new song Jesus forgive me

Posted by: Biglad

new song Jesus forgive me - 04/18/18 11:39 AM

https://soundcloud.com/brad-stevens-uk/jesus-forgive-me-2
****** Song Summary *************
Title: JESUS FORGIVE ME
File:JESUS FORGIVE ME.SGU
Key=F , Tempo 85, Length (m:s)=3:51
No intro. 78 bar chorus, from bar 1 to bar 78. Repeat x1 chorus
No Melody
No Soloist track.
Song is saved with Volume, Pan, Reverb, Chorus, Bank0,
Song is saved with bar changes for Volume Changes,
Style is _LVLNPOP.STY (Country Ballad w/ Backing Violin)


RealTracks in style: 366:Bass, Electric, Country Ev 065
RealTracks in style: ~365:Guitar, Acoustic, Fingerpicking Ev 085
RealTracks in style: ~363:Pedal Steel, Background Ev 085
RealTracks in style: 2338:Violin, Background, PopLow Ev 085 (1TrackStringSection)
RealTracks in song: 2033:Mandolin, Soloist CountryAndy Ev 065
RealDrums in style: NashvilleEven8^2-a:Sidestick, HiHat , b:Snare, HiHat

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my latest offering.hope you enjoy.please feel free to comment



4 AM ON A EAST BOUND ROAD
MARKINGS GONE COVERED BY THE SNOW
I SAW IT SLIDE SAW IT ROLL
THEN IT HIT THAT TREE

HEARD THE CRASH SAW GLASS AND STEEL
FOUND THAT BODY BEHIND THE WHEEL
WITH HIS LAST BREATH HE TURNED
AND SAID THIS TO ME

JESUS FORGIVE ME FOR MY DRINKING
MY COMING HOME LATE COVERED IN SIN
JESUS FORGIVE ME WHAT WAS I THINKING
NOW IM WITH YOU I CANT HURT NO ONE AGAIN


THE PREACHER CALLED HIM REECE MALONE
LEFT FOUR KIDS AND A YOUNG WIFE AT HOME
THE YOUNGEST ONE THEY SAY WAS ONLY THREE

I STILL RECALL HIS FINAL WORDS
HE LOOKED AT ME AND JUST STARED
PLEASE DONT JUDGE ME FOR MY SINS



I BOWED MY HEAD AND I SAID A PRAYER
TRAVELLED DOWN THAT ROAD AGAIN
RIBBONS AND A TEDDY BEAR WHERE TIED ON THAT TREE

JESUS FORGIVE ME FOR MY DRINKING
MY COMING HOME LATE COVERED IN SIN
JESUS FORGIVE ME WHAT WAS I THINKING
NOW IM WITH YOU I CANT HURT NO ONE AGAIN
NOW IM WITH YOU I CANT HURT NO ONE AGAIN
Posted by: cliftond

Re: new song Jesus forgive me - 04/18/18 12:59 PM

Beautiful song and powerful!!! So well done here, the production is very good.
Posted by: floyd jane

Re: new song Jesus forgive me - 04/18/18 01:34 PM

John,

Really nice job on this.

A good write...classic Country story and classic Country sound. Nice vocal. Good mix.

One of your best, I think. My favorite, anyway...

fj
Posted by: Rob4580

Re: new song Jesus forgive me - 04/18/18 02:37 PM

Great emotional song. Rob
Posted by: Froi

Re: new song Jesus forgive me - 04/18/18 07:59 PM

Beautiful song and a good reminder not to drink and drive.
Posted by: Tano Music

Re: new song Jesus forgive me - 04/19/18 05:22 AM

John, I really liked the song… Production was really great… I especially like how you highlighted the beginning of the chorus “Jesus” with.a full stop and just the voice… Your voice echoes were really good… Only recommendation I would make, you don’t really need the mandolin solo..I found it a little distracting in the very beginning and I don’t think it adds much to the song. Thanks for sharing this excellent work!
Posted by: Deryk - PG Music

Re: new song Jesus forgive me - 04/19/18 07:53 AM

Wow - you really did a great job here. A little on the morbid side, but the emotion here is incredible. It hits you right in the chest. Your vocals are seriously on point here. The whole tune just flows so well, and has so much life.

Really, really well done. Thanks so much for sharing smile
Posted by: Biglad

Re: new song Jesus forgive me - 04/20/18 05:49 AM

Thanks guys I appreciate the comments
john
Posted by: Scott C

Re: new song Jesus forgive me - 04/20/18 12:41 PM

Beautiful song and vocal