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Posted By: rsdean Light It Up - 11/24/18 08:16 PM
Hi All,

Here's something new...

This is called Light It Up.

Looking down our empty street
I can see the rain’s still falling
And was it yesterday
Some real promises were broken
I don’t know just what is real
Cause I’m aware I’m falling
This house is quiet tonight
Except for the strangers calling

So good
So fine
Light it up baby
Just one more time
Before you go
Turn it up
Burn it down

Looking down memory lane
I can see the shadows falling
And was it in my mind
Some final words were spoken
I don’t accept what I feel
Cause I know you’re falling
This is my last appeal
Except for the days I’m calling

So good
So fine
Light it up baby
Just one more time
Before you go
Turn it up
Burn it down

So good
So fine
Light it up baby
Just one more time
Before you go
Turn it up
Burn it down

All BIAB Tracks:
2474: Bass, Acoustic, Held Ev 085
2505: Piano, Electric, HeldChords 085
1118: Guitar, 12-String Acoustic, Strumming Ev 085
365: Guitar, Acoustic, Fingerpicking Ev 085
832: Guitar, Electric, Rhythm, AltCountryMoody Ev 075
Loop: Chillout/Chillout_dimensions_145
RealDrums: PopPromiseEv16 a:Snare on 4, HiHat, b: Snare

As always - thanks for listening!

Bob
Posted By: Rob4580 Re: Light It Up - 11/24/18 08:56 PM
Really well written ballad. Reminded me of Dylon.
Posted By: Joe -PG Music Re: Light It Up - 11/24/18 09:22 PM
Well done rsdean! Really enjoyed the tempo that this is at. Great choice of instrumentation too they sound very nice together. Thanks for sharing!
Posted By: rayc Re: Light It Up - 11/24/18 09:39 PM
Sounds cool.
the 1st guitar chord is alarmingly loud though.
Your vocal is just right for the setting though there're some levels, plosives and essing that could be treated with a fast attack compressor etc. to make it sit even better.
Good work.
Posted By: Robertkc Re: Light It Up - 11/24/18 09:58 PM
Bob,

There`s a slow burn to this one I enjoyed - lots of emotion in your vocals especially the chorus.
Love that Americana rhythm guitar building through the song.
Very good!

Robert
Posted By: Al-David Re: Light It Up - 11/24/18 10:54 PM
Hi Robert,

You never disappoint. Every time I click onto one of your songs I know I'm in for a treat - and this was a delicious one! That slow burn Robert mentioned is spot on and works so nicely for this one. Your vocal sits right in it like an added touch of sugar in a hot chocolate. Totally enjoyed it! Best to you.
Posted By: Scott C Re: Light It Up - 11/24/18 11:37 PM
This sounded so good on the headphones. I really liked the intro. Your voice has always reminded me of Dylan. This is one of your best vocals Bob. Such a cool song. Perfect for a Saturday night.
Posted By: rsdean Re: Light It Up - 11/25/18 08:10 AM
Rob,

Thanks so much.

Bob
Posted By: BlueAttitude Re: Light It Up - 11/25/18 10:20 AM
I always enjoy hearing your music, such passion in those vocals! And great writing.

I liked that first guitar part, didn't seem too loud to me. Mix sounds good through both the studio headphones and monitors.

Another good song from you!
Posted By: Tano Music Re: Light It Up - 11/25/18 11:39 AM
Bob, enjoyed my listen! I especially liked:
1) how you created a distinction between the verse music and the 'in-between' bars...using the elec 12-string strum to 'calm down' the backing to support your verse vocals.
2) the strong, but simple chorus melody/lyric: using 2- to 4- syllables per line...very efficient and good for the listening!
3) your vocal, just right for the genre...and produced so professionally! I'm envious!!
4) the overall song didn't try to do too much, you stuck to your message, lyrically and musically--I think that really shows excellent design!

Thanks for posting your outstanding work!
Posted By: David Snyder Re: Light It Up - 11/25/18 11:40 AM

Bob,

This is so cool man! I really enjoyed this!

I can always count on you to give us a taste of the West Village, and those rainy, midnight, desolate, crime-ridden and forbidden streets with Lou Reed hunched over in the darkness smoking a cigarette on the corner standing in a pile of dirty New York City snow--

while everyone else is writing Christmas songs.

smile

I love it!!
Posted By: floyd jane Re: Light It Up - 11/25/18 11:54 AM
Bob,

You are on Fire! This oozes passion.


Good write. Good band. Awesome vocal.


