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Posted By: 90 dB While The Music Played - 09/19/15 11:47 AM
A little romantic ballad. Comments welcome.



https://90dbband.bandcamp.com/track/while-the-music-played


While The Music Played

©2015 Robert Randall Burke


While the music played
We danced
Arm in arm we swayed
Entranced
Lost in love again
A lover and a friend.

All the stars aligned
That night
As we twirled beneath
Their light
Lost in love again
Love that never ends.

On the wings of memory
I will fly away
Your sweet love will carry me
Back to a better day.




Song Summary *************
Title: While The Music Played
File:While The Music Played.SGU
Key=C , Tempo 85, Length (m:s)=3:48
No intro. 77 bar chorus, from bar 1 to bar 77. Repeat x1 chorus
No Melody
No Soloist track.
Song is saved with Volume, Pan, Reverb, Chorus, Bank0,
Song is saved with bar changes for Volume Changes,RealDrums Changes,
Style is _CBLGDBR.STY (BckGrndGuit PopDreamyBrent[85RS])

RealTracks in style: 366:Bass, Electric, Country Ev 065
RealTracks in style: ~365:Guitar, Acoustic, Fingerpicking Ev 085
RealTracks in style: 2448:Guitar, Electric, Background, PopDreamyBrent Ev 085
RealTracks in style: 2444:Guitar, Baritone Electric, Background PopCountryBrent Ev 085
RealDrums in Song: NashvilleBrushesCountryPopEv16: a: Sidestick, Brushes b: Brushes





Regards,

Bob
Posted By: gibson Re: While The Music Played - 09/19/15 12:13 PM
Bob,

beautiful!
a lovely tune, and a good arrangement, what was the string sound for the "solo"? 'cos it was really nice.

What a wonderful end!
"while the music played......we danced"

Alyn
Posted By: boehm Re: While The Music Played - 09/19/15 12:53 PM
Hi Bob,

just beautiful!

Guenter
Posted By: Charlie Fogle Re: While The Music Played - 09/19/15 02:46 PM
I'll go with Lovely to keep beautiful from being used up. But it's beautiful too.

You are so on the mark with your songs.

My only personal nit was at 0:16 the guitar seemed to 'sail' in a way that overstated that particular phrase and was different from the rest of the guitar phrasing throughout the song. Very, very minor distraction of a second at most and I'm likely the only one it will ever affect. This was a good fit for your vocals.

Great write, performance and production as your songs always are.

Charlie
Posted By: CeeBee Re: While The Music Played - 09/19/15 03:37 PM
A delightful song Bob. The guitar is sweet and melodic and the strings are just perfect. Are they Realtracks?
Posted By: floyd jane Re: While The Music Played - 09/19/15 05:53 PM
Robert,

You old romantic, you!

It takes real talent to write such a meaningful song using so few words.
Real. Talent.

The production is one of your best! Besides what you listed in the style, there is also piano, organ, strings - all nicely done! The strings solo sounds like you must have played that - or certainly "wrote" it out in MIDI?

Your vocal is terrific... (but I think Johnny Mathis may be looking for this...)

Excellent through and through.

floyd
Posted By: 90 dB Re: While The Music Played - 09/19/15 08:30 PM
Originally Posted By: gibson
Bob,

beautiful!
a lovely tune, and a good arrangement, what was the string sound for the "solo"? 'cos it was really nice.

What a wonderful end!
"while the music played......we danced"

Alyn




Alyn,

Thanks for listening and the kind remarks. the strings were done with Dimension Pro. Hope you are well.


Regards,

Bob
Posted By: 90 dB Re: While The Music Played - 09/19/15 08:31 PM
Originally Posted By: boehm
Hi Bob,

just beautiful!

Guenter




Guenter,

Thanks for listening and the nice words.


Regards,

Bob
Posted By: 90 dB Re: While The Music Played - 09/19/15 08:34 PM
Originally Posted By: c_fogle
I'll go with Lovely to keep beautiful from being used up. But it's beautiful too.

You are so on the mark with your songs.

