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Posted By: rsdean Time Love Space - 07/09/17 10:09 AM
Hi All,

Here's something new - this little piece is called Time Love Space.

How do you slow time
Time that runs
She said well I
Let it run
Run away

How do you slow love
Love that flies
She said well I
Let it fly
Fly away fly away

How do you slow space
Space that fades
She said well I
Let it fade
Fade away
Fade away
Fade away
Fade away

All BIAB Tracks:
366: Bass, Electric, Country Ev 065
365: Guitar, Acoustic, Strumming Ev 085
362: Guitar, Acoustic, Fingerpicking Ev 085
2446: Guitar, Baritone Electric, Background Ev 065
RealDrums: NashvilleEven16 Sidestick HiHat

Thanks for listening! smile

Bob
Posted By: Sundance Re: Time Love Space - 07/09/17 11:18 AM
Really enjoying this new sig sound Bob!
Posted By: Pat Marr Re: Time Love Space - 07/09/17 01:11 PM
Robert,

love the way you insert pauses into your verses for effect!
I also really like that baritone guitar! You've used it on a couple of songs now, and that sort of creates the illusion that you have a live band, and your guitar player plays one!

I remember that a now-inactive forum member named John DesJardins (you've been here long enough to remember him) purposefully used the same instruments in all of his songs in order to make albums of songs that sound like they were recorded in a studio by the same band. Cool idea! Indeed, a band's signature sound tends to be built around the band member's playing style and the sonic characteristics of their gear.

I think the effects you use on your vocals really do a great job of making the verses fit seamlessly into the rest of the mix.

I also like the picture you used for the song on Sound Cloud. Did you draw it?
Posted By: Torrey Bliss Re: Time Love Space - 07/09/17 08:28 PM
Bob, I concur with Pat's comments. I like the way you vary your vocal delivery. It's really gives your songs a dynamic missing in a lot of other peoples songs. The baritone really enhances this one. Thanks, Torrey
Posted By: rsdean Re: Time Love Space - 07/09/17 09:52 PM
Hey Josie,

So good to hear from you. Thanks for listening and commenting. smile

Bob
Posted By: MarioD Re: Time Love Space - 07/09/17 09:58 PM
Pat hit the nail right on the head. Your phrasing is the best that I have heard in a love time. That coupled with the fact that the guitar did not get in the way of the vocals was definitely a very professional approach. Outstanding mix!

Love that guitar.

This is a keeper.
Posted By: PeterF Re: Time Love Space - 07/10/17 05:12 AM
Bob

Some really nice dynamics and a good set of lyrics. The band sounds just right.
Excellent song.

Peter
Posted By: rsdean Re: Time Love Space - 07/10/17 11:57 AM
Pat,

Thanks so much for the in-depth review.

I like using the same "band" for particular songs - to me it brings a certain cohesiveness to what I am doing. Typically, I'll end-up leveraging those same instruments for a longer period of time, or until I get it out of my system... LOL!

No, I did not draw that picture - just one of many that I have collected and stored in my virtual art box. smile

Thanks again for the kind words.

Bob
Posted By: Scott C Re: Time Love Space - 07/10/17 12:29 PM
Very cool tune Bob. Loved the delivery on this one. Very dramatic piece. Guitar was very cool.
Posted By: Ember - PG Music Re: Time Love Space - 07/10/17 12:51 PM
This really reminds me of a Bowie song and I rather enjoy it! Please keep creating more songs. <3
Posted By: floyd jane Re: Time Love Space - 07/10/17 04:13 PM
Cool one, Bob.

That BAND is working well for you. This sounds so "comfortable". Everything "in the pocket". Good vocal. Excellent mix.

Enjoyed it.

fj
Posted By: David Snyder Re: Time Love Space - 07/10/17 04:34 PM
Bob,

This would be a great song in a Cohen brothers movie. Really quite cinematic.

Also, my goal this decade is to write a song with lyrics that are shorter than yours, but just as good.

I realize it might take me 10 years to achieve this goal, but I'm really quite unstoppable once I set my mind to something.

smile
Posted By: rsdean Re: Time Love Space - 07/10/17 05:48 PM
Torrey,

Thanks - much appreciated.

Bob
Posted By: rsdean Re: Time Love Space - 07/10/17 07:42 PM
Mario,

That's very kind of you - thanks so much.

Bob
Posted By: 44kfl Re: Time Love Space - 07/10/17 11:37 PM
I agree with all that's been said

very nice phrasing and an awesome mix

great clarity in the overall sound

and the three things addressed

time, love, and space

great write, once again

enjoyed

Kenny
Posted By: rsdean Re: Time Love Space - 07/11/17 06:09 AM
Peter,

Thanks very much.