Excellent listen start to finish.

fj
Posted By: dcuny Re: Light It Up - 11/25/18 02:45 PM
Enjoyed the listen - solid work all around.
Posted By: tommyad Re: Light It Up - 11/25/18 04:18 PM
Bob, I really like this one. The highly compressed snare and the dry elec rhythm guitar were inspired choices. The build to the higher melody in the choruses just let’s them fly. Great work, Tom
Posted By: rsdean Re: Light It Up - 11/25/18 05:00 PM
Joe,

Thanks so much.

Bob
Posted By: Will Josef Re: Light It Up - 11/25/18 09:18 PM
Very nice song, I enjoyed listening to this track. Very smooth and pleasant voice. Well done!

Will
Posted By: rsdean Re: Light It Up - 11/26/18 08:32 AM
Ray,

Thanks - appreciate the listen.

Bob
Posted By: rsdean Re: Light It Up - 11/26/18 01:31 PM
Robert,

I appreciate that - thanks!

Bob
Posted By: 44kfl Re: Light It Up - 11/26/18 02:05 PM
What a great reflective write,

So good
So fine
Light it up baby
Just one more time
Before you go
Turn it up
Burn it down

love these lines, so strong, so good

enjoyed the heck out of the listen,

Kenny
Posted By: rsdean Re: Light It Up - 11/27/18 08:30 AM
Alan,

Thanks. I appreciate that!

Bob
Posted By: Janice & Bud Re: Light It Up - 11/27/18 11:36 AM
"turn it up
burn it down"

That's worth the price of admission alone!

The lyric is succinct and just cuts through it all. And it is well delivered by your vocal performance and supported by a great band and mix (very effective builds and dynamics).

Nothing left to say other than we agree with ALL of the aforementioned accolades.

Terrific listen and addition to our playlist.

J&B
Posted By: F.M.M. Re: Light It Up - 11/27/18 12:47 PM
hi bob really well done great write excellent mix perfect thanks eric
Posted By: rsdean Re: Light It Up - 11/27/18 06:32 PM
Scott,

That's a great compliment - thank you.

Bob
Posted By: Guitarhacker Re: Light It Up - 11/27/18 07:02 PM
cool tune.

The bass was booming on my computer a bit. Might want to tame it. Since no one else has mentioned it, it might just be these crappy speakers.

I'll listen later on my buds.

Yeah that has a Lou Reed kind of feel.... mixed with Dylan.

I liked it.
Posted By: Jim Re: Light It Up - 11/27/18 08:20 PM
A good write... I also enjoyed the chord progression you chose... It fits the lyrics so well... I actually picked up the acoustic & strummed along... Nice production... I like it!
Posted By: Greg Johnson Re: Light It Up - 11/28/18 12:33 AM
Great sounding track Bob!! The bass may be a little loud....my headphones handle it well but it definitely resonates. The arrangement is awesome.......great build of the instruments. I think the band is PERFECT. Some really cool lyrics. Definitely one for your greatest hits album!! Take care. Greg
Posted By: PeterF Re: Light It Up - 11/28/18 07:18 AM
Bob

A superb ballad and an incredible passionate vocal. Agree with all the accolades.
Brilliant stuff.

Peter
Posted By: rsdean Re: Light It Up - 11/28/18 04:09 PM
Dave,

Thanks so much.

Bob
Posted By: Sergio Guarneri Re: Light It Up - 11/28/18 04:51 PM

Very nice song as usual. The starting chords remind me to Donovan's song "Atlantis" but here there is more rockin' energy.

Sergio
Posted By: rsdean Re: Light It Up - 11/29/18 08:01 AM
Tano,

That's a great review - I appreciate the time and listen.

Thanks,
Bob
Posted By: rsdean Re: Light It Up - 11/29/18 08:03 PM
David,

That's very kind of you - I appreciate that.

I am enjoying your new one as well!

Thanks,
Bob
Posted By: bluage Re: Light It Up - 11/30/18 10:53 PM
"rsdean"...

You write lyrics like someone who only comes outside at night (not literally, of course!), but in the sense that if they were exposed to the light of day, their meaning would be too much to bear. There are thoughts and feelings that simply must be communicated under the cover of darkness, because they're so intimate, and so personally revelatory. Isn't that the reason why our lovemaking so often takes place after the sun goes down?

The RealTracks provide a depth of musical empathy necessary to illuminate the drama in your anxious lyrics as they come out in your aching vocal. That held acoustic bass, in particular, is so deep and resonant that it sounds bottomless.

You create your own, unique world in your songs, "rsdean". "Light It Up" shows us another corner of it.