My only personal nit was at 0:16 the guitar seemed to 'sail' in a way that overstated that particular phrase and was different from the rest of the guitar phrasing throughout the song. Very, very minor distraction of a second at most and I'm likely the only one it will ever affect. This was a good fit for your vocals.

Great write, performance and production as your songs always are.

Charlie





Charlie -

Thanks. I'll have to have a talk with the guitar player on that clunker. grin
Probably should have redone it, but it is what it is.

Hope you are enjoying the most beautiful State in the country. (Oh, how I miss the Upstate!)


Regards,

Bob
Posted By: 90 dB Re: While The Music Played - 09/19/15 08:36 PM
Originally Posted By: sinbad
A delightful song Bob. The guitar is sweet and melodic and the strings are just perfect. Are they Realtracks?




Chris,

Thanks for listening and the kind comment. The guitar is a Real Track, the strings are MIDI.

Regards,

Bob
Posted By: cubanpete Re: While The Music Played - 09/19/15 08:58 PM
Hi Bob, beautiful ballad. Love the arrangement and the chords. Heck! I liked everything!

Mike B.
Posted By: Greg Johnson Re: While The Music Played - 09/19/15 09:28 PM
I love romantic songs, and this is a beauty Bob!! Sweet, simple melody that is instantly memorable. Lovely arrangement and vocal. Should be in a romantic scene of a film. Really tops all the way around!! Take care. Greg
Posted By: PeterF Re: While The Music Played - 09/19/15 09:31 PM
That was pretty. Liked the instrument choices and the additional sounds and as noted elsewhere the strings. An excellent production.
Very nice indeed. (Need a thesaurus when commenting late so as not to be repetitive!)
Posted By: Noel96 Re: While The Music Played - 09/19/15 11:48 PM
Hi Bob,

I've been away from the forum for a while and this was the first song I listened to on my return. Wow! I can't believe that such a beautiful song only needed 61 words to mesmerise me. That really shows just how very competent you are at songwriting and arranging.

Everything about this says "this man really knows what he's doing" to me.

Outstanding!
Noel
Posted By: 90 dB Re: While The Music Played - 09/20/15 07:28 AM
Originally Posted By: floyd jane
Robert,

You old romantic, you!

It takes real talent to write such a meaningful song using so few words.
Real. Talent.

The production is one of your best! Besides what you listed in the style, there is also piano, organ, strings - all nicely done! The strings solo sounds like you must have played that - or certainly "wrote" it out in MIDI?

Your vocal is terrific... (but I think Johnny Mathis may be looking for this...)

Excellent through and through.

floyd






floyd,

Thanks for the listen and kind remarks. I step-sequenced the organ and strings in Sonar X3, with Dim Pro. I'll be glad to get this melody out of my head. Now that it's done, I can move on. grin


Regards,

Bob
Posted By: 90 dB Re: While The Music Played - 09/20/15 07:31 AM
Originally Posted By: cubanpete
Hi Bob, beautiful ballad. Love the arrangement and the chords. Heck! I liked everything!

Mike B.




Mike,

Thanks for listening and the nice comments. BIAB makes it easy.


Regards,

Bob
Posted By: 90 dB Re: While The Music Played - 09/20/15 07:33 AM
Originally Posted By: Greg Johnson
I love romantic songs, and this is a beauty Bob!! Sweet, simple melody that is instantly memorable. Lovely arrangement and vocal. Should be in a romantic scene of a film. Really tops all the way around!! Take care. Greg





Greg,

Thanks. Appreciate the listen and comments.


Regards,

Bob
Posted By: 90 dB Re: While The Music Played - 09/20/15 08:19 AM
Originally Posted By: PeterF
That was pretty. Liked the instrument choices and the additional sounds and as noted elsewhere the strings. An excellent production.
Very nice indeed. (Need a thesaurus when commenting late so as not to be repetitive!)




Peter,

Thanks for the kind remarks. Appreciate it.

Regards,

Bob
Posted By: 90 dB Re: While The Music Played - 09/20/15 08:29 AM
Originally Posted By: Noel96
Hi Bob,

I've been away from the forum for a while and this was the first song I listened to on my return. Wow! I can't believe that such a beautiful song only needed 61 words to mesmerise me. That really shows just how very competent you are at songwriting and arranging.

