Hi, friends !
I have been too long away from the forum due
to our trip to Spain and troubles with my
recording gear ! Should be fixed (I guess )?
In any case, here is my latest tune written
for My Li !:))
Haven´t managed to get Soundcloud to accept the mp3
yet so I hereby post the link to box:
http://app.box.com/s/8qthpc0sfqk2y466i1e0mg5kqh9ddvpeand as I got it to work on soundcloud.......
http://soundcloud.com/user-337827005/my-liAfter a lot of wrestling with the gear I could do the
recording with mixcraft 8 on my laptop - compressor
and reverb used sparsely but more on certain instruments
Cheers
Dani
PS Here comes the lyrics:
MY LI (Words & Music by Norman Wibe)
You´ve made a lovely sign
it´s workin´on my mind
t´was so wonderful to find
that you´re so sweet n´kind
so kindly on my mind
my mind
Everytime you´re out of sight
nothin´seems allright
´cause I wanna hold you tight
so tight, allthrough the night
all night , so lightly tight
so light
It´s simply
it´s simply ´cause I love you so
somethin´you already know n´knew
long time ago, anew
anew
Please, come to me (babe)
I´m as lonely as can be
you know I love you Li
I´ll always love you Li
my Li, love you Li,
my Li
You´ve made a lovely sign
it´s workin´on my mind
it´s so wonderful to find
that you´re so sweet n´kind
so kindly on my mind
my mind
Solo
Please, come to me (babe)
I´m as lonely as can be
you know I love you Li
I´ll always love you Li
my Li, love my Li,
my Li
The Style is _Burning.STY (Burning Slow Funk)
and the instros are: Bass: 1636, Piano: 1639, Drums:
RD:s Jazz Funk Fiery, Guitar1 : 1771, Guitar2: 2816 Elec guitar soloist smooth soul slow Brent
Nice work Dani! Love that groove here, and your vocals are unique and attention-grabbing. The mix sounds really well done too, and I enjoyed the chord progression.
Thanks for sharing
Nice, Dani.
That BAND is a terrific vehicle for your vocal.
Sounds good. Your all-time best!
fj
Cool song!
love the groove
a very nice write, love the changes
smooth soul slow Brent is awesome
Kenny
Dani
A really good sound - excellent band choice and a very nice intimate vocal.
Nicely done.
Peter
You and the band are burnin'!
You have produced a fine intimate warm sound.
Excellent vocal performance and placement in the mix.
We much enjoyed it!!
J&B
Hi, Deryk !:))
I feel most humbled by
your most kind words -
thank you for them so much !:))
Cheers
Dani
Dani..completely enjoyed my listen to your message of intimacy...kind of like romantic eaves-dropping!! Loved the deep, resonant vocal, and your heartfelt lyric..production, top-notch, and loved the style selection...well done!!
Very cool backtrack Dani and as always and excellent vocal. Well done...
Nice one and moving tribute to your fine lady.
Hi, Floyd !:))
Well, I´m so glad
you found this one
of my best (or all-time
best to be precise)!!
I have had a lot of
different tunes going on
and as they just did not
advance, I had to go down
deep for being able to
get something posted !
I thank you so much for
your most kind words !
Cheers
Dani
Hi, Kenny !:))
Thank you so much for
your most kind comments
really appreciated !:))
Cheers
Dani
So smooth. My goodness, this is warmth. Sweet easy jazz backing and lead supporting low and warm vocals so intimate I was almost embarrassed to listen.
Very, very nice.
Hi, Peter !:))
I feel much obliged
and thankful for your
most kind comments -
thank you for them !!:))
Cheers
Dani
Hi, Bud & Janice !:))
I do agree with you, yes !
Really felt like burning !!!
and that Brent solo - pheeew !
So very many thanks for your
most kind words ! Gracias to
both of you !!!!
Cheers
Dani
Hi, Tano !:))
So very nice you did
like this little piece
I wrote for my Lady love !
Thank you so much for
your most kind and
inspiring words !:))
Cheers
Dani
Hi, Scott !!:))
Thank you so very much
for your most kind and
inspiring comments !
Cheers
Dani
Hi Dani,
What a terrific love song and such a wonderful tribute to Li. I LOVE those low notes in the melody. Your bass-baritone register is a delight to listen to.
Once again, you've taken me on a very enjoyable musical journey.
All the best,
Noel
Hello Chris37, great work on this! The arrangement is wonderful to the ears and the vibe is very appealing. Quite enjoyed those guitar licks too. Fantastic work on the vocals. Great work!
Hello, Dani
Wonderful love song!
I agree with Tano Music.
