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Posted By: PeterF Broken - 10/04/15 03:57 AM
Broken

https://soundcloud.com/peterf1957/broken

An old (at least 10 years) bluesy piece with a couple of new guitar solos and real tracks.

As usual Leon Vocal & Lyrics
Me Guitar Solos

Band In A Box - Midi Bass, 12 String, Acoustic and Mandolin + drum loops & percussion.
Posted By: Noel96 Re: Broken - 10/04/15 04:16 AM
Peter and Leon,

Very emotive lyrics and excellently matched with music!

These lyrics have some really well-considered verbs that really give the imagery a definite boost. In my mind, I could see the guys heart getting ripped out of his chest. Amazing.

I've never heard a list song like this. Very entertaining.

Regards,
Noel
Posted By: gibson Re: Broken - 10/04/15 04:59 AM
Peter and Leon,

I like the percussion loop a lot, it adds a good feel.

Great guitar work, I like your style of playing a lot!

really enjoyable

Alyn
Posted By: Rob4580 Re: Broken - 10/04/15 05:32 AM
Old is new again. This a has a tribal feel and very moody.
Excellent guitar work. Thanks for listing cobber.
Rob
Posted By: AudioTrack Re: Broken - 10/04/15 08:17 AM
Peter, not much wrong with this. You've really nailed the feel. The solo slots in perfectly. Very well laid out and performed.
Posted By: Charlie Fogle Re: Broken - 10/04/15 08:31 AM
Good idea to bring this one out of the closet. I think this is my favorite from you guys so far. Very well done.


Charlie
Posted By: tommyad Re: Broken - 10/04/15 09:13 AM
Originally Posted By: c_fogle
Good idea to bring this one out of the closet. I think this is my favorite from you guys so far. Very well done.


Charlie
+1, Great overall sound and vibe. Nice choice of the percussion and from loops. Super guitar playing and a fine vocal. Super job! Tom
Posted By: boehm Re: Broken - 10/04/15 10:57 AM
Hi Peter,

another good one! Nice percussion loops. Fantastic guitar lead. My regards to Leon. He did a good job.
An enjoyable listen.

Guenter
Posted By: floyd jane Re: Broken - 10/04/15 11:39 AM
Peter (and Leon)...

Gotta like everything about this one...

Good song, good production and mix, nice vocal, terrific guitar work.

Cool sound - nice use of the loops..

Really enjoyed that.

floyd
Posted By: SRP Re: Broken - 10/04/15 01:40 PM
Hi Peter and Leon! I liked your song Broken and I really enjoyed your guitar playing (you are very good!). The picture that you have of a Strat is that yours? Does the 1957 in your soundcloud address mean that is a 1957 Strat?
If so, I have a story to tell you sometime about a 1957 Strat.
Broken, to me, has an American Indian feel to it.
Sonny
Posted By: RnAM Re: Broken - 10/04/15 04:50 PM
Originally Posted By: Noel96
Peter and Leon,

Very emotive lyrics and excellently matched with music!

These lyrics have some really well-considered verbs that really give the imagery a definite boost. In my mind, I could see the guys heart getting ripped out of his chest. Amazing.

I've never heard a list song like this. Very entertaining.

Regards,
Noel


I agree completely and we'd like to add, that this song has a very nice groove.
Good work!

Rob
Posted By: dcuny Re: Broken - 10/04/15 06:56 PM
Cool song.

Enfeebled? I've gotta give bonus points for that!

Yep, not "much wrong" with this at all. wink
Posted By: PeterF Re: Broken - 10/04/15 08:33 PM
Originally Posted By: Noel96
Peter and Leon,

Very emotive lyrics and excellently matched with music!

These lyrics have some really well-considered verbs that really give the imagery a definite boost. In my mind, I could see the guys heart getting ripped out of his chest. Amazing.

I've never heard a list song like this. Very entertaining.

Regards,
Noel


Thanks Noel - sounds like painful imagery!
Posted By: PeterF Re: Broken - 10/04/15 08:33 PM
Originally Posted By: gibson
Peter and Leon,

I like the percussion loop a lot, it adds a good feel.

