Hello everybody,

This is my oldest vocaloid song that means my first vocaloid song.
I wrote the song about 2 years ago for a video movie of an amateur director in the same city.
For a long time the vocaloid of Mackintosh version had not been published.
It was at last published about 2 years ago.
I immediately used it for the song.
Now I introduce it to you.

Title: 捨てられた人形 (Translation: Deserted Doll)
Vocal: 初音ミク(Miku Hatsune), Vocaloid
Accompanied with synthesizer orchestra.

Summary of lyrics

I should be a doll of my master’s most favorite.
But an unfamiliar girl often comes to his room recently.
She is flirting with him frankly in front of me.
They are about to kiss.
Until yesterday he gazed at me passionately and only loved me.
I am very jealous and very sad.
I am perfectly deserted now.

Style is SPACE1.STY(MIDI)
Style MIDI Instruments are : Science Fiction (104), Synth String #2 (52), Briteness (101), Choir Aahs (53),
All replaced with Kontakt5 Synthesizer instruments
Counter Melodies scored by me

Link:

https://soundcloud.com/animarorecords/k3loodggo4bg

Original Soundtrack by classical orchestra (Instrumental version)

Link:

https://soundcloud.com/animarorecords/instrumental-version

Hi Shigeki,

センチメンタルで悲しげな、ドラマティックな歌です
Very nice melody.
I like the instrumental version even better.
Enjoyed listening.

Guenter

Hello Shigeki Adachi,

Once again, you have masterfully composed a work of art! I like your chord progression and melody in this, and the use of the Miku Hatsune vocaloid is very impressive!

The use of a vocaloid in a song about a doll is particularly interesting... because both a doll and a vocaloid are representations of people, without being real. And expanding that theme, I like the parallel between a neglected toy and a change of affection in a real human relationship. It is characteristic of art to mimic life, but in a very stylized way, and your composition succeeds as art by that definition.

Thanks for posting such an interesting work to the forum! I'm sure that the BIAB software is well advertised through your use of it!

Really a beautiful song and perfect use of vocaloid ! Very well orchestrated and performed..... Enjoyed my listen...

Very pretty music!! The music has kind of a music box, Nutcracker quality. Very enjoyable listen!! Take care. Greg

Hello, Guenter

Thank you so much for your kind words every time.
And thank you for your Japanese comment. It’s perfect.
I also like better classical orchestra.
It’s rare for me to use synthesizer orchestra.
I forced to use that for the purpose of this song.
Thank you for your listening both versions.

Best Regards.

Shigeki Adachi

Hello, Pat

Thank you very much for taking the time to listen and comment.
I always much appreciate your very very kind words.
And your analysis of this song is wonderful and perfect.
I made the song certainly in view of the similarity of a doll and a vocaloid.

Best Regards.

Shigeki Adachi

Thank you so much, Leo.
Very very kind words every time.
I am so happy to hear you enjoyed this.

Best Regards.

Shigeki Adachi

Hello, Greg

Thank you so much for taking the time to listen and comment.
Much appreciate your very very kind words.
I wrote this song surely inspired by the music of Tchaikovsky and Mussorgsky as your comment.

Best Regards.

Shigeki Adachi

Hi, Shigeki !:))


This is a very beautiful write
and everything seems to fit so
very well together !:))

Your vocaloid is a good singer indeed !:))

Cheers
Dani

Very cool!!

Hello
I prefer the instrumental version where I can hear a very melodic music.
Very well done.

Nice work.
Sergio

Hello, Dani

Thank you so much for taking the time to listen and comment.
Much appreciate your very kind words.

Yes, It is a pretty difficult to train Miku(my vocaloid).
It is needed to tune her pronunciation up closely in detail in order to let her sing well.
But it’s a lot of fun for me.

Best Regards.

Shigeki Adachi

Thank you so much, David
I am always very encouraged by your comments.

Best Regards.

Shigeki Adachi

Hello, Sergio

Thank you so much for taking the time to listen and comment.
Much appreciate your very kind words.
I also like better classical orchestra.
The Vocaloid version needed synthesizer orchestra.
Thank you for your listening both versions.

Best Regards.

Shigeki Adachi