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Posted By: DaveBrooksMusic New Mix: "The Look In Your Eyes" - 10/22/18 10:21 PM
HI Ya'll

I think I corrected some of the problems with this song... for now anywho!

If you're interested in this new mix, just click the link!

All the best,
Dave

https://soundcloud.com/davebrooksmusicfactory/the-look-in-your-eyes
Posted By: rayc Re: New Mix: "The Look In Your Eyes" - 10/23/18 01:05 AM
There's an odd click at 0.18.
Posted By: Tano Music Re: New Mix: "The Look In Your Eyes" - 10/25/18 10:20 AM
Dave, I liked some elements of this track and others I was not so hot on. I really liked the composition, I love the string textures and I thought your lyric was really really good. I thought the vocal was a little strained at points. And I thought that the abrupt stops at the end of your segments were a bit too sharp...I like the idea of the stops right there, but maybe not so sharp-edged. I missed your earlier post so maybe you could lyric but for me I really like to read along as I listen. Also in general I love your focus on strain on your pieces… Keep it going!
Posted By: Joe -PG Music Re: New Mix: "The Look In Your Eyes" - 10/25/18 09:20 PM
Hi Dave, Nice work on this mix down! Definitely an improvement there seems to be more clarity around 500hz. Well done!
Posted By: Al-David Re: New Mix: "The Look In Your Eyes" - 10/26/18 04:45 AM
Hello Dave,

I haven't heard the original but this nicely done. The strings compliment the melody very nicely. The only thing that caught my ear that might benefit from another look is the abruptness of the stops. If you could let the vocal and backing tracks fade a bit until you pick up again, I think that would be something to consider -just my opinion, though.

Terrific song!

Alan
Posted By: DaveBrooksMusic Re: New Mix: "The Look In Your Eyes" - 11/03/18 06:03 PM
Thanks!

I think I got it!
Posted By: DaveBrooksMusic Re: New Mix: "The Look In Your Eyes" - 11/03/18 06:07 PM
Hi Tano!

Sorry it took me so long to reply. I decided to remix this baby. I tore it down and rebuilt it altogether.

As usual, I'll meet most people half way! =D

All the best,
Dave

https://soundcloud.com/davebrooksmusicfactory/the-look-in-your-eyes
Posted By: DaveBrooksMusic Re: New Mix: "The Look In Your Eyes" - 11/03/18 06:12 PM
Zup ya'll!!!

Sorry it took me so long to reply but I decided to do a total reconstruct of this diddy. I think I tried to meet you half way on this, but it feels better to me now also! Like I said, there are no perfect songs because many people love the breaks! =D

Anywho, here-we-go!

All the best,
Dave

https://soundcloud.com/davebrooksmusicfactory/the-look-in-your-eyes
Posted By: DaveBrooksMusic Re: New Mix: "The Look In Your Eyes" - 11/03/18 06:13 PM
Hi Joe!!!

What's wrong with your ears??? =D LOL!!!

Try again!!!

All the best
Dave

https://soundcloud.com/davebrooksmusicfactory/the-look-in-your-eyes
Posted By: edshaw Re: New Mix: "The Look In Your Eyes" - 11/03/18 08:29 PM
Sounds good, Dave. Strong inventive devices; meaning, pauses, stings, tension and resolve, those kinds of things.
Posted By: DaveBrooksMusic Re: New Mix: "The Look In Your Eyes" - 11/04/18 12:38 AM
Hi Mr. Shaw!

Right again as usual!

Thanks for the listen...

All the best,
Dave
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