Peering into your reality,

LOREN


Posted By: rsdean Re: Light It Up - 12/01/18 09:37 PM
Floyd,

Much appreciated - thanks!

Bob
Posted By: rsdean Re: Light It Up - 12/02/18 09:51 AM
David,

Thanks very much.

Bob
Posted By: rsdean Re: Light It Up - 12/02/18 03:48 PM
Tom,

Thanks - very appreciated.

Bob
Posted By: rsdean Re: Light It Up - 12/02/18 10:03 PM
Will,

Thanks very much!

Bob
Posted By: Will Josef Re: Light It Up - 12/02/18 10:28 PM
Very nice song. I truly enjoyed listening. You have a very nice voice.


Will
Posted By: Torrey Bliss Re: Light It Up - 12/03/18 08:32 AM
Great work Bob! I like the way the backtrack builds and your vocal/lyrics are tops as always! Thanks, T
Posted By: rsdean Re: Light It Up - 12/03/18 06:45 PM
Kenny,

Thanks so much - it is appreciated!

Bob
Posted By: Marty Sorensen Re: Light It Up - 12/03/18 09:00 PM
Superb expression of broken promises.
Posted By: rsdean Re: Light It Up - 12/04/18 08:03 AM
Janice & Bud,

That's very kind... Thank you!

Bob
Posted By: rsdean Re: Light It Up - 12/04/18 09:34 PM
Eric,

Thanks so much.

Bob
Posted By: Deej56 Re: Light It Up - 12/05/18 12:41 AM
Robert,

Love your vocal on this, brings a lot of heart; you can feel the emotion. And the production, particularly your choice of instrumentation on that chorus—everything hits the right notes. Perfectly executed production—very impressive. Great stuff!

Best regards,

Deej
Posted By: rsdean Re: Light It Up - 12/05/18 09:28 AM
Herb,

Thanks - appreciate the listen.

Bob
Posted By: Sundance Re: Light It Up - 12/05/18 05:21 PM
Cool song "noir" and what a great sounding passionate vocal!
Posted By: animarorecords Re: Light It Up - 12/06/18 02:29 AM
Bob,

What an emotional vocal!
As many others say, I also remembered Dylan.
The contrast between Verse and chorus is exquisite.
The interlude guitar is very impressive.
Enjoyed my listen a lot.

Best regards.

Shigeki Adachi
Posted By: rsdean Re: Light It Up - 12/06/18 10:01 AM
Jim,

Thanks very much!

Bob
Posted By: cliftond Re: Light It Up - 12/06/18 11:30 AM
THis one is so clean and present sounding to my ears Robert and builds tempo just right to a climatic tone, brings my emotion along with it , just like a good song should. Great vocals also...... Cliff
Posted By: rsdean Re: Light It Up - 12/06/18 07:45 PM
Greg,

Much appreciated. Thanks!

Bob
Posted By: rsdean Re: Light It Up - 12/07/18 09:47 AM
Peter,

Thanks so much.

Bob
Posted By: Skyline Re: Light It Up - 12/07/18 09:57 AM
As others have said, there's a hypnotic slow burn to this song. And the passionate vocal delivery is outstanding. A strong song, well delivered Bob.

John
Posted By: rsdean Re: Light It Up - 12/07/18 06:29 PM
Sergio,

Much appreciated. Thanks.

Bob
Posted By: rsdean Re: Light It Up - 12/08/18 09:19 AM
Loren,

Always such a thoughtful review... It is very appreciated. Thanks. smile

Bob
Posted By: rsdean Re: Light It Up - 12/08/18 06:55 PM
Will,

Thank you!

Bob
Posted By: rsdean Re: Light It Up - 12/09/18 09:12 AM
Torrey,

Much appreciated - thanks!

Bob
Posted By: rsdean Re: Light It Up - 12/09/18 11:22 AM
Marty,

Thanks so much.

Bob
Posted By: rsdean Re: Light It Up - 12/09/18 11:50 AM
Deej,

That is very appreciated - thank you.

Bob
Posted By: rsdean Re: Light It Up - 12/09/18 11:51 AM
Josie,

Thanks! Great to hear from you. smile

Bob
Posted By: rsdean Re: Light It Up - 12/09/18 11:52 AM
Shigeki,

Thanks for listening and the kind words - much appreciated.
Posted By: rsdean Re: Light It Up - 12/09/18 03:56 PM
Cliff,

That is very appreciated - thanks!

Bob
Posted By: rsdean Re: Light It Up - 12/09/18 03:57 PM
John,

Thank you - that's very kind.

Bob
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