Hi All,

Here's another song leveraging the beat box style - I like this style a lot and have been experimenting with it a bit lately.

This is called One More Story.

All BIAB/RTs - recorded & mixed in GarageBand.

Style: BEATBOX.STY
2474: Bass, Acoustic, Held Ev 085
1943: Synth, Rhythm, EuroDance Strings Ev 120
2267: Synth, BellPad, Rhythm 80sPopPads Ev 085
Organ, B3 Background Pop Ev 085
2448: Guitar, Electric Background, PopDreamyBrent Ev 085
RealDrums: UrbanPop Ev GoodGirl 1 Kck1, b:Clap

Thanks for listening!

Bob

Very nice Bob!! You have a great poetic style. The sparse arrangement and rhythm worked perfectly. I love that Brent "dreamy" style-working on a song using that now. Works perfectly here! Very pleasant listen! Take care. Greg

Very beautiful song Robert !

Very nice, Bob. Beautiful imagery.


Regards,

Bob

Great lyrics. Very nice arrangement. You do have great poetic imagery in your lyrics. Oddly, lyrically I'm led to think you write similar to Gerry Rafferty. Musically, your musical arrangements are much moodier, singer/songwriter than his pop arrangements.

This is a very well written lyric and song. I enjoyed my listen.

Greg,

Thanks for the kind words - very appreciated.

Bob

"...Only the silence remains
Like a never ending spell
One more day, one more story to tell"

Awesome, Bob. Terrific write. Every line in the lyric is interesting. The melody is simple and repeating AND totally captivating - I really like it...by the end it seemed as though I had known this song for years. Like an old friend...

Really like what you are doing musically. So much space, yet so full. Excellent mix.

This is cool.

Keep it up!!!

floyd


Leo,

Thanks very much.

Bob

Rob this is your best to data IMHO.

Everything about this is top shelf, your vocal, mix and instrument selection is perfect. Haunting but beautiful at the same time. I can't praise you enough about your lyrics; they are fantastic. A great story told in song.

This is a keeper.

Bob,

Thanks so much - appreciate the listen.

Bob

Bob
Very evocative - great lyrics - nice arrangement - got it all.

Charlie,

Thanks. That's very kind of you to say - I'm a big fan of Gerry's work.

Bob

Hi Bob,

great lyrics again!
Enjoyable listen.

Guenter

"The simple moments that always slip

Down into the wishing well

One more dawn, one more story to tell'

Wow! Stunning imagery everywhere. Man, this would support
a wonderful video. We love sparse arrangements that are
effective and what a great example this is.

That arrangement and your vocal are right in the pocket
with the write.

We much enjoyed it!

J&B

Hey Bob,

This has hints of Bob Dylan and Leonard Cohen in it. The lyrics are exceptional as usual and it is avant-garde as all get out.

It think is is very courageous to do stuff like this where it is all out full frontal poetry. You should send this to Bob Dylan. He may send you back one of his guitars and say.

"Go ahead and take over man. I'm retired."

Floyd,

I really appreciate that - thanks very much.

Bob

Mario,

Thank you so much - means a lot.

Bob

Peter,

Thanks for listening and the kind review.

Bob

What a Great Song Bob, really extree loved the last verse! <3

Guenter,

Thanks - much appreciated.

Bob

Janice & Bud,

Thanks so much for listening and the kind words - very appreciated.

Bob

David,

What a nice review! Thanks so much - really enjoying your music as well.

Bob

Beautiful song with good lyrics!

Tommy,

Thanks very much.

Bob

Really like what you are doing musically. So much space, yet so full. Excellent mix.

This is cool.

Keep it up!!!

floyd
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Bob,Like floyd said! I like this a lot. Love the band you've put together. Good stuff. Tom

Rob and Anne-Marie,

Thanks - appreciate the listen!

Bob

Tom,

Thank you - much appreciated.

Bob

Yes love the beat and what you're doing musically here. And you top it off with engaging lyrics and a great performance.

much enjoyed, keep experimenting!

Lawrence,

Thanks very much!

Bob

Bob,

This is a great listen! The word imagery captivated me as I journeyed along... there are some truly inspired lines within these lyrics.

I really enjoyed what you've created here.

Regards,
Noel

Noel,

That's very appreciated - thanks.

Bob

Hello Bob
another great song.
I also like the style you used; very suitable for the song

Sergio

Thanks Sergio!

Bob