Completely enjoyed my listen to your message of intimacy...kind of like romantic eaves-dropping!
Loved the deep, resonant vocal, and your heartfelt lyric..production, top-notch, and loved the style selection...well done!
Best regards.
Shigeki Adachi
Great smooth romantic soul song, nice to hear the combination of your low voice and sweet lyrics
Excellent band with great soloist, definitely burning.
Janne
Hi, Beatmaster !:))
Thank you so very much
for your most kind words
that really warmed me !!:))
Cheers
Dani
Dani,
I agree with other posters - this is such a warm vocal performance. I like the contrast with your surf songs - no harmonies needed! we are listening to something personal and sincere :less is more is epitomised in this love song.
Whatever production issues you had they`ve been overcome!
Robert
Hi, Tangmo !:))
I am most humbled by
your more than kind
words - thank you so much
for them !:))
Cheers
Dani
Hi, Noel, ol´friend !:))
I am profoundly glad
that I could take you
on an enjoyable musical
journey with this little
tune for my lovely Lady Li !
Thank you so much for
your most kind words !
Cheers
Dani
Hi, Joe !:))
Thank you so very much
for your most kind
comments - really much
appreciated !:))
Cheers
Dani
Nice work on this one Dani I enjoyed the listen
Hi, Shigeki !
What nice words you
do bestowe on my little
love song - thank you so
very much for them !:))
Cheers
Dani
Wonderful! One of your best yet!
This style fits your deep, rich voice so, so well!
Glad to hear another great song from you!!!
Thanks Janne !
Really glad you liked
this little romantic tune
of mine ! Thank you for your
most kind words !:))
Cheers
Dani
Another side of Dani.....the smooth jazz cat!! Very pretty music! Reminds me of the old George Benson stuff. I'm sure your lady was tickled pink! Great song!! Take care. Greg
Hi, Robert !:))
I am truly glad for your
most kind words ! Warmed
me up here in the slowly cooling
North !:))
Thank you !
Cheers
Dani
Very nice, Dani!
Band sounds good, and man, quite the vibrato happening on that vocal!
The spoken word leading into the solo was perfect.
Your best yet I think.
Hi, Graham !
Thank you so much
for your most kind
comments - really
much appreciated !
Cheers
Dani
This sounds great Dani!
Your voice great!
Wonderful mix, dude.
Aloha!!
Dani, this is a very different type tune than I’m used to hearing from you but you pulled it off nicely! Really like that smooth sounding backtrack! Really good job! Thanks, Torrey
Dani,
Such a romantic song for your Li!
Keep them going this way.
Rob and Anne-Marie
Hi, Lawrence ....and ye other friends of mine !
My gear has broken down so I do not have the
means to make music for the moment ! This has
been due to my move to Li where I live now but don´t
worry, sooner or later my gear will function again
and I´ll be able to do sweet music again !
my good ol´friend Lawrence - I wanna thank
you for your most kind comments - thank you !
.....and all of you I want to wish a most Merry
Christmas and a most Happy New Year !!!:))
Yours
Dani
Thank you so much Greg !
So nice to get those most kind words
from you !
Cheers
Dani
That's a wonderful love song with a very good choice in instruments and arrangement, and you have a really nice and warm voice which I like a lot!
I'm sorry that I seem to be the only one who has some criticism, but in my opinion you overdo the vibrato in your vocals. Not the amount ( you have a really beautiful vibrato in your voice), but how long you hold it. Almost every phrase ends with a loooong vibrato which sounds almost artificial.
I think slowly moving out of the vibrato would sound much better. To me vibrato is like a spice, it emphasizes and improves the taste of a meal, but when used too much it overpowers the taste.
Dani,
This is the 1st song of yours i've heard!
It is mellow, relaxing & has a good message.
Nicely done.Thanks for sharing
Billy
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LINKS TO MY BIAB SONGS
Billybmusic
https://soundcloud.com/user-630191248
Hi, B.D. !
I do believe you are completely right !
I often do have problems with holding a tone
for too long ! A shorter note would
resort in lesser vibrato !
I´m sorry , in this tune I just got
carried away !
Thank you for your most kind comments !
Cheers
Dani
Dani fantastic groove
Love that backing band, it fits your vocal perfectly
Li should be very happy about this one
Super vocal
One of your best
Loved it
You did such a great job with that back track! It works so well with your voice. This has got to be one of the best I've heard from you. The production was perfect giving the over all song vibe work wonders. Fantastic job with this one!
Hi Dani
Great song
Sounds very good
Your singing fits perfectly to this music
Really cool done Dani
Many greetings
Andi ;-)