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Posted By: dani48 Looking Out Over The Bay - 11/07/17 06:01 PM
Hi, friends !:))

Anachronistic, yes, that is this tune that
I am posting here. It depicts one special summer day
I once experienced at my place (I used to
live by the seaside on the outskirts of Helsinki)
looking out over the bay where I stood I did
see both sun, fog, rain and sun shining thru
dark clouds starting to float away from the scenery.
Where I stood I could see the Island with the name
of "Västertokan" far away in the distance, I could
see the fog rising slowly from the sea engulfing
the islands ahead of me oh so slowly just to later
dissipate in front of the blistering sun that came
shining firstly thru those dark clouds.

Well, this is not a song for the season, though somewhere
on this globe they probably are experiencing summer instead
of the winter that we can expect to come to us up
here in Helsinki any day now !

I wanted to post this so you could experience the
difference between the original recording (from my
record- with the title "Blickar Ut Över Fjärden") and
my recent version. I had to do this so you could get
a grip of what I was singing about with my two friends back then. The violins you hear are played by the artistic conductor
of the BBC orchestra, who knew my producer who had him
come over for those violin parts. The guitar is me and
the rest of the accompaniment is by some members from
a dance band !

The links

a) to the original version (in Swedish)from the record

http://app.box.com/s/45el3r7r4igqgae9eqgw315uxoqaps7n

b) to my recent version

http://app.box.com/s/k2qk2zngd4bht7jeqgz90nslrfzc34jd

Here is the translation from Swedish:

LOOKIN OUT OVER THE BAY (Music and Words by Norman Wibe)

Verse

Yes I´m lookin´out over the bay
I can see my Islands far far away
in the distance there´s the tokan yeah my old beloved toka ( Referring to the Island of Västertokan )
just east by Southsouthwest

Slowly daylight is closing down
behind the islands there´s a fog risin´on
it is rising from the sea now and it´s slowly yes so slowly
surrounding all the isles

Chorus

And far out thru the thickenin´fog
you´ll hear the boats and ships afar just slowing their speed
and here and there a lonesome cry
sounds so fumbling, almost trembling
”I am here, over here”!!!!!

Verse

After fog comes the rain so light
drops are falling on the window, you might
even see the boats a-bobbin´by the bayside on the leeside
with anchors there a-way

Bridge

The sea is pricked there full of holes
as thousands upon thousands of the raindrops hit their goals

Verse

Yes I stand by the seaside now
in the heaven there´s a rainbow I know
and against the dark horizon I can see the sun protruding
thru clouds a-fleein´fast, yes so fast
far away

Cheers
Dani








Posted By: Ember - PG Music Re: Looking Out Over The Bay - 11/07/17 06:16 PM
Wow, the different versions! Such a difference between the two. You're right, it's not quite the right season for a song like this, but it's gotta be summer somewhere in the world like you mentioned!

I especially love these lyrics:

"Yes I stand by the seaside now
in the heaven there´s a rainbow I know
and against the dark horizon I can see the sun protruding
thru clouds a-fleein´fast, yes so fast
far away"
Posted By: Scott C Re: Looking Out Over The Bay - 11/07/17 06:44 PM
Very nice Dani. I really liked both versions. I am leaning a bit more to the first version. Not sure if it was my speakers but there was more detail to the vocals and harmonies. But both versions excellent and such a beautiful lyric. Well done
Posted By: ROG Re: Looking Out Over The Bay - 11/07/17 08:25 PM
Hi Dani,

Both excellent!

I couldn't really say which I preferred, even after listening to them twice.

It's surprising just how different they are, but they're both excellent in their own way.

I'm so impressed by the way you can get the lyrics to work so well after the translation.

Your wonderful signature vocal shines through on both!

Cheers, ROG.
Posted By: 44kfl Re: Looking Out Over The Bay - 11/07/17 09:13 PM
enjoyed both listens

very nice pretty melodies

enjoyed,

Kenny
Posted By: furry Re: Looking Out Over The Bay - 11/07/17 11:13 PM
beautiful, but the second version needs some tweaking on the vocals if you could ?
Posted By: AudioTrack Re: Looking Out Over The Bay - 11/08/17 07:11 AM
Really, really excellent, Dani.

