Terror at the Greyhound Station

Posted by: DC Ron

Terror at the Greyhound Station - 03/08/17 06:04 PM

lyrics by R.W. Davis
vocals by Dusty Hughes

Could happen to anyone...
smile

Let me know what you think!

https://soundcloud.com/ron-davis-670103812/where-is-she
Posted by: VideoTrack

Re: Terror at the Greyhound Station - 03/09/17 03:13 AM

Interesting song theme, and a great presentation.

I liked the 'urgency' that you captured so well.

Harmonies worked well, too.
Posted by: Scott C

Re: Terror at the Greyhound Station - 03/09/17 06:41 AM

Scary situation. Been to story line for many a movie. Couldn't imagine having a love one disappear.. Excellent lyric and vocal
Posted by: DC Ron

Re: Terror at the Greyhound Station - 03/09/17 03:39 PM

VideoTrack, Scott, THANKS for the listens! It's very humbling to have a lyricist and vocalist so gifted. Glad you enjoyed the song! Ron
Posted by: PeterF

Re: Terror at the Greyhound Station - 03/10/17 02:53 PM

Interesting concept for a song and really nicely executed.
Reminds me a bit of The Cars.

A strong write.

Peter
Posted by: DC Ron

Re: Terror at the Greyhound Station - 03/11/17 05:54 AM

Love The Cars! Thx for the compliment Peter. smile
Originally Posted By: PeterF
Interesting concept for a song and really nicely executed.
Reminds me a bit of The Cars.

A strong write.

Peter
Posted by: Joe -PG Music

Re: Terror at the Greyhound Station - 03/11/17 01:44 PM

Hi DC Ron, Great job on this. Very easy on the ears and great lyrics. Nice work! smile
Posted by: RichMac

Re: Terror at the Greyhound Station - 03/11/17 02:05 PM

Great title and the song has a sort of 50's teenage feel to me.
Good fun. Cheers.
Posted by: edshaw

Re: Terror at the Greyhound Station - 03/11/17 08:15 PM

So, where was she?
Posted by: Greg Johnson

Re: Terror at the Greyhound Station - 03/11/17 10:10 PM

Rode my share of Greyhounds in the 80's and lived to tell. This is an interesting song/lyric! Interesting rhymes ("for her" and horror"-probably never been done before) Dusty did a great job on the vocals! Very cool! Take care. Greg
Posted by: DC Ron

Re: Terror at the Greyhound Station - 03/12/17 03:02 PM

Thanks for all the great input! "So, where was she?" Doesn't really resolve, does it? In real life, she was on the next bus. OR...COULD have been. smile

After some consultation, the "for her"/"horror" rhyme is listed in online rhyming dictionaries, which I doubt the lyricist consults, but honestly can't find an example of its use on Google. So at least rare, if ever done before. Lyrical easter eggs are often tucked in his lyrics...

REALLY appreciate it!