Great guitar work, I like your style of playing a lot!

really enjoyable

Alyn



Thanks Alyn it was a nice progression to solo over.
Posted By: PeterF Re: Broken - 10/04/15 08:34 PM
Originally Posted By: Rob4580
Old is new again. This a has a tribal feel and very moody.
Excellent guitar work. Thanks for listing cobber.
Rob

Good on yer mate.
Posted By: PeterF Re: Broken - 10/04/15 08:35 PM
Originally Posted By: VideoTrack
Peter, not much wrong with this. You've really nailed the feel. The solo slots in perfectly. Very well laid out and performed.


Thanks - glad you liked it.
Posted By: PeterF Re: Broken - 10/04/15 08:36 PM
Originally Posted By: c_fogle
Good idea to bring this one out of the closet. I think this is my favorite from you guys so far. Very well done.


Charlie


Thanks Charlie
Posted By: PeterF Re: Broken - 10/04/15 08:36 PM
Originally Posted By: tommyad
Originally Posted By: c_fogle
Good idea to bring this one out of the closet. I think this is my favorite from you guys so far. Very well done.


Charlie
+1, Great overall sound and vibe. Nice choice of the percussion and from loops. Super guitar playing and a fine vocal. Super job! Tom


Always happy to hear another guitarists views!
Posted By: PeterF Re: Broken - 10/04/15 08:37 PM
Originally Posted By: boehm
Hi Peter,

another good one! Nice percussion loops. Fantastic guitar lead. My regards to Leon. He did a good job.
An enjoyable listen.

Guenter


I'll pass on your comments - I think he's due back home(been somewhere near you I think)this month.
Posted By: PeterF Re: Broken - 10/04/15 08:38 PM
Originally Posted By: floyd jane
Peter (and Leon)...

Gotta like everything about this one...

Good song, good production and mix, nice vocal, terrific guitar work.

Cool sound - nice use of the loops..

Really enjoyed that.

floyd


Thanks a lot Floyd - love to hear your take on the songs.
Posted By: PeterF Re: Broken - 10/04/15 08:41 PM
Originally Posted By: SRP
Hi Peter and Leon! I liked your song Broken and I really enjoyed your guitar playing (you are very good!). The picture that you have of a Strat is that yours? Does the 1957 in your soundcloud address mean that is a 1957 Strat?
If so, I have a story to tell you sometime about a 1957 Strat.
Broken, to me, has an American Indian feel to it.
Sonny

Sonny
Thanks
Happy to hear your Strat story alas 1957 refers to my vintage not my guitar which is a fairly recent sunburst model (one of far too many guitars in my wife's opinion).
Posted By: Guitarhacker Re: Broken - 10/04/15 09:23 PM
Interesting tune.

I like the guitar playing and the tone. Nice licks.

Not sure I like the rhythm all that much... but it's obviously a personal thing.

Nice work overall.
Posted By: PeterF Re: Broken - 10/05/15 04:12 PM
Originally Posted By: RnAM
Originally Posted By: Noel96
Peter and Leon,

Very emotive lyrics and excellently matched with music!

These lyrics have some really well-considered verbs that really give the imagery a definite boost. In my mind, I could see the guys heart getting ripped out of his chest. Amazing.

I've never heard a list song like this. Very entertaining.

Regards,
Noel


I agree completely and we'd like to add, that this song has a very nice groove.
Good work!

Rob


Rob
Thanks for those comments.
Posted By: PeterF Re: Broken - 10/05/15 04:13 PM
Originally Posted By: dcuny
Cool song.

Enfeebled? I've gotta give bonus points for that!

Yep, not "much wrong" with this at all. wink


David
Sure is tragic!
Posted By: Greg Johnson Re: Broken - 10/05/15 06:21 PM
Cool song guys!! Some really interesting lyrics. That lower percussion is beefy. Guitar is sweet. I caught kind of Santana vibe. Excellent stuff!! Take care. Greg
Posted By: RichMac Re: Broken - 10/05/15 09:12 PM
Great lyrics vocals and backing. Like everything here. Cheers.
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