The falsetto harmonies have given extra dimension to an already remarkable song.

Another fantastic delivery. Very pleasing.

Trev
Posted By: Deryk - PG Music Re: Looking Out Over The Bay - 11/08/17 12:08 PM
Wow, I really enjoyed both of these versions! The delivery here is fantastic, and you approach to the song really gave it a unique and personal touch. I love the peaceful quality of the song, and it was easy to just close my eyes and get lost to.

Great work, and thanks for sharing smile
Posted By: dani48 Re: Looking Out Over The Bay - 11/08/17 02:47 PM
Hi, Ember !:))

Yes, the versions are very
different but the scenery
is the same ! I hope I could
convey to you the extreme weather
condition that I experienced
that unforgettable summer afternoon
1992 that led me to write 16 songs
for my first record later that same year !:))

Ember, I want to thank you so much
for your most kind comments !:))

Cheers
Dani
Posted By: dani48 Re: Looking Out Over The Bay - 11/08/17 06:34 PM
Hi, Scott !:))

You are right of course, there
is a lot of different instruments
in the original and I did
this second version just so you
could get the lyrics for better
understanding of what the song
was about ! Also, you can surely
hear how much my voice has deteri-
oriated since 1992, but I can´t
do much about it but compose songs
that are easier to sing, I guess ?

I am very glad for your most
kind words and really want to
thank you for them !

Cheers
Dani
Posted By: floyd jane Re: Looking Out Over The Bay - 11/09/17 05:32 PM
Dani,

Enjoyable listening. It was great hearing the original (in Swedish? how many languages do you speak??) - cool! The new version was nice, too...

fj
Posted By: Robertkc Re: Looking Out Over The Bay - 11/09/17 10:44 PM
Dani,

The Swedish version has a really good professional arrangement- you must have had some vocalists of quality to make harmonies like that ( likely with little processing back then?).
The recent recording shows that you still have a beautiful voice and the falsetto harmonies add a new and delicate touch.
I enjoyed both!

Robert
Posted By: animarorecords Re: Looking Out Over The Bay - 11/10/17 02:53 AM
Hello, Dani

The both versions are great!
I have listened to the song in Swedish for the first time. Really nice.
The English version also has a different flavor.
The real orchestra of the Swedish version is wonderful.
Enjoyed my listen a lot.

Best regards.

Shigeki Adachi
Posted By: Al-David Re: Looking Out Over The Bay - 11/10/17 05:42 PM
Hello Danim

Loved both versions but have a slight preference for the most recent version. Very pretty! Your music is always such a pleasure to listen to.

Wishing you the very best.

Alan
Posted By: dani48 Re: Looking Out Over The Bay - 11/10/17 09:34 PM
Hi, ROG !:))

I feel most humbled
by your more than kind
words about this piece
and me and you know that
I do appreciate that
very much and want to
thank you for your kindness !

Cheers
Dani
Posted By: dani48 Re: Looking Out Over The Bay - 11/10/17 09:37 PM
Hi, Kenny !:))


Very many thanks for
your most kind words !

Cheers
Dani
Posted By: dani48 Re: Looking Out Over The Bay - 11/10/17 09:39 PM
Hi, Graham !:))


Thank you so much
for your most kind
comment and for reminding
me to try and tweak the
tune a little which is
what I also tried to do !

Cheers
Dani
Posted By: PeterF Re: Looking Out Over The Bay - 11/10/17 11:12 PM
Dani

Nice contrast - both versions are very nice.
Be summer in Australia soon.

Peter
Posted By: dani48 Re: Looking Out Over The Bay - 11/11/17 11:20 AM
Hi, Trevor !:))


I do feel humbled by
your more than kind
words regarding these
pieces ! I do want to
thank you so very much
for them !