Bob
Posted By: Deryk - PG Music Re: Time Love Space - 07/11/17 10:27 AM
This is a wonderful tune, rsdean! I like the guitar work on it immensely, and the somber yet attention-drawing vocal delivery truly gives it a unique aesthetic. Also, props on the lyrics! Simple, yet effective smile

Thanks so much for sharing!
Posted By: Janice & Bud Re: Time Love Space - 07/11/17 10:50 AM
Originally Posted By: Torrey Bliss
Bob, I concur with Pat's comments. I like the way you vary your vocal delivery. It's really gives your songs a dynamic missing in a lot of other peoples songs. The baritone really enhances this one. Thanks, Torrey


Torrey and Pat put into words what we have long thought. Yes, your vocal phrasing always is very supportive of the lyric mood and along with the well thought out backing fills adds the mentioned dynamic to the song. We have long felt that dynamics ice the cake on a good tune. “In your face” doesn’t work for us for any genre.

Great piece of work here....lyric, arrangement, performance and mix.

J&B
Posted By: BlueAttitude Re: Time Love Space - 07/11/17 11:17 AM
Nice hearing that baritone again, such a great sound!

Another winner from you, loved it.
Posted By: rsdean Re: Time Love Space - 07/11/17 11:31 AM
Scott,

Very appreciated - thanks!

Bob
Posted By: rsdean Re: Time Love Space - 07/11/17 11:32 AM
Ember,

Thanks for the great compliment - very kind of you.

Bob
Posted By: rsdean Re: Time Love Space - 07/11/17 01:50 PM
Floyd,

I appreciate that - thanks!

Bob
Posted By: rsdean Re: Time Love Space - 07/11/17 09:12 PM
David,

Thanks - I appreciate the kind words.

I'm sure you have something ready, queued and waiting to drop as I write this... LOL!

Looking forward to hearing your next one. smile

Bob
Posted By: rsdean Re: Time Love Space - 07/12/17 12:02 PM
Kenny,

Thanks - much appreciated.

Bob
Posted By: rsdean Re: Time Love Space - 07/12/17 08:33 PM
Deryk,

Thanks - appreciate the listen and kind words.

Bob
Posted By: rsdean Re: Time Love Space - 07/13/17 10:18 AM
Janice & Bud,

Always appreciate your support and kind words... Thanks.

Bob
Posted By: rsdean Re: Time Love Space - 07/15/17 05:52 PM
Dave,

Thanks very much.

Bob
Posted By: rsdean Re: Time Love Space - 07/17/17 06:52 AM
Peter,

Thanks so much - it is appreciated.

Bob
Posted By: gruverider Re: Time Love Space - 07/19/17 07:23 PM
you did a great job of utilizing space and time in your tempo and vocal delivery

very well written
Posted By: rsdean Re: Time Love Space - 07/20/17 07:26 AM
Lawrence,

Thanks - much appreciated.

Bob
Posted By: Rob4580 Re: Time Love Space - 07/20/17 07:35 AM
Really Enjoyed this.
Lots of emotion and depth.
Ropb
Posted By: tommyad Re: Time Love Space - 07/20/17 12:35 PM
Bob, As others have noted, your phrasing along with the prominent Baritone guitar set a mood that works great. Nice fadeaway at the end. Great stuff! Tom
Posted By: rsdean Re: Time Love Space - 07/20/17 08:45 PM
Rob,

Thanks very much.

Bob
Posted By: rsdean Re: Time Love Space - 07/21/17 07:35 PM
Tom,

I appreciate that - thanks!

Bob
Posted By: dcuny Re: Time Love Space - 07/21/17 11:58 PM
Neat - it's like listening to a version of Bill Shatner that can actually sing. smile
Posted By: ROG Re: Time Love Space - 07/22/17 09:04 AM
Hi Bob.

I'm a bit late getting to this one - I never have as much time to spend on the forum as I'd like and yes, really it's all been said already.

A very atmospheric track which is very much in your own style and which does, indeed, sound like a movie soundtrack.

Excellent backing and a great mix with everything hanging together as it should.

Loved the guitar sound!

Cheers, ROG.
Posted By: rsdean Re: Time Love Space - 07/23/17 06:09 AM
David,

Thanks - I think... LOL! smile

Bob
Posted By: dani48 Re: Time Love Space - 07/23/17 06:28 PM
Hi, Bob !


This must be your best
so far !:))

Love the baritone guitar
too !

Cheers
Dani
Posted By: rsdean Re: Time Love Space - 07/24/17 05:58 AM
ROG,

Much appreciated - thank you.

Bob
Posted By: Biglad Re: Time Love Space - 07/24/17 09:01 AM
A Dylanquse vocal a wash with atmospheric feeling .great number and you could get lost in the warmth and depth of the guitars .cheers well done keep em coming
Posted By: rsdean Re: Time Love Space - 07/25/17 06:06 AM
Dani,

Thanks so much!

Bob
Posted By: Noel96 Re: Time Love Space - 07/25/17 06:39 AM
Hi Bob,

As I listened, I couldn't stop thinking about how effectively you've put this song together. The music and your singing are very atmospheric and are well framed by excellently planned arrangement. Very nice indeed.

Regards,
Noel
Posted By: rsdean Re: Time Love Space - 07/26/17 06:21 AM
Biglad,

Thanks - I appreciated that!

Bob
Posted By: rsdean Re: Time Love Space - 07/27/17 10:25 AM
Noel,

That means a lot - thanks!

Bob
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