltz Hat 2 Ride 2
Guitar: 1182, Strumming AC guitar
Strings; 1186, Mandolin
Soloist: 51, Synth Strings 1

Recorded and mixed with Mixcraft 6
Vocals thru zoom H4n

Lyrics:

IN SORROW AND PAIN (By Dani)

In sorrow and pain
I stroll in the rain
my darling has left me
alone I will be
so, please do have mercy
mercy me
for being so blue
longing for you
my sweetheart , for you !

I´m under your spell
I stumbled and fell
I fell for you darling
I can hardly sing
how much I do love you
love you true
and now I can´t cry
my eyes are all dry
from crying goodbye

You came to me my dreamgirl from the past
I was a fool to think that the glow could last

In sorrow and pain
I stroll in the rain
my darling has left me
alone I will be
so, please do have mercy
mercy me
for being so blue
longing for you
my sweetheart , for you !

© Dani Lindroos 2014

Very good work in all areas, like the falsetto part; thanks for sharing!

Another sweet tune! Like your last one, I'm hearing a little bit of a Bacharach vibe, which I love! You are really on a roll. Take care. Greg

I couldn't state it any better than the above. You are, indeed, on a roll -- an inspired roll at that. keep rollin'!!!!

Hi Dani. The arragement really suits your deep voice. Nicely mixed and the harmonies sound great. Cheers.

Dani,

You are such a romantic writing straight from your heart. Such pretty chord progression, Like the low register to high and the sweet harmonies. I think Greg hit it with the Bacharach vibe.

Josie

A SUPER BIG +1

I always enjoy your tunes! Superb job.

Regards,

Charlie

Hi, Robert !:))


Thank you for your most kind
comments ! If we only could
do a gospel like Oh Happy Day
together but it is a copyrighted
song !

Cheers
Dani

Hi, Greg !!:))


...and thank you for your most kind words!
Yea I think you are right I love
chord like major 7ths, 9ths 11ths and 13eens !:))

Cheers
Dani

Hi, Janice & Bud !:))


Thank you both so much for your
most kind words !:)) I gladly
admit I am on a roll whatever that
really means ?

I´ve learned to enjoy every little
gesture from my former girlfriend
she really is a wonderful woman
as was my wife too ! I have been
blessed !:))

Cheers
Dani

Thank you Richard !


I feel humbled by your kind
words ! :))

Cheers
Dani

Hi, Josie !:))


I am a romantic, I have always been
one and will always stay one too (chuckle) !
I am so glad you liked the tune,Josie, and
you are perfectly right in this tune coming
straight from my heart ! I must confess
I love her but so does her husband and so
I am the one to suffer !:))

Having been trhu the mill I can take it,though !

Thank you Josie for your most kind words
truly appreciated !:))

Cheers
Dani

Dear Mario !


I feel humbled by your
most kind expression !:))
If I only had better
equipment I might be able
to enhance my tunes even more?

Cheers
Dani

Hey, Charlie !


You are being just way too
kind with me, but as you surely
know, I do appreciate your nice
words truly much !

Cheers
Dani

Hi Dani,

I couldn't say it better than Josie:
"You are such a romantic writing straight from your heart. Such pretty chord progression, Like the low register to high and the sweet harmonies. I think Greg hit it with the Bacharach vibe."
Go on writing.

Guenter

Dani, Another good one. Romantic writing at it's best. Keep them coming. Tom

Hi, Guenter ol´friend !:))

I am most humbled by your
most kind words !:))


Cheers
Dani

Dear Tommy !

You know they say that
the best love songs are written
with a broken heart ? Well....my
songs may not be good but my heart
surely is broken !:))

Thank you so much for
your most kind words !

Cheers
Dani

another song well written and performed!

much enjoyed!

Dani,

As Josie said... "straight from the heart". You know no other way...

floyd

Hi Dani,

A very sweet and romantic song.
We were wondering..... did you actually sing it in her presence?
Curious to know what her response might be

Hi, Lawrence ! (It was Lawrence, yes, no ?)

Forgive me if I keep forgetting
names due to my brain surgery !
I thank you so much for your
most kind words,it warmed me inside !

Cheers
Dani

Hi, Floyd, my friend !

You are always so nice to me !
You´ve been so from the day I came
to this site ! I thank you for
that and also for your most kind
words regarding my writing.
It would be an honor and a great
pleasure to meet with you one day !:))


Cheers
Dani

Hi, Rob and Anne-Marie !:))


Dear friends, I wrote
this song after she left
me so I could not sing it
to her straight away, but
I got an email from her
yesterday with these words:

" I am still crazy after you
after all these years"

and that line from her got
me flying all over the walls !!!
Have not been able to sleep
much last night !

Cheers
Dani

Dani

Another one straight from the heart. You are a gifted writer. It was also great to learn of your new-kindled friendship opportunity

Keep safe

Trevor

Hi, Trevor !:))


You are way too kind with me Trevor !
I feel humbled by your assessment
and I am as happy as ever for
being given a second chance !


Cheers
Dani

Hi Dani,

What else there to say that hasn't already been said? We agree completely with all that has been said. That rich baritone voice of yours is perfect. This reminds me of something that Burt Bacharach might have written and then Engelbert Humperdink might have sung.

As always, you sound terrific and your music is always sweet and full of passion. Great job!

Alan & Di

Hi, Al & Di !:))

Thank you so much for
your most kind words !
It is the chords that
might remind you of Bacharach
as he surely uses a lot of
major 7ths, 9ths, m9:s and sus chords
too !:))

Cheers
Dani

Your vocals get better and better Dani. Nice production and mix.

'and now I can´t cry
my eyes are all dry
from crying goodbye'

Heavy stuff straight from the heart.

Hi, Scott !:))


You are way too nice with
this old crooner but you know
that I am truly delighted by
your most kind comments !:))

Cheers
Dani