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Posted By: dani48 One Of These Days - 08/17/18 07:50 PM
Hi, friends !

This is a tune resulting from a bike ride
with my sweetheart !


The Style is -C_BOBYG.STY (Bobby Goldsbro style)
and the instros are:

Bas: 34, Elec. Piano: 5, Drums = RD:s Country Even 8
Guitar1: 26, Strings 49 and Guitar 2: 28
Recorded with Mixcraft 8 pro , reverb and compression
used.

Here are the links:

http://soundcloud.com/user-337827005/one-of-these-days-ii

http://app.box.com/s/vx73d1dzj51qxume7teywnsp34fhsh7l


...and here are the lyrics:


One Of These Days (Music & Lyrics by Norman Wibe)

One of these days
when the weather´s fine
I´m gonna take you for a ride
goin´both far and wide
out on the countryside

One of these days
bikin´down the line
where there´s noone else around
we´ll be sittin´down on the ground
listenin´ to the magic sound

Of whispering trees,
words in the breeze
out in the wilderness
a soothin´caress

One of these days
I hope to make you mine
for the rest of our days
enjoyin´your sweetest grace
out in this wonderful place

Birds and bees
perfect peace
reinin´just everywhere
over here and there

Bridge

See the mornin´rays
lighting up the haze
in a graceful pace
the sun shines, on your lovely face

One of these days
I hope to make you mine
for the rest of our days
enjoyin´your sweetest grace
out in this wonderful place
Posted By: beatmaster Re: One Of These Days - 08/17/18 08:11 PM
Dani

Nice ballad to me you have shown that you can do more than the surf music you do so well.

This was different and meaningful, romantic and soulful.

I enjoyed this .

Thanks.
Posted By: GocartMoz Re: One Of These Days - 08/17/18 10:06 PM
I have completely forgot about Bobby Goldsboro. I used to watch his TV show all the time. You did a good job with it. I liked the tune. It was just a feel good vibe. I think maybe the vocals were a bit too up front and doesn’t sit in the mix as well as they should. Liked the song. Thanks for sharing.

Dave
Posted By: Greg Johnson Re: One Of These Days - 08/18/18 04:01 AM
OK, even without the surfing references, it is Pure DANI!! Great romantic, care-free feel, beautiful harmonies, and a melody that sticks in your mind. If we get too old to surf, we can still ride bikes, right? Loved it!! Take care. Greg
Posted By: dcuny Re: One Of These Days - 08/18/18 04:20 AM
Nice mellow tune.

I think the vocals overwhelmed the instruments, but the melody and harmony were nice, so I didn't really mind. smile

Very pleasant, like a sunny day.
Posted By: jannesan Re: One Of These Days - 08/18/18 04:24 AM
Very beautiful song in the spirit of sixties when countryside was still alive. Lovely romantic lyrics, nice melody and chording and on the top your smooth vocals. I wish I had that inspiring bike trips smile

Janne
Posted By: dani48 Re: One Of These Days - 08/18/18 07:26 AM
Dear Beatmaster !:))

Am very glad of your most
kind comments. Yes, it might
be less Beach Boys from here
on, who knows ?

Thanks !

Cheers
Dani
Posted By: floyd jane Re: One Of These Days - 08/18/18 03:33 PM
Norman!

A veru cool sound - the deep vocal with the accompanying falsetto is quite unique...

A nice love song.

fj
Posted By: dani48 Re: One Of These Days - 08/18/18 03:39 PM
Hi, Dave !:))


Thank you for your most kind
words and....I did rerecord
trying to push the vocals
deeper into the musical background !

Thank you !

Cheers
Dani
Posted By: dani48 Re: One Of These Days - 08/18/18 03:58 PM
Hi, Greg !:))

I do thank you, Greg, so
much for your most kind
comments ! YeaBiking seems
a little easier than surfing
I guess !:) (chuckle) at least
if you have to start it at old
age !:)))

Cheers
Dani
Posted By: RnAM Re: One Of These Days - 08/18/18 04:34 PM
Hi Dani,

A sweet and romantic song!
We can image you two on bicycles, humming this song.
Great job!

Rob and Anne-Marie
Posted By: dani48 Re: One Of These Days - 08/18/18 05:41 PM
Hi, David !

thank you so much
for your most kind and
encouraging words !
I did rerecord the tune
for better match with
the background !
Think it may have become
a little better ?

Cheers
Dani
Posted By: dani48 Re: One Of These Days - 08/18/18 06:05 PM
Hi, Janne !

