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Posted By: gibson As long as you make love - 07/25/14 03:16 PM
Two versions of the song here, one with and one without Real tracks.The video was done about 3 years ago without RTs and I only remembered it when I re-did the song with RTs a week or so ago!! Recorded in my studio with a webcam and Serif Music plus8
It started as my best man's speech for my now dear departed mate Albert! A few pleasantries and thanks, a quick mention of how beautiful Sian (his bride) was and then ended with me saying I only speak for [song title} except I personalised it for Albert and I sat down to tumultuous applause and many insults from Albert laugh .
Sian agreed tho grin
As long as you make love

when i was a little boy
my father said to me
as he took me in his arms
and placed me on his knee
dont prevaricate remember what I say
and you wont have any trouble
until your dieing day

words will come and words will go
as thoughts just disappear
out your mouth into those ears
as you become on show
so dont prevaricate remember what I said
and you wont have any trouble
till youre dead

years they come and years they go
so fast that you loose count
it takes of bits and puts bits there
as you loose sight of your knees
but theres something really bugging me
its been running through my mind
see im damned if i can remember what my father said

i racked my brains i shook my mind
i turned it inside out
a thunder cracked as it started to rain
and it opened from above
then from inside my brain suddenly got what he meant
only speak for as long as you make love



RealTracks in song: ~1204:Bass, Acoustic, GypsyJazzBallad Sw 110
RealTracks in song: 1461:Guitar, Acoustic, Rhythm GypsyJazzWaltzJohn Sw 200
RealTracks in song: ~1098:Guitar, Acoustic, Rhythm JazzSwingFreddie Sw 190
RealTracks in song: ~374:Guitar, Acoustic, Strumming Hank Sw 190

I will find the original BIAB file and post the midi stuff later.

Enjoy

Alyn
Posted By: dani48 Re: As long as you make love - 07/25/14 03:33 PM
Hi, Alyn !:))


I liked your tune and your video !
You are a master of words also I see !:))
I had to use google translate for the
word prevaricate, but it fits the story
that you tell so brilliantly here !:))


Cheers
Dani

PS Yes, and I agree with your father !!!!(lol) !
Posted By: RnAM Re: As long as you make love - 07/25/14 04:40 PM
Hello Alyn,

nice! This song kind of reminds us of 'good company' from Queen. They use a ukulele there, which actually would also
suit this song very fine.
The RT version definitely sounds a lot clearer than the original.

Keep up the good work,
R & AM
Posted By: PgFantastic Re: As long as you make love - 07/25/14 05:48 PM
Excellent work! Thanks for sharing!
Posted By: JoanneCooper Re: As long as you make love - 07/25/14 06:02 PM
Alyn. What fun! It is great that you have two versions of the song and that you are giving them both to us to sample! I absolutely love the video. I am trying to do videos for all my original stuff and this definately gives me some ideas!
Posted By: Greg Johnson Re: As long as you make love - 07/25/14 06:27 PM
Cool song!! Love the unconventional chord progression for this style. Very unique and creative work! Take care. Greg
Posted By: gibson Re: As long as you make love - 07/26/14 03:59 AM
Dani,
thanks for the praise about being a master of words, it takes one to know one cool
Politicians should listen to this song laugh LOL

All the best
Alyn
Posted By: gibson Re: As long as you make love - 07/26/14 04:02 AM
Good company by Queen.

Now THERE'S a compliment...thank you, I like the early Queen albums.
Both versions certainly show how good RTs are

Thanks for listening

Alyn
Posted By: gibson Re: As long as you make love - 07/26/14 04:04 AM
PgFantastic,

Thanks for listening. I really appreciate the praise coming from a great songwriter such as you!

Alyn
Posted By: gibson Re: As long as you make love - 07/26/14 04:10 AM
JosieC

This is the only video I have made that I felt confident enough to post. But I will have a go at another with praise coming from a video artiste such as you. (I have watched some of your videos on your website)
I look forward to seeing the ideas you borrow LOL

thank you
Alyn
Posted By: gibson Re: As long as you make love - 07/26/14 04:15 AM
Thanks a lot for your kind comment Greg.
The initial chords were reasonably simple and I had to work to get all those passing chords and can only thank BIAB for teaching me song structure, leading chordal voices and sequences

have a good day

Alyn
Posted By: Charlie Fogle Re: As long as you make love - 07/26/14 07:08 AM
Hi Alyn. Great song. I really enjoyed it and quite a remarkable job on the video too. As another said earlier, very unique.

Regards,

Charlie
Posted By: Skyline Re: As long as you make love - 07/26/14 08:17 AM
That is an amazingly catchy song! Well done Alyn.

John
Posted By: boehm Re: As long as you make love - 07/26/14 01:59 PM
Hi Alyn,

it is fun to listen and to watch the video.
Excellent work.

Guenter
Posted By: floyd jane Re: As long as you make love - 07/26/14 03:27 PM
Alyn,

Nice job on that. Good mix.

The video was fun to watch.

Pondering the logic - how your conclusion was drawn...

