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Posted By: gruverider When Papa Comes Home - 08/18/18 12:47 AM
https://soundcloud.com/lawrence-olivier/when-papa-comes-home

I knew that wrote this song awhile ago but I was surprised to find that I wrote this on 10/31/2007. Eleven years ago!


I didn't think I could do it with BIAB but the acoustic guitar 2403 Funkyfolk made it possible.


The Band:
RealTracks in style: ~1433:Bass, Electric, JazzFunkGroovin Ev16 110
RealTracks in style: ~1437:Piano, Electric, Rhythm JazzFunkGroovin Ev16 110
RealTracks in style: 2403:Guitar, Acoustic, Rhythm FunkyFolk Ev16 110
RealTracks in style: ~1436:Guitar, Electric, Rhythm JazzFunkGroovinMute Ev16 110
RealTracks in song: 587:Sax, Tenor, 2-Beat Rock Ev 110
RealTracks in song: 1570:Guitar, Electric, Rhythm Soul60sHighBackBeat Ev 110
RealDrums in style: JazzFunkGroovin^1-a:HHSdStk, b:HHSnare


When Poppa Comes Home (10/31/2007)

Mama, what you gonna do when Papa
what you gonna do when Papa
what you gonna do
when Papa comes home and he’s looking for you

Papa he don’t like his supper cold
Papa you know he like his back door closed
Papa he don’t like his bed warm oooo, Mama
Mama what you gonna do? Me and my little brother gonna tattle on you

Mama, where you gonna run now Mama
Where you gonna run pretty Mama
Where you gonna run Mama You can’t hide Papa gonna find you

Papa he gonna hunt your pale [*****] down
Papa he gonna look all over town
Papa you know what that bad man will do Mama,
Mama what you gonna do
Me and little brother gonna tattled on you

Mama tell you what I’ll do pretty Mama,
Tell you what I’ll do now Mama, tell you what I’ll do
When Papa comes home I’ll cover for you

Papa he won’t know a damn thing’s wrong
Papa he’ll be singing a happy song
Papa he gonna smile and kiss you too
Mama that’s what I’ll do

Me and little brother well… got secrets too!
Posted By: Greg Johnson Re: When Papa Comes Home - 08/18/18 03:52 AM
OUTSTANDING!!! Missed seeing you around here lately Lawrence! Love hearing that soulful voice......man you can belt it out! Great funky groove you've got going here. Sax sounds like it was played custom. Enjoyed this immensely!!! Welcome back. Greg
Posted By: jannesan Re: When Papa Comes Home - 08/18/18 04:34 AM
Excellent funky groove! Great selection of instruments and mix, especially that growling bass. Great vocals and bit scary lyrics suit the song well.

Janne
Posted By: RnAM Re: When Papa Comes Home - 08/18/18 05:49 PM
Lawrence,

This is quite some coincidence! Yesterday we said to each other: "We haven't heard any new songs from Lawrence lately..."
And there you are.
Quite an exciting song Lawrence! (It's new to us)

And we completely agree with Greg!

Rob and Anne-Marie
Posted By: gruverider Re: When Papa Comes Home - 08/18/18 05:52 PM
Originally Posted By: Greg Johnson
OUTSTANDING!!! Missed seeing you around here lately Lawrence! Love hearing that soulful voice......man you can belt it out! Great funky groove you've got going here. Sax sounds like it was played custom. Enjoyed this immensely!!! Welcome back. Greg
Greg, thanks for listening and for the kind words. I've found that can only go so long and then I have to take a break. But it's good to post again. I'm really liking Studio One.

At first I didn't like the Sax and thought that I would eventually replace it. At the very end of the mixing process it worked out.
Posted By: dani48 Re: When Papa Comes Home - 08/18/18 05:56 PM
Hi, Lawrence !

