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Posted By: rsdean I Can't Imagine A World Without Me - 02/19/16 08:19 PM
Hi All,

Here's a new song - somewhat of a blend of folk, vintage beatbox, and laid back RnB. The inspiration comes from an old friend with a real zest for life and moving forward.

This is called I Can't Imagine A World Without Me.

All BIAB/RTs - recorded & mixed in GarageBand.

Style: BEATBOX.STY
2474: Bass, Acoustic, Held Ev 085
1943: Synth, Rhythm, EuroDance Strings Ev 120
2267: Synth, BellPad, Rhythm 80sPopPads Ev 085
587: Sax, Tenor, 2-Beat Rock Ev 110
RealDrums: UrbanPop Ev GoodGirl 1 Kck1, b:Clap

Thanks for listening! smile

Bob
Posted By: dani48 Re: I Can't Imagine A World Without Me - 02/19/16 08:25 PM
Hi, Bob !

This is one of your
best if not even the
best ! To me this is my
Bob fav henceforth !!!!

Cheers
Dani
Posted By: boehm Re: I Can't Imagine A World Without Me - 02/20/16 12:43 PM
Hi Bob,

interesting lyrics again.
I like the story.
Enjoyable listen.

Guenter
Posted By: David Snyder Re: I Can't Imagine A World Without Me - 02/20/16 01:02 PM

Bob,

This is freaking awesome man! LOVE IT. Wow, I think this one is a masterpiece. Very funny, and extremely well done. I am JEALOUS man. I wish I had written this.

Ok, I'm going back to the piano and I'm gonna do something epic now. You just wait man. I will find a way to resurrect!

smile

Now, but seriously, the highest praise I can give is to say I wish I had thought of that hook. Superb.
Posted By: Charlie Fogle Re: I Can't Imagine A World Without Me - 02/20/16 01:28 PM
It's hard to imagine this forum with you....

I like this one a lot. Good job.
Posted By: Sundance Re: I Can't Imagine A World Without Me - 02/20/16 01:40 PM
Bob,

Your voice and beatbox with the arrangement sound great on this. One of the best mixes I've heard you do.

If I'd only heard this song without reading your description/setup of it first the lyrics switching from third to first person are confusing - otherwise I really like the lyrics. Option one, I think if you'd actually add "and she'd say" or "she said" at least once before your hook tagline the lyrics would be more cohesive. (Option two would be to say "her world" changing the singer to some sort of significant other.) Feel free to use or toss - just trying to be helpful. smile

Great sounding track.
Posted By: Caloo Re: I Can't Imagine A World Without Me - 02/20/16 01:46 PM
Great Bob !
But tell me, is it the girl or you who says "I can't imagine a world whithout me" ?
Pascal
Posted By: rsdean Re: I Can't Imagine A World Without Me - 02/20/16 01:48 PM
Dani, that is much appreciated - thanks!

Bob
Posted By: rsdean Re: I Can't Imagine A World Without Me - 02/20/16 01:49 PM
Guenter, thanks very much. smile

Bob
Posted By: rsdean Re: I Can't Imagine A World Without Me - 02/20/16 01:56 PM
David, LOL! smile

Really, thanks very much. Actually, your music is so good, it's hard not to be inspired when I hear it - you set quite a high bar...

Bob
Posted By: rsdean Re: I Can't Imagine A World Without Me - 02/20/16 03:39 PM
Charlie, that's very kind of you - thanks for listening!

Bob
Posted By: Janice & Bud Re: I Can't Imagine A World Without Me - 02/20/16 04:10 PM
"Dancing next year with her friend
A blonde bombshell on the mend
She was almost like Madonna
A “Vogue” reality
I can’t imagine a world without me"

Man, there's enough great imagery in
here for three or four songs!

As always well sung, arranged and
mixed. And what a cool mix of RT's -
very creative. I'd been waiting on that
"held bass" to show up here. Very effective
use of it.

Cool and thought provoking. We much
enjoyed the spin and will be back!

J&B
Posted By: rsdean Re: I Can't Imagine A World Without Me - 02/20/16 07:56 PM
Hey Josie,

Thanks - appreciate the kind words and thoughts.

When I was putting this together I almost added some additional context, but in the end settled on this version - to me it was more implied than literal. I understand it may not come across that way to everyone. smile

Bob
Posted By: rsdean Re: I Can't Imagine A World Without Me - 02/20/16 08:00 PM
Pascal, thanks very much. It's the woman and/or the positive attitude that she projects. smile

Bob
Posted By: PeterF Re: I Can't Imagine A World Without Me - 02/20/16 09:26 PM
Bob
Really nice. Great sound well composed & well mixed. Enjoyed all aspects of the song.
Posted By: dcuny Re: I Can't Imagine A World Without Me - 02/20/16 11:41 PM
I enjoyed listening - nice groove, and I loved the sax.
Posted By: Greg Johnson Re: I Can't Imagine A World Without Me - 02/21/16 12:43 AM
Quite a departure for you Bob!! BUT a very worthwhile alternative path. Sax could not have been better if played custom. I really liked the electronic/beatbox vibe. Hear a little Lou Reed in this (maybe the sax-"Wild side"). Mix is great! Really like this!! Take care. Greg
Posted By: rsdean Re: I Can't Imagine A World Without Me - 02/21/16 11:54 AM
Janice & Bud, thanks for listening and for the kind words... smile

Bob
Posted By: rsdean Re: I Can't Imagine A World Without Me - 02/21/16 12:16 PM
Peter, much appreciated - thanks!

