A little song about some invisible people.


https://90dbband.bandcamp.com/track/everyman



BB Memo forthcoming.....

Great stuff Bob!! Some really touching and creative lyrics. You totally nailed this one (writing, arrangement, production)! Wonderful! Take care. Greg

Bob, Really strong write and great vocal. I like the repeat at the end of the super first verse. Nicely put together. I enjoyed this very,very much. Tom

Hi Bob,

What a great song, fantastic arrangement and brilliant production! Your singing is superb and the harmonies are terrific.

Verse 1 is spectacular. It really pulled me into the song. The way in which you've assembled the list of items in increasing order of importance is perfect! Cole Porter (list song expert) couldn't have done better. And that opening metaphor ... He's an awkward line from an unfinished poem... it contains such a wealth of information and imagery. That's inspired writing indeed.

Truly excellent.

All the best,
Noel

"He's an awkward line
From an unfinished poem
A forgotten man
With no way home
In a crowded world
He is all alone
There but for the grace of God."

Mr. Burke... you blew me away with that.
Every line. Every word.

Loved the arrangement. And I always dig your vocals...

You make this look easy.

floyd

Heart-felt and beautiful! You've got a wonderful presence on the vocals here and the strings have their own magic!

much enjoyed!

Well done. I like how you craft the lyrics on this one.

Lots of folks tend to slip through the cracks of society.... great job and introspective view on this topic.

Beautiful song that's well written, produced and performed. I always look forward to your contributions, they are so well crafted.


Charlie

Outstanding lyrics.
Well sung and produced.
Rob

very touching song Bob.. thought provoking and a little bit disturbing. Music needs to do that to us sometimes. Good job.

Most excellent. When poetic lyrics "work" it is
a wonderful thing. And this is an example
of them working and working wonderfully well.

Like Pat said, "thought provoking."

Sounds like a lot of heart went into both the
write and the vocal.

Mix sounds great on the KRK's.

Kudos!

J&B

Hi Bob,

Great music, beautiful vocals!

Rob and Anne-Marie

A beautiful arrangement, vocals and harmonies. "He's an awkward line from an unfinished poem..." Cool song.

Josie

A very thought provoking song and beautifully performed. Particularly Loved the vocals and lyrics.

Rec

Bob,
Listened to your song.
Much has been said, I couldn't agree more...

Sometimes a song is destined to be an anthem, this song to me, feels like one!

Congratulations,

see you around,

Fred

Greg-

Thanks for the kind words.


Tom- Thanks.


Noel,

Thanks for the kind remarks.



floyd -

Thanks. Glad you liked it.



Lawrence -

Thanks.


Herb -

Thanks for listening and commenting.


Charlie-

Thanks.



Rob-

Thanks very much. “CooloolaCove” ...man, I love that name.

Regards,

Bob



Pat -

Thanks for listening and the kind remarks.




J&B,

Glad you liked it. Every winter I think about the people living on the street.


Regards,

Bob



Rob and Anne-Marie - Thanks for the kind remarks.


Josie -

Thanks.


Rec -

Thank you.


Fred-

Thanks for listening and the kind comments.

Regards,

Bob

Excellent piece of music; lyrics are amazing and the backing track could stand by itself, great vocal as well; thanks for sharing!

Bob,

I really like this song! Very well written lyrics, and I really like your vocals. Powerful message!

Thanks for sharing this one.

Steve

Robert -

Thanks for listening and the kind remarks.

Regards,

Bob

Steve -

Thanks. Hope you are doing well. Good to see you around here.


Regards,

Bob

An inspired write.

A perfect vocal.

An expert production and arrangement.

You brought me out in goosebumps with this one, Bob.

ROG.

Thanks for the kind words ROG. BIAB did all the heavy lifting.


Regards,

Bob

Late to the game on this, and others have beaten me to the superlatives.

The song rings true, and that's no simple feat. Really well done.

David,

Thanks for the kind remarks.

Regards,

Bob

Bob this is outstanding, not only musically but also spiritually!

It does make one think and that is extremely hard to do with music. Your lyrics, vocals, and mix are perfect.

Mario -

Thanks for the kind words. I'm glad that you caught the spiritual aspect.


Regards,

Bob

Well done!

I especially like the opening lyric.


-rob

Rob,

Thanks for the kind remarks. Good to hear from another Garden Stater.


Regards,

Bob