Cheers
Dani
Posted By: RnAM Re: Looking Out Over The Bay - 11/11/17 06:33 PM
Hi Dani,

Yes, there's quite some differences between the two.
Of course because the latest is in English, but also the music and vocals sound different.
We don't know exactly which one we prefer.
The first one sounds a bit more "traditional" the second sounding rather "modern".
But this might be because of the different languages smile

Rob and Anne-Marie
Posted By: dani48 Re: Looking Out Over The Bay - 11/11/17 08:09 PM
Hi, Deryk !:))


I feel most humbled
by your more than kind
words regarding this tune
written back in 1992 !
I want to thank you so
much for them they really
warmed my heart !

This tune was one of
the tunes I wrote when
I started write around
1990 !

Cheers
Dani
Posted By: guitar1 Re: Looking Out Over The Bay - 11/11/17 09:05 PM
Dani, This is beautiful. The lyrics are such that I can almost see the seascape before you. Very poignant.
Well done!
Posted By: Steve Young Re: Looking Out Over The Bay - 11/11/17 09:27 PM
Dani, this is really very nice! I really enjoyed the Swedish version. Loved the arrangement of it. But both are very good, and it was nice to get the English translation.

Beautiful song, well done!

Steve
Posted By: Noel96 Re: Looking Out Over The Bay - 11/12/17 03:43 PM
Dani,

What a wonderful, relaxed journey you've just taken me on. I really enjoyed it. Thank you. You carried me along on a stream of easy-listening that has started my day with a huge smile (it's 5:36 am here in Melbourne right now). I cannot think of a better way to say hello to morning!



This style of song is definitely one that brings out the best in you.

All the best,
Noel
Posted By: Greg Johnson Re: Looking Out Over The Bay - 11/13/17 03:53 PM
Beautiful song Dani!! One of my favorite of so many beautiful melodies you've written. I like both versions. Was your record released years ago? The quality sounds excellent. Very, very much enjoyed this!! Take care. Greg
Posted By: dani48 Re: Looking Out Over The Bay - 11/13/17 09:16 PM
Hi, Floyd !:))

I want to thank you so
very much for your most kind
comments very much appreciated
as always !:))

I speak Swedish and Finnish and I know some
English, Spanish and German (as well as most
of the other Nordic languages except for Icelandic !

Cheers
Dani
Posted By: Janice & Bud Re: Looking Out Over The Bay - 11/14/17 11:29 AM


Originally Posted By: ROG
Hi Dani,

Both excellent!

I couldn't really say which I preferred, even after listening to them twice.

It's surprising just how different they are, but they're both excellent in their own way.

I'm so impressed by the way you can get the lyrics to work so well after the translation.

Your wonderful signature vocal shines through on both!

Cheers, ROG.


We downloaded both versions so we could listen on different sound systems.

And our conclusion is the same as ROG's.

It's one thing to be multi-lingual but another to be able to a make lyric to in both languages.

The orchestra in the Swedish version is wonderful!

J&B
Posted By: dani48 Re: Looking Out Over The Bay - 11/17/17 10:31 PM
Hi, Robert !:))

Thank you so very much
for your most kind words !
You suggested some vocalists
of quality and I hope you
won´t be disappointed if I say
that the vocalists were me
on lead and tenor and Patrick
on bass !

Cheers
Dani
Posted By: cubanpete Re: Looking Out Over The Bay - 11/17/17 10:58 PM
Hi Dani, very nice indeed as always. Good listen.

Mike B.
Posted By: dani48 Re: Looking Out Over The Bay - 11/19/17 07:07 PM
Hi, Shigeki !:))

Thank you so much for
your most kind comments !
The orchestration on the
record (the Swedish version)
is one violin, me and my guitar,
some fluteplaying by my producer
and some tingels (I don´t really
know the name of that instrument
that sounds like a wind chime )?
and naturally drums and el bass !
I am so glad that you liked
the tune !

Cheers
Dani
Posted By: dani48 Re: Looking Out Over The Bay - 11/20/17 03:08 AM
Hi, Al & Di !:))


Thank you so much for
your most kind and
warm words ! Feeling
humble for your statement !