Everything about this says "this man really knows what he's doing" to me.

Outstanding!
Noel





Hey Noel.

Hope you are well. 61 words? Pretty wordy, I'd say. grin

I haven't been posting much lately either. We've been playing out a lot, and it takes most of our time. We have two weeks off after today, so I'm going to get back in the studio. I've got 28 songs that I'm almost done with – I just lack the discipline to finish them.

Don't miss floyd's newest one – it's a corker (or a “beaut” as you might say Down Under).

Regards,

Bob
Posted By: Guitarhacker Re: While The Music Played - 09/20/15 09:28 AM
I love hearing a minimalist song in a lyrical sense. It really takes a focused effort to convey the story with few words.

Regarding the guitar glitch there at 16 seconds.... MELODYNE. ME can fix that like it was never there.

Loved the DimPro strings. Tasty. I was expecting to hear a minimalist acoustic solo over them however, echoing the melody. It sounded like it started in that direction.

Great job on a lovely tune.
Posted By: Sergio Guarneri Re: While The Music Played - 09/20/15 02:48 PM
Hello

great song, nice sound and voice.
really good work

Hello.
Sergio
Posted By: 90 dB Re: While The Music Played - 09/21/15 08:26 AM
Originally Posted By: Guitarhacker
I love hearing a minimalist song in a lyrical sense. It really takes a focused effort to convey the story with few words.

Regarding the guitar glitch there at 16 seconds.... MELODYNE. ME can fix that like it was never there.

Loved the DimPro strings. Tasty. I was expecting to hear a minimalist acoustic solo over them however, echoing the melody. It sounded like it started in that direction.

Great job on a lovely tune.




Herb,

Thanks for listening and the kind remarks.

Regards,

Bob
Posted By: 90 dB Re: While The Music Played - 09/21/15 08:28 AM
Originally Posted By: Sergio Guarneri
Hello

great song, nice sound and voice.
really good work

Hello.
Sergio




Sergio,

Thanks. I appreciate the listen.


Regards,

Bob
Posted By: AudioTrack Re: While The Music Played - 09/21/15 09:24 AM
Bob
Beautifully delivered. Exquisite in fact. Really enjoyed this one.
Thanks
Trev
Posted By: 90 dB Re: While The Music Played - 09/22/15 06:43 AM
Originally Posted By: VideoTrack
Bob
Beautifully delivered. Exquisite in fact. Really enjoyed this one.
Thanks
Trev





Trevor,

Thanks for listening and the kind remarks.


Regards,

Bob
Posted By: Janice & Bud Re: While The Music Played - 09/22/15 11:09 AM
I say it too often but "perfection is not when there is nothing left
to add but rather when there is nothing left to take away" and your
lyric speaks to that it spades.

It's beautiful and literally had Janice dancing.

J&B
Posted By: Pat Marr Re: While The Music Played - 09/22/15 02:14 PM
Wow Bob...

This song is a testimony to your many skills and talents! You have a lot going on here, and ALL of it works together seamlessly to create a magical and romantic mood!

This song also shows what can be done when someone sequences just the right notes to tie it all together... the strings are the perfect middle ground between the real tracks and the real musician!

As a professional musician, you've learned to recognize what works with audiences... and this arrangement surely takes full advantage of that knowledge. You managed to place everything right in the pocket to create a romantic mood for your whoever is listening.

Great job.. I could listen to this over and over.. (in fact I already have).
Posted By: gruverider Re: While The Music Played - 09/22/15 08:25 PM
A song I wish I would have written.
Posted By: Rob4580 Re: While The Music Played - 09/22/15 08:37 PM
Two thumbs up from me well done.
Rob
Posted By: 90 dB Re: While The Music Played - 09/23/15 09:42 AM
Originally Posted By: Janice & Bud
I say it too often but "perfection is not when there is nothing left
to add but rather when there is nothing left to take away" and your
lyric speaks to that it spades.

It's beautiful and literally had Janice dancing.

J&B




Bud,

Thanks for listening and the kind comments. Glad it got Janice dancing. smile



Regards,

Bob
Posted By: 90 dB Re: While The Music Played - 09/23/15 11:26 AM
Originally Posted By: Pat Marr
Wow Bob...