Enjoyed.

floyd
Posted By: Al-David Re: As long as you make love - 07/26/14 06:58 PM
Hi Alyn,

Definitely catchy! Amazing, the difference with Real Tracks. Great song and very well performed. We enjoyed our listen a lot .. both versions! best to you,

Alan & Di
Posted By: tommyad Re: As long as you make love - 07/26/14 08:53 PM
Alyn, I agree this definitely catchy. The real tracks sound good. It's well mixed and well sung. I enjoyed it. Tom
Posted By: RichMac Re: As long as you make love - 07/27/14 03:17 AM
Hi Alyn. Very enjoyable song and video. Heaps of imagination. Had to look up prevaricate though. Cheers.
Posted By: gruverider Re: As long as you make love - 07/27/14 04:42 AM
Well that brought a smile to my face!

"as you loose sight of your knees" Ha! love it!

well done!
Posted By: gibson Re: As long as you make love - 07/27/14 05:49 AM
Charlie,
Thank you, the video was fun to make if I remember correctly but it took ages!!

Alyn
Posted By: gibson Re: As long as you make love - 07/27/14 05:52 AM
John,
Thank you, I will pass my thanks to the Band (in a box)

All the best

Alyn
Posted By: gibson Re: As long as you make love - 07/27/14 05:53 AM
Guenter,

Thanks for the kind words.
This song is one of my favourites

Alyn
Posted By: gibson Re: As long as you make love - 07/27/14 05:58 AM
floyd,

Thank you for commenting.

regarding the logic of the conclusion: ummm, I'll pass on that one blush grin

Alyn
Posted By: gibson Re: As long as you make love - 07/27/14 06:00 AM
Al and Di,
This song shows the power of BIAB and RTs. I originally thought midi was better and stubbornly refused to use the RTs. Then one day..... and now I am redoing ALL my songs with RTS and RDrums.

best wished to both of you

Alyn
Posted By: gibson Re: As long as you make love - 07/27/14 06:02 AM
Tom,
glad you enjoyed this little ditty, it was fun to do.

Alyn
Posted By: gibson Re: As long as you make love - 07/27/14 06:07 AM
Cheers Rich,
The lyrics flowed from my mind and I was amazed myself how quickly they made sense and rhymed!!
At last my edumacation, thanks Homer, shines through!

have a good day

Alyn
Posted By: gibson Re: As long as you make love - 07/27/14 06:09 AM
gruverider,

glad I made you laugh!! As we grow old the stomach is the only thing that grows LOL
thanks for commenting

Alyn
Posted By: MarioD Re: As long as you make love - 07/27/14 11:54 PM
This was really good. It made me chuckle - out loud!

A parody of a Beatles song might go like this:
"Suddenly, I am twice the man I used to be,
But I grew horizontally
Oh how I yearn for Yesterday!"
Posted By: gibson Re: As long as you make love - 07/28/14 03:34 PM
MarioD

Glad I made you laugh
As I did at the parody of Yesterday, reminds me of the medical versions we made at college that I cannot repeat on this site LOL

Alyn
Posted By: Noel96 Re: As long as you make love - 08/01/14 07:20 AM
Hi Alyn,

I love the way that you manage to embed humour into your lyrics. It's very skilful in it's "matter of factness". You are a clever songwriter!

As always, I thoroughly enjoyed the listen.

All the best,
Noel
Posted By: Sundance Re: As long as you make love - 08/02/14 07:17 PM
Loved it Alyn - a treat to watch.


Josie
Posted By: gibson Re: As long as you make love - 08/03/14 02:33 AM
Noel
Quote:
You are a clever songwriter!

Thanks very much for the compliment.

take care

Alyn
Posted By: gibson Re: As long as you make love - 08/03/14 02:35 AM
Josie,

Glad you enjoyed!

Thanks for listening

Alyn
Posted By: ROG Re: As long as you make love - 08/03/14 04:02 PM
Hi Alyn.

Absolutely wonderful and yet so different from the stuff you've been doing recently.

The song is GREAT, but it's the VIDEO which really makes it for me. Brilliant.

ROG.
Posted By: gibson Re: As long as you make love - 08/05/14 07:37 AM
ROG,

I have loads in the pipeline as I work on many at the same time and I try to only post different sounding songs.
Glad you enjoyed the video with me in my fat suit LOL.

good to hear from you

Alyn
Posted By: PatrickH Re: As long as you make love - 08/05/14 12:20 PM
Fun song and video. Had to fetch my dictionary but it was worth it!
Posted By: Janice & Bud Re: As long as you make love - 08/05/14 04:38 PM
Clever

Catchy

Cool



Great vid and fun listen!
Posted By: gibson Re: As long as you make love - 08/07/14 02:31 AM
nobilis,

Thanks a lot, glad you now know the meaning of prevaricate LOL.
That word is a result of my posh English up-bringing laugh

Alyn
Posted By: gibson Re: As long as you make love - 08/07/14 02:35 AM
Janice and Bud,

I have spent some time trying to think of a word meaning thank you that begins with a C but all I could think of was
CHEERS

Glad you enjoyed

Alyn
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