This is outright brilliant allthrough !
Love it from start to finnish !!!
Good to hear from friend Lawrence again !:))

Cheers
Dani
Posted By: gruverider Re: When Papa Comes Home - 08/18/18 06:01 PM
Originally Posted By: jannesan
Excellent funky groove! Great selection of instruments and mix, especially that growling bass. Great vocals and bit scary lyrics suit the song well.

Janne
Janne, thank you. It was fun to record. That bass sound is something I've been working on. I mixed in a guitar distortion plugin and a short slap-back delay and that was interesting.
Posted By: gruverider Re: When Papa Comes Home - 08/18/18 06:05 PM
Originally Posted By: RnAM
Lawrence,

This is quite some coincidence! Yesterday we said to each other: "We haven't heard any new songs from Lawrence lately..."
And there you are.
Quite an exciting song Lawrence! (It's new to us)

And we completely agree with Greg!

Rob and Anne-Marie
Rob and Anne-Marie, It's good to hear from you. A nice coincidence as yesterday was the day I recorded the vocals and uploaded the song. You must have sent me a signal or something.


Although I wrote the song in 2007, I have never recorded it before. So it would be new in that since.
Posted By: gruverider Re: When Papa Comes Home - 08/18/18 06:06 PM
Originally Posted By: dani48
Hi, Lawrence !

This is outright brilliant allthrough !
Love it from start to finnish !!!
Good to hear from friend Lawrence again !:))

Cheers
Dani
Dani, thank you friend! Glad you enjoyed it!
Posted By: PeterF Re: When Papa Comes Home - 08/18/18 09:38 PM
Lawrence

Sounds fantastic (great mix) - a brilliant vocal sung with great conviction -love the bends.
Wonderful composition all round.

Peter
Posted By: rayc Re: When Papa Comes Home - 08/19/18 02:05 AM
I do hope that there's typo in ""Me and little brother we got secretes too".
Well arranged though the bass seems a little too growly all the way through - sounds more like a clavinet in parts.
Are you going to sort out an ending?
Cool stuff.
Posted By: Noel96 Re: When Papa Comes Home - 08/19/18 03:51 AM
Lawrence,

It's really great to see you in the forum again.

This performance of yours is truly the stuff of inspiration. It rings with sincerity, commitment, raw honesty and competence. From start to end, the track sizzles! As with all your songs, once I started listening, there was no turning back! Love that note that you use for "close". Super writing and arranging and mega-super singing!

All the best,
Noel
Posted By: Al-David Re: When Papa Comes Home - 08/19/18 05:11 AM
Holy Crap! Soul, Alt Rock and Funk gettin' down funky! This just a way too cool number, no matter how you slice and dice it. One of the most fun songs I've head on the forum in ages. This is soooooooo cool it's covered in frost.

Absolutely love it! So much fun!!!



Alan
Posted By: BlueAttitude Re: When Papa Comes Home - 08/19/18 07:21 AM
Great groove! Fun lyrics and great vocal also.

Nice arrangement and mix too too, lots of interest in the way you bring in the instruments and use the stereo spectrum, sounds fabulous through the 'phones.

Enjoyed the listen!
Posted By: GocartMoz Re: When Papa Comes Home - 08/19/18 08:23 AM
Great funky tune. Enjoyed the use of all the instruments. Loved the guita rolling along in the right channel and especially liked the sax solo. The only thing I didn’t particularly care for was the abrupt ending. I wanted more. Great job.

Dave
Posted By: David Snyder Re: When Papa Comes Home - 08/19/18 11:58 AM

Oh yeah!

This is what I'm talking about. Love this. Reminds me some of Stevie Wonder and some of Dr. John, but still totally Gruverider.

Great to have you back.

Outstanding vocals.
Posted By: 44kfl Re: When Papa Comes Home - 08/19/18 02:18 PM
Bad assed!

or bad ***ed!

super vocal and super groove

love the sax

enjoyed!

Kenny
Posted By: gruverider Re: When Papa Comes Home - 08/19/18 03:45 PM
Originally Posted By: PeterF
Lawrence

Sounds fantastic (great mix) - a brilliant vocal sung with great conviction -love the bends.
Wonderful composition all round.