Cheers
Dani
Posted By: RichMac Re: Looking Out Over The Bay - 11/20/17 03:37 AM
What a fantastic job you did of these!
The more modern one appeals most to me.
Great voice there.
Summer just coming on here.
Cheers.
Posted By: Charlie Fogle Re: Looking Out Over The Bay - 11/20/17 08:28 AM
Classic work. Dani. Loving the harmonies in the english version. I also enjoyed your guitar choices. Always a joy and a sense of peace listening to your songs.

Charlie
Posted By: dani48 Re: Looking Out Over The Bay - 11/22/17 07:29 PM
Hi, Peter !:))


....and muchas gracias
for your most kind comments !
Yes, Australia is heading t´wards
summer and we t´wards winter,
such is the order of things in
our sweet world !!!:))

Am so grateful for your
most kind words !

Cheers
Dani
Posted By: dani48 Re: Looking Out Over The Bay - 11/25/17 08:22 PM
Hi, Rob & Anne-Marie !


I am so glad that you
have problems choosing
a favourite of the two
versions ! I take it
that it means that
both versions have their
stronger and weaker sides
and it may be hard to choose !

I want to thank you for your
most kind words !

Cheers
Dani
Posted By: dani48 Re: Looking Out Over The Bay - 11/26/17 10:49 AM
Hi, Guitar !

I´m so glad that
you could share
the sight and I
want to thank you so
much for your most kind
words !

Cheers
Dani
Posted By: dani48 Re: Looking Out Over The Bay - 11/28/17 05:59 PM
Hi, Steve !:))

thank you so very much
for your most kind words
regarding these tunes !:))

Cheers
Dani
Posted By: Torrey Bliss Re: Looking Out Over The Bay - 11/28/17 08:51 PM
Dani, I almost missed this one. This song has such beautiful chord changes and melody! Your voice sounds great! Thanks, Torrey
Posted By: dani48 Re: Looking Out Over The Bay - 11/30/17 02:34 PM
Hi, ol´pal Noel !!:))

How fun that I could
give you a relaxed journey
earla in the morn´

Thank you for youe most
kind words !

Cheers
Dani
Posted By: Jim Fogle Re: Looking Out Over The Bay - 11/30/17 04:32 PM
A very peaceful sounding song. It was nice to be able to compare your project to the recording. Thank you for providing both links.
Posted By: dani48 Re: Looking Out Over The Bay - 11/30/17 10:35 PM
Hi, Greg !:))

I wanna thank you so much
for your most kind words !
The original was recorded
in 1992 and came out with
a record consisting of 16
songs I had written maybe
between 1990 to 92 !

Cheers
Dani
Posted By: LPman Re: Looking Out Over The Bay - 12/02/17 01:25 AM
Hi dani48
This really feels like and sounds like "Looking out over the bay.
Very nice voice signatures, with a reflective nuance, that's warm and safe.
Thanks for sharing
Posted By: dani48 Re: Looking Out Over The Bay - 12/02/17 10:14 PM
Hi, Janice & Bud !!:))

Am so thankful for your
most kind words regarding
this old piece from 92 !


Cheers
Dani
Posted By: dani48 Re: Looking Out Over The Bay - 12/03/17 01:49 PM
Hi, Mike !:))


Thank you so much for your
most kind words !:))

Cheers
Dani
Posted By: dani48 Re: Looking Out Over The Bay - 12/11/17 02:34 PM
Hi, Rich !

I am most thankful for your
most kind words !
Was what I also thought i.e.
that summer´s comin´to you !
How do you celebrate Christmas
I mean - do you dance around a
Christmas Tree ?

Wishing you the best of
X-mases, New Years and summers too !

Cheers
Dani
Posted By: dani48 Re: Looking Out Over The Bay - 12/11/17 02:36 PM
Hi, Charlie !:))


You are most kind with
your comment and you know
it makes me feel humble !
thank you for those most
kind words and let me wish
you a most Merry Christmas
and a most Happy New Year !

Cheers
Dani
Posted By: dani48 Re: Looking Out Over The Bay - 12/11/17 02:38 PM
Hi, Torrey !:))

Much obliged by your
most kind words !
It is an honour to
me to get such a good
review !

Merry X-mas and a most
Happy New Year to you too !

Cheers
Dani
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