Here is a new song I wrote recently!

I only performed vocals and acoustic guitar but directed the other pieces.

This May be Goodbye (Original) - Youtube

Also, Hello all! I'm new here

Here are the lyrics:

This may be goodbye...
But I know one day you'll come round.
but it's too early to know when.

So please just tell me now,
what's the problem?
I know that I can't do no good but
you said you'd stick around.

I know it's never enough
and I know I just don't get it but
could you come around, just for a while?
and say, goodnight.

Oh you were never
and never will you be
my girl to hold closely.

Oh I thought that it was something,
I thought that we could be.
But oh how wrong I was to think that it was you and me.

I know it's never enough
and I know I just don't get it but
could you come around, just for tonight
and maybe we could play fight?

That'd be nice.

I see you lose your head and
I know I can't get to bed and
I wonder what will happen now.

I can't take this racket
inside my brain.
It's killing me without no pain.

And I know it's never enough and
I know I just don't get it but
could you come around, just for a while?
and maybe we'd even smile.

Thank's for looking!!!

I like this. Cool little tune. Lyrics are neat, albeit in a weird kind of way. But it feels like you've gotten the feel you intended. And I think it all works. Very catchy. Tracks & mix sound good to me.
The only suggestion might be to go for more clarity in the vocal, and the melody wanders some in the first verse. But the song is well written, and please take this as a compliment. I really enjoyed it.