Peter
Thank you Peter!
Posted By: gruverider Re: When Papa Comes Home - 08/19/18 03:47 PM
Originally Posted By: rayc
I do hope that there's typo in ""Me and little brother we got secretes too".
Well arranged though the bass seems a little too growly all the way through - sounds more like a clavinet in parts.
Are you going to sort out an ending?
Cool stuff.
rayc, thank you! and I fixed the typo. I don't have plans to revisit the song right now but I'm always going back and rearranging songs.
Posted By: Torrey Bliss Re: When Papa Comes Home - 08/19/18 05:04 PM
Lawrence, that was a great listen! Your vocal, as always, is exceptional! Great job using the Realtracks to make this happen! Thanks, Torrey
Posted By: MarioD Re: When Papa Comes Home - 08/19/18 05:07 PM
Love the groove on this one. You had me in your back pocket from the git-go.

Outstanding vocal. That sax lead fit perfectly. Super mix.
Posted By: floyd jane Re: When Papa Comes Home - 08/20/18 07:06 PM
OUTSTANDING!, Lawrence...

Soulful.

Excellent arrangement, Superb mix. Great use of BIAB.

Star-quality vocals. (You should be famous).

MUSIC at its best!

fj
Posted By: beatmaster Re: When Papa Comes Home - 08/21/18 09:16 AM
Soul Soul Soul ..Brilliant song and the rhythm is all there I was gone.

Back to the ole soul ways of life.

The music to me sounded similar in style to an old program/ film called Shaft.

You have a great unique voice.
Posted By: Robertkc Re: When Papa Comes Home - 08/21/18 01:44 PM
Lawrence,

Love that gravelly voice -you can sing anything, but its good to hear you get funky like this.
Personally I like the growly bass.
Lyrics have the attitude I`d expect to match the groove.
A cool song to make your reemergence here!

Robert
Posted By: Janice & Bud Re: When Papa Comes Home - 08/21/18 04:57 PM
Ahh yes!! At last another gruve song for our fav playlist...woohoo!

We're not gonna parse it out...rather listen again.

Take a soul packed vocal, a great write, a cool arrangement and a great production...put it all together and you have a pro sounding radio/streaming platform ready sound. We can so easily hear this on the curated playlists we listen to daily on Apple Music.

Good as it gets and thanks for sharing it!!!

J&B
Posted By: dcuny Re: When Papa Comes Home - 08/21/18 05:41 PM
Funky! Nice arrangement, really well done.

Fun to listen to. smile
Posted By: gruverider Re: When Papa Comes Home - 08/21/18 05:59 PM
Originally Posted By: Noel96
Lawrence,

It's really great to see you in the forum again.

This performance of yours is truly the stuff of inspiration. It rings with sincerity, commitment, raw honesty and competence. From start to end, the track sizzles! As with all your songs, once I started listening, there was no turning back! Love that note that you use for "close". Super writing and arranging and mega-super singing!

All the best,
Noel
Noel, thank for your kind words. You are always very generous.
I'm glad to hear that the commitment comes through. On a song like this I think you have to really "go for it".
Posted By: gruverider Re: When Papa Comes Home - 08/21/18 06:01 PM
Originally Posted By: Al-David
Holy Crap! Soul, Alt Rock and Funk gettin' down funky! This just a way too cool number, no matter how you slice and dice it. One of the most fun songs I've head on the forum in ages. This is soooooooo cool it's covered in frost.

Absolutely love it! So much fun!!!



Alan
You made me chuckle with the "Holy Crap!". Thank you. I'm glad to hear you enjoyed it.
Posted By: gruverider Re: When Papa Comes Home - 08/21/18 06:03 PM
Originally Posted By: BlueAttitude
Great groove! Fun lyrics and great vocal also.

Nice arrangement and mix too too, lots of interest in the way you bring in the instruments and use the stereo spectrum, sounds fabulous through the 'phones.