This song is a testimony to your many skills and talents! You have a lot going on here, and ALL of it works together seamlessly to create a magical and romantic mood!

This song also shows what can be done when someone sequences just the right notes to tie it all together... the strings are the perfect middle ground between the real tracks and the real musician!

As a professional musician, you've learned to recognize what works with audiences... and this arrangement surely takes full advantage of that knowledge. You managed to place everything right in the pocket to create a romantic mood for your whoever is listening.

Great job.. I could listen to this over and over.. (in fact I already have).





Pat -

The check's in the mail. grin
Thanks for the generous comments.


Regards,

Bob
Posted By: 90 dB Re: While The Music Played - 09/23/15 11:28 AM
Originally Posted By: gruverider
A song I wish I would have written.




Lawrence,

I just write what the voices tell me to. grin

Thanks for the kind remark.


Regards,

Bob
Posted By: 90 dB Re: While The Music Played - 09/23/15 11:29 AM
Originally Posted By: Rob4580
Two thumbs up from me well done.
Rob




Rob,

We Roberts have to stick together if we're ever going to take over the world.

Thanks for listening and commenting.


Regards,

Bob
Posted By: eddie1261 Re: While The Music Played - 09/23/15 02:41 PM
Nicely done, sir!!
Posted By: 90 dB Re: While The Music Played - 09/24/15 08:00 AM
Originally Posted By: eddie1261
Nicely done, sir!!




Eddie,

Thanks for listening and the nice comment.


Regards,

Bob
Posted By: tommyad Re: While The Music Played - 09/24/15 01:37 PM
Bob, This sounds fantastic! The strings are stellar. Great write and arrangement. Your vocals seem to keep getting better and better. Very, very enjoyable. Tom
Posted By: 90 dB Re: While The Music Played - 09/24/15 04:40 PM
Originally Posted By: tommyad
Bob, This sounds fantastic! The strings are stellar. Great write and arrangement. Your vocals seem to keep getting better and better. Very, very enjoyable. Tom




Tommy,

Thanks for listening and the kind comments.

Regards,

Bob
Posted By: rsdean Re: While The Music Played - 09/28/15 07:27 PM
Bob,

Excellent song and a great vocal. So well done... I really enjoyed this.

Bob
Posted By: 90 dB Re: While The Music Played - 09/29/15 07:52 AM
Originally Posted By: rsdean
Bob,

Excellent song and a great vocal. So well done... I really enjoyed this.

Bob




Bob,

Thanks for listening and the kind words.

Regards,

Bob
Posted By: Icelander Re: While The Music Played - 09/30/15 11:08 PM
Nice & mellow, just in time for the evening cocoa...bliss! cool
Posted By: 90 dB Re: While The Music Played - 10/01/15 08:38 AM
Originally Posted By: Icelander
Nice & mellow, just in time for the evening cocoa...bliss! cool



Ice -

Thanks for listening and commenting.

Regards,

Bob
Posted By: SRP Re: While The Music Played - 10/01/15 02:00 PM
Very, very nice! I have not heard any of your other songs (as with everyone right now) but if this song is any indication of what is to come I really look forward to hearing what you will offer up in the future. Once again great song!
Sonny
Posted By: 90 dB Re: While The Music Played - 10/01/15 04:08 PM
Originally Posted By: SRP
Very, very nice! I have not heard any of your other songs (as with everyone right now) but if this song is any indication of what is to come I really look forward to hearing what you will offer up in the future. Once again great song!
Sonny




Sonny,

Thanks for listening and the kind remarks. Most of my other songs are in Lithuanian (lietuvių kalba), so I rarely post them.

Regards,

Bob
Posted By: Sundance Re: While The Music Played - 10/01/15 11:04 PM
What a pretty romantic song - it just sweeps me away.
Posted By: 90 dB Re: While The Music Played - 10/02/15 09:30 AM
Originally Posted By: Sundance
What a pretty romantic song - it just sweeps me away.





Josie,

Thanks for listening and the kind remarks.

Regards,

Bob
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