Bob
Posted By: Caloo Re: I Can't Imagine A World Without Me - 02/21/16 02:20 PM
Originally Posted By: rsdean
Pascal, thanks very much. It's the woman and/or the positive attitude that she projects. smile


Thank you Bob for your clear answer and sorry if my lack of practice of english make me miss out the obviousness wink
Posted By: floyd jane Re: I Can't Imagine A World Without Me - 02/21/16 06:25 PM
"She was all about the town" < cool line.

"Walking sharply west and north
Toward the Macys on 34th" <<<<< love that rhyme! and those lines...

"She was packing up boxes
And getting back on the horse" <<< nice.


Nice grouping of instrument. Original. Works well with the lyric and seems so right for it... great mix...

Well done, Bob.

fj
Posted By: rsdean Re: I Can't Imagine A World Without Me - 02/21/16 10:31 PM
David, thanks very much!

Bob
Posted By: rsdean Re: I Can't Imagine A World Without Me - 02/21/16 10:40 PM
Greg, thanks - much appreciated. Believe it or not, the sax was the longest part of the project. I pieced that together from three separately generated tracks.

Thanks for the Lou Reed reference - another musical hero of mine... smile

Bob
Posted By: rsdean Re: I Can't Imagine A World Without Me - 02/22/16 10:58 AM
Pascal, your English is just fine - thanks again.

Bob
Posted By: SRP Re: I Can't Imagine A World Without Me - 02/22/16 11:20 AM
Cool write Bob. You really have a talent for writing and you did a great job with the BIAB RTs. I enjoyed listening.
Sonny
Posted By: rsdean Re: I Can't Imagine A World Without Me - 02/22/16 02:35 PM
Floyd, thanks - very nice of you to say that - means a lot... smile

Bob
Posted By: rsdean Re: I Can't Imagine A World Without Me - 02/24/16 01:29 PM
Sonny, that's very kind of you - thanks.

Bob
Posted By: Scott C Re: I Can't Imagine A World Without Me - 02/24/16 06:32 PM
Hi Bob
Loved this tune. Very cool lyrics. Intro was very cool. Excellent vocal. Well done
Posted By: RnAM Re: I Can't Imagine A World Without Me - 02/25/16 07:42 PM
Very good song Bob!
Nice rhythm, good lyrics and your voice suits this kinda song very well!

Rob and Anne-Marie
Posted By: rsdean Re: I Can't Imagine A World Without Me - 02/25/16 09:17 PM
Scott, thanks so much! Very appreciated.

Bob
Posted By: Geir B Re: I Can't Imagine A World Without Me - 02/25/16 11:58 PM
Hey there rsdean,
great track, were would we be without Band In A Box, and our home studios,


I wrote this song for my wife,
I also Used Band In A Box but then transferred the audio files into Logic Pro X
to mix the song..

the Band In A Box style is Jazz Funk Breezy Rhythem {75 rs}
which was great for this song, I also added some extra BIAB tracks
acoustic gtr and synth.
you can hear the track at

https://soundcloud.com/geir-borholm/i-live-to-love-you-by-geir-apra-2016

I truly hope you like it,
I've been using BIAB since 1993, and just about every song I've ever recorded
has been with BIAB. to check out other tracks please visit www.geirborholm.com

Keep up the great work rsdean,

Kind Regards
Geir
Posted By: HiroshiK Re: I Can't Imagine A World Without Me - 02/26/16 01:15 AM
Magnificent! I especially like your voice and the mood of the song.

Hiroshi
Posted By: rsdean Re: I Can't Imagine A World Without Me - 02/26/16 07:31 AM
Rob and Anne-Marie, thanks so much - glad you enjoyed it.

Bob
Posted By: rsdean Re: I Can't Imagine A World Without Me - 02/26/16 12:17 PM
Geir, thanks. You have some very cool songs - I like that Bee Gees sound you have... smile

Bob

Hello Bob

I think that's one of your best song.
I like the style you use used and the chord progression.

The start remembers me the beginning of B.Springsteen's "streets of Philadelphia"

Well sung.

Sergio
Posted By: firesong Re: I Can't Imagine A World Without Me - 02/26/16 04:51 PM
Loved the song...it was like Bob Dylan (your voice had that texture and nuance) meeting hip-hop with a little thematic Carly Simon "You're So Vain" crossed with the Eagles "Busy Being Fabulous"...really cool!

Dan
Posted By: rsdean Re: I Can't Imagine A World Without Me - 02/26/16 07:39 PM
Hiroshi, thank you - I really appreciate that.

Bob
Posted By: rsdean Re: I Can't Imagine A World Without Me - 02/27/16 06:39 PM
Sergio, much appreciated - thanks!

Bob
Posted By: rsdean Re: I Can't Imagine A World Without Me - 02/29/16 11:04 AM
Dan, that's very nice of you - thanks so much.

Bob
Posted By: ROG Re: I Can't Imagine A World Without Me - 02/29/16 04:31 PM
Hi Bob.

Now I DID like that!

A hypnotic track with clever phrasing, a great vocal, a super storyline and a classic mix.

I mean, what's not to like.

ROG.
Posted By: rsdean Re: I Can't Imagine A World Without Me - 03/01/16 07:35 AM
ROG, thanks so much! Appreciate the listen and kind words.

Bob
Posted By: rsdean Re: I Can't Imagine A World Without Me - 03/08/16 09:07 PM
Just thought I'd put in a shameless plug for my latest CD/EP (of the same title)... smile

Thanks again for all the nice comments, and to PG Music for making this great technology available.

I Can't Imagine A World Without Me

Bob
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