Very many thanks to
you for your most
kind words ! :))

Cheers
Dani
Posted By: gruverider Re: One Of These Days - 08/18/18 06:10 PM
Wonderful song! I always admire your melodies and harmonies. Crafty and creative!
Posted By: EMG Re: One Of These Days - 08/18/18 06:32 PM
Nice.
In my opinion the voice has a little to much effects, but the song itself is very nice.
Posted By: PeterF Re: One Of These Days - 08/18/18 09:47 PM
Dani

Very pretty song - with nice trade mark vocals.
A nice composition.

Peter
Posted By: dani48 Re: One Of These Days - 08/19/18 01:43 AM
Hi, Floyd !:))


Thank you so much for
your most kind words !
Glad if you found the
vocal combination unique !
You see, I mostly have
to sing either in falsetto
or my too deep natural voice
and really lack most voices
in between !:))

Cheers
Dani
Posted By: dani48 Re: One Of These Days - 08/19/18 10:02 AM
Hi, Rob and Anne -Marie !:))

Thank you so much for your
most kind words ! Yes, we
really do like to bike a lot
in these beautiful Helsinki
surroundings !!!:))

I had to replace the earlier
soundcloud file with the
one that is better balanced !

Cheers
Dani
Posted By: BlueAttitude Re: One Of These Days - 08/19/18 10:55 AM
A real "feel good" type of song.

Very nice, Dani!
Posted By: dani48 Re: One Of These Days - 08/19/18 06:49 PM
Dear Lawrence !

You make me blush with
such kind words and I
am truly grateful for
them as they inspire me
to continue the journey !

Cheers
Dani
Posted By: dani48 Re: One Of These Days - 08/19/18 08:48 PM
Hi, EMG !:))


Thank you for your most
kind and constructive
comments !:))

Cheers
Dani
Posted By: dani48 Re: One Of These Days - 08/20/18 11:25 AM
Hi, Peter !:))

Thank you so much
for your most kind
words !

Cheers
Dani
Posted By: Scott C Re: One Of These Days - 08/20/18 12:21 PM
Loved this tune Dani. Super vocal. Excellent backtrack. Well done.
Posted By: Janice & Bud Re: One Of These Days - 08/20/18 12:40 PM
Originally Posted By: Greg Johnson
OK, even without the surfing references, it is Pure DANI!! Great romantic, care-free feel, beautiful harmonies, and a melody that sticks in your mind. If we get too old to surf, we can still ride bikes, right? Loved it!! Take care. Greg


Greg said it all! And Janice and I spend a LOT of time on our mountain bikes.

A lovely production indeed!

J&B
Posted By: dani48 Re: One Of These Days - 08/20/18 07:10 PM
Hi, Dave !:))


Much obliged by your
most kind words !
Thank you so much !

Cheers
Dani
Posted By: dani48 Re: One Of These Days - 08/20/18 07:21 PM
Hi, Scott !:))


I am very glad you liked the tune
and so I want to thank you for
your most kind words !

Cheers
Dani
Posted By: Torrey Bliss Re: One Of These Days - 08/20/18 08:53 PM
Dani, this is such a pleasant and enjoyable tune! I loved some of the neat chord changes and melody in this! You are talented! Thanks, Torrey
Posted By: dani48 Re: One Of These Days - 08/21/18 07:35 PM
Hi, Janice & Bud !:))

I do thank you both
for your most kind words !
Like you I do believe
that biking is easier
than surfing (giggle) !!!

Cheers
Dani
Posted By: dani48 Re: One Of These Days - 08/22/18 12:17 PM
Hi, Torrey !:))

Well, dear Torrey !
I do thank you so
much for your most
kind words !

I don´t know about
talent, but it is
fun to try and be
creative - keeps one´s
aging brains a-workin´

Cheers
Dani
Posted By: gibson Re: One Of These Days - 08/23/18 12:44 PM
A beautiful song to pedal along to, nice to hear you again.

Beautiful

Alyn
Posted By: dani48 Re: One Of These Days - 08/23/18 06:54 PM
Hi, Alyn !:))

Thank you for your most
kind words ! Have been
missin´you, ol´friend !

Cheers
Dani
Posted By: gibson Re: One Of These Days - 08/26/18 12:09 PM
Beautiful Dani

You have a wonderful voice making this a beautiful song to your loved one.
I enjoy all your stuff Surfing or cycling

Take care

Alyn
Posted By: dani48 Re: One Of These Days - Off To Spain ! - 08/31/18 08:57 PM
Hi, Alyn !


Forgive me this late answer to
your comments, just have not
been able to answer earlier !
Am preparing myself for a
monthlong trip to Spain where
the party will be on Sept the fifteenth !
Thank you dear alyn for those
most kind words !:))

Cheers
Dani
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