Enjoyed the listen!
Thanks for listening and for the kind comments. I'm glad you liked it.
Posted By: Janice & Bud Re: When Papa Comes Home - 08/23/18 08:57 AM
Originally Posted By: Janice & Bud
Ahh yes!! At last another gruve song for our fav playlist...woohoo!

We're not gonna parse it out...rather listen again.

Take a soul packed vocal, a great write, a cool arrangement and a great production...put it all together and you have a pro sounding radio/streaming platform ready sound. We can so easily hear this on the curated playlists we listen to daily on Apple Music.

Good as it gets and thanks for sharing it!!!

J&B



Back again....it just gets better and better!
Posted By: Deryk - PG Music Re: When Papa Comes Home - 08/23/18 12:05 PM
What a tune! I thoroughly enjoyed this one. Your vocal performance is top notch, and that funky groove is fantastic. Super catchy as well, and very well put together. All the instruments compliment one another perfectly and the mix is crisp and professional.

Great work and thanks for sharing smile
Posted By: gruverider Re: When Papa Comes Home - 08/23/18 09:36 PM
Originally Posted By: GocartMoz
Great funky tune. Enjoyed the use of all the instruments. Loved the guita rolling along in the right channel and especially liked the sax solo. The only thing I didn’t particularly care for was the abrupt ending. I wanted more. Great job.

Dave
Dave, I'm glad to hear that you were disappointed that the song ended. Thank you for listening and commenting.
Posted By: gruverider Re: When Papa Comes Home - 08/23/18 09:39 PM
Originally Posted By: David Snyder

Oh yeah!

This is what I'm talking about. Love this. Reminds me some of Stevie Wonder and some of Dr. John, but still totally Gruverider.

Great to have you back.

Outstanding vocals.
David, very high praise indeed. I love both of those artists. Thank you.
Posted By: gruverider Re: When Papa Comes Home - 08/23/18 09:40 PM
Originally Posted By: 44kfl
Bad assed!

or bad ***ed!

super vocal and super groove

love the sax

enjoyed!

Kenny
Thank you for listening and for the kind words Kenny
Posted By: rsdean Re: When Papa Comes Home - 08/25/18 12:27 PM
Lawrence,

I am a big fan of yours... You always raise the level of artistry with everything you do.

An amazing song and performance.

Bob
Posted By: gruverider Re: When Papa Comes Home - 08/25/18 07:23 PM
Originally Posted By: Torrey Bliss
Lawrence, that was a great listen! Your vocal, as always, is exceptional! Great job using the Realtracks to make this happen! Thanks, Torrey
Thank you Torrey!
Posted By: gruverider Re: When Papa Comes Home - 08/25/18 07:24 PM
Originally Posted By: MarioD
Love the groove on this one. You had me in your back pocket from the git-go.

Outstanding vocal. That sax lead fit perfectly. Super mix.
The sax ended up working much better than I thought it would when I first rendered it. And thank you Mario!
Posted By: gruverider Re: When Papa Comes Home - 08/25/18 07:25 PM
Originally Posted By: floyd jane
OUTSTANDING!, Lawrence...

Soulful.

Excellent arrangement, Superb mix. Great use of BIAB.

Star-quality vocals. (You should be famous).

MUSIC at its best!

fj
Thank you Floyd. You're always encouraging and kind.
Posted By: gruverider Re: When Papa Comes Home - 08/25/18 07:26 PM
Originally Posted By: beatmaster
Soul Soul Soul ..Brilliant song and the rhythm is all there I was gone.

Back to the ole soul ways of life.

The music to me sounded similar in style to an old program/ film called Shaft.

You have a great unique voice.
Thank you very much. I love that old sound!
Posted By: gruverider Re: When Papa Comes Home - 08/25/18 07:27 PM
Originally Posted By: Robertkc
Lawrence,

Love that gravelly voice -you can sing anything, but its good to hear you get funky like this.
Personally I like the growly bass.
Lyrics have the attitude I`d expect to match the groove.
A cool song to make your reemergence here!

