Within Time
https://soundcloud.com/randall-smith-919632681/within-time-1

Any input about this first post of a song I've been working on would be appreciated.

Randall Smith

Solo guitar: Epiphone Les Paul Custom with Benedetto A6 pickups, neck position
Only effect is some reverb
Audio track for solo from miked Roland JC40 amplifier
_DESERTD.STY used for all but the melody/solo
Added #2718, finger picking guitar to Melody track

Well, your playing is great! not sure if this is your first project with BIAB or just your first post, but you used the style very well as a backdrop for your playing. Let us know if this is your first try with BIAB!

Cool tune Randall. Really nice tune. Excellent backtrack to jam to.

Nice wee jam along, nice playing

Hi Randall, welcome to the showcase!

Nice track, and very nice melodic playing.

Since you are asking for input the first thing you should do is move that hard left panned solo guitar to the center or close to it, it is the featured instrument so needs to be upfront.

But great first post! Looking forward to hearing more, I love hearing guitar played like this.

Randall,

Welcome to the Showcase.

A nice listen - a nice snappy pace to this. I agree with Dave's advice - your guitar should be close to center since it is the "singer" here...

Enjoyed.

floyd

Nice work on this, and welcome to the showcase I love how gentle and peaceful this sounds. It reminds me of Bob James a bit. The keys work wonderfully too, and the entire tune has a really beautiful flow to it.

Great job - can't wait to hear more from you! Thanks for sharing

Thanks to you all for the kind comments. I'll move the solo to the center to see how that sounds. Randall