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Posted By: Rob4580 The night seems so long - 01/12/15 06:53 AM
Originally Posted By: Rob4580
The night seems so long.

Thanks for listening.

https://soundcloud.com/ironbarkbob/night-seems-so-long

****** Song Summary *************
Title: Untitled Song
File:Untitled Song1.SGU
Key=G , Tempo 120, Length (m:s)=3:04
1 bar intro, 87 bar chorus, from bar 2 to bar 88. Repeat x1 chorus
No Melody
No Soloist track.
Song is saved with Volume, Pan, Reverb, Chorus, Bank0,
Song is saved with bar changes for RealDrums Changes,
Style is _MANPULA.STY (MediumPopCountry Mandolin[120RS])

RealTracks in style: 1268:Bass, Electric, PopUplift Ev16 120
RealTracks in style: 1277:Piano, Acoustic, Rhythm PopUpliftA-B Ev16 120
RealTracks in style: 1270:Guitar, Electric, Rhythm PopUpliftSyncMuted Ev16 120
RealTracks in style: 1948:Mandolin, Rhythm PopUpliftingAndy Ev16 120
RealDrums in style: PraiseWorshipUptempo16^1-a:Snare, HiHat, Kick , b:Snare, Ride
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I need to find someone to talk to.
Sit awhile and tell my problems too.

If I had a choice that one would be like you.

Not a Tuesday nor a Wednesday
I'm not one to throw my heart away.

Want to tell you what I'm going through.

I cant hold on.
As the night seems so long

Fill


Cant you listen to my pleading.
Cant you tell my heart is bleeding.

Spare some time for me to lean on you.

What's your point of view what you trying to prove.
Started small but then my problems grew.

I need some help to get you my mind


Posted By: Guitarhacker Re: The night seems so long - 01/12/15 10:54 AM
There's some pretty cool aspects to this. I like the groove of the song....and the mandolin driven aspect to this song...

The lead in the center ....was that a live recording? It was out of tune which distracted from an otherwise melodic song to that point.

I like this song.... it has a good vibe and feel to it.
Posted By: PgFantastic Re: The night seems so long - 01/12/15 11:36 AM
Outstanding! Thanks for sharing!
Posted By: tommyad Re: The night seems so long - 01/12/15 12:31 PM
Originally Posted By: Guitarhacker
There's some pretty cool aspects to this. I like the groove of the song....and the mandolin driven aspect to this song...

The lead in the center ....was that a live recording? It was out of tune which distracted from an otherwise melodic song to that point.

I like this song.... it has a good vibe and feel to it.


+1, I pretty much agree with what Herb says. I enjoyed my listen. Tom
Posted By: Greg Johnson Re: The night seems so long - 01/12/15 01:43 PM
Another nice song! Like the arrangement, the mix, and again the vocal. Well done all around! Take care. Greg
Posted By: Charlie Fogle Re: The night seems so long - 01/12/15 08:34 PM
I'm in agreement with everyone about the great groove of this song. I've listened several times now and this is very enjoyable to listen to. It is completely original but you managed to also make it sound familiar.

A statement about the familiar aspect of the song. The vibe I get is this would also work well as a rockabilly tune in the style of Buddy Holly. That is simply a personal observation and in no way effects that you chose a style to make the song uniquely yours.

It is a terrific song as is and I thought I would share my thoughts on how the song struck me. Thanks for posting.

Charlie
Posted By: floyd jane Re: The night seems so long - 01/12/15 09:40 PM
Rob,

Good to see you back around.

This is very nice. A great groove. Nice vocal. Solid mix.

I enjoyed it. (cool ending, too)

floyd
Posted By: FredM Re: The night seems so long - 01/12/15 10:02 PM
Originally Posted By: Greg Johnson
Another nice song! Like the arrangement, the mix, and again the vocal. Well done all around! Take care. Greg

Agree with Greg, great vocal!
Fred
Posted By: MarioD Re: The night seems so long - 01/14/15 07:29 PM
Originally Posted By: floyd jane
Rob,

Good to see you back around.

This is very nice. A great groove. Nice vocal. Solid mix.

I enjoyed it. (cool ending, too)

floyd


+1

Great job on this one!
Posted By: Rob4580 Re: The night seems so long - 01/15/15 05:24 PM
Hey all many thanks for your kind comments and suggestions.
I also take on board the criticism and suggestions.

Kind regards to all and many thanks for listening.
Rob
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