Robert
Robert, as always thank you for your generous words!
Posted By: gruverider Re: When Papa Comes Home - 08/25/18 07:29 PM
Originally Posted By: Janice & Bud
Ahh yes!! At last another gruve song for our fav playlist...woohoo!

We're not gonna parse it out...rather listen again.

Take a soul packed vocal, a great write, a cool arrangement and a great production...put it all together and you have a pro sounding radio/streaming platform ready sound. We can so easily hear this on the curated playlists we listen to daily on Apple Music.

Good as it gets and thanks for sharing it!!!

J&B

Thank you both! You are the best!
Posted By: animarorecords Re: When Papa Comes Home - 08/29/18 02:10 AM
Hello, Lawrence

It's very nice to hear your soulful voice in the forum again.
Very soulful.
I felt Ray Charles a lot in this tune.
It is really cool and great the combination of Acoustic Guitar and Rhodes Piano at the intro.
Enjoyed my listen a lot.

Best regards.

Shigeki Adachi
Posted By: gruverider Re: When Papa Comes Home - 09/01/18 03:57 PM
Originally Posted By: dcuny
Funky! Nice arrangement, really well done.

Fun to listen to. smile
Thank you very much!
Posted By: gruverider Re: When Papa Comes Home - 09/01/18 03:58 PM
Originally Posted By: Janice & Bud
Originally Posted By: Janice & Bud
Ahh yes!! At last another gruve song for our fav playlist...woohoo!

We're not gonna parse it out...rather listen again.

Take a soul packed vocal, a great write, a cool arrangement and a great production...put it all together and you have a pro sounding radio/streaming platform ready sound. We can so easily hear this on the curated playlists we listen to daily on Apple Music.

Good as it gets and thanks for sharing it!!!

J&B



Back again....it just gets better and better!

Thank you again!!
Posted By: gruverider Re: When Papa Comes Home - 09/01/18 03:58 PM
Originally Posted By: Deryk - PG Music
What a tune! I thoroughly enjoyed this one. Your vocal performance is top notch, and that funky groove is fantastic. Super catchy as well, and very well put together. All the instruments compliment one another perfectly and the mix is crisp and professional.

Great work and thanks for sharing smile
Deryk, thank you very much!
Posted By: gruverider Re: When Papa Comes Home - 09/01/18 03:59 PM
Originally Posted By: rsdean
Lawrence,

I am a big fan of yours... You always raise the level of artistry with everything you do.

An amazing song and performance.

Bob
Thank you Bob. And I'm a big fan of yours as well.
Posted By: gruverider Re: When Papa Comes Home - 09/01/18 04:00 PM
Originally Posted By: animarorecords
Hello, Lawrence

It's very nice to hear your soulful voice in the forum again.
Very soulful.
I felt Ray Charles a lot in this tune.
It is really cool and great the combination of Acoustic Guitar and Rhodes Piano at the intro.
Enjoyed my listen a lot.

Best regards.

Shigeki Adachi
Thank you. It's always good to hear from you.
Posted By: tommyad Re: When Papa Comes Home - 09/04/18 08:56 AM
Funkiness and soulful! Another great vocal and a fine write and production. You continue be one of my favorite artists. Well done, Tom
Posted By: gruverider Re: When Papa Comes Home - 09/07/18 05:32 PM
Originally Posted By: tommyad
Funkiness and soulful! Another great vocal and a fine write and production. You continue be one of my favorite artists. Well done, Tom
Well Tom you are one of my favorite artists also. Thank you for the kind words!
Posted By: Ezekiel's Storm Re: When Papa Comes Home - 09/07/18 06:21 PM
Extraordinarily good, all around!!!!
Posted By: gruverider Re: When Papa Comes Home - 09/10/18 08:45 PM
Originally Posted By: Ezekiel's Storm
Extraordinarily good, all around!!!!
Ezekiel's Storm, thank you for the kind words.
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