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Posted By: rsdean Taking Off For The Sun - 12/26/18 11:34 AM
Hi All,

Here's a song about old promises and second chances...

Also, my last song for 2018… smile

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I'm taking off for the sun
How bout you, climb aboard
I'm taking off for the sun
How bout you, baby climb aboard

I'll turn the ship when the nighttime comes
I'll melt the ice when the summer turns and runs
I'm taking off for the sun

I'm taking off for the sun
Where are you, don't be late
I'm taking off for the sun
Where are you, baby don't be late

I'll shoot the moon when you need a hired-gun
I'll reconnect when our signal comes undone
I'm taking off for the sun

I'll make the coffee when the morning comes
I'll paint the stars when we're out of fun
I'm taking off for the sun
Oh I'm taking off for the sun
Yeah I'm taking off for the sun

All BIAB Tracks:
2474: Bass, Acoustic, Held Ev 085
2505: Piano, Electric, HeldChords 085
2914: Guitar, Acoustic, Fingerpicking Folky16thsBrent Ev16 085
832: Guitar, Electric, Rhythm, AltCountryMoody Ev 075
Loop: Chillout/Chillout_dimensions_145
RealDrums: PopPromiseEv16 a:Snare on 4, HiHat, b: Snare

As always - thanks for listening!

Bob
Posted By: floyd jane Re: Taking Off For The Sun - 12/26/18 11:59 AM
Bob,

An excellent "simple" write (not as simple as it seems - a sign of a writer who "knows what he's doing...)

The BAND is excellent. You have found a sound that works perfectly for you songs. Sounds like a band that has been backing you for years (and they know what they are doing, too).

Sounds like a record.

Terrific.

fj
Posted By: 44kfl Re: Taking Off For The Sun - 12/26/18 01:08 PM
I also love the band

"Here's a song about old promises and second chances... "

great idea, great song

very much enjoyed the listen,

Kenny
Posted By: Scott C Re: Taking Off For The Sun - 12/26/18 06:50 PM
Very cool vocal Bob. Loved the backtrack and the guitar was excellent
Posted By: Robertkc Re: Taking Off For The Sun - 12/26/18 08:47 PM
Bob,
A very nice build to this- both instrumentally and in your vocals.
I love the way that guitar track holds the mood without being obtrusive and then comes out for the lead.
Very cool write, performance and production.

Robert
Posted By: Torrey Bliss Re: Taking Off For The Sun - 12/26/18 10:20 PM
What a way to end the year Bob! This one has a great chorus! Very nice lyrics as always and really good overall production! Thanks, Torrey
Posted By: rsdean Re: Taking Off For The Sun - 12/27/18 08:27 AM
Floyd,

That's very kind of you and very appreciated. Thanks.

Bob
Posted By: Jim Re: Taking Off For The Sun - 12/27/18 09:29 AM
You've created a good song to finish up 2018...
Looking forward to many more of your tunes in 2019...
Happy New Year!
Posted By: Janice & Bud Re: Taking Off For The Sun - 12/27/18 12:24 PM
"I'll shoot the moon when you need a hired-gun
I'll reconnect when our signal comes undone
I'm taking off for the sun"

Man, what a way to close out 2018. GREAT write....and vocal and production (love the build) to back up that write!

Those guitar fills are perfect for the song.

Kudos!

J&B
Posted By: David Snyder Re: Taking Off For The Sun - 12/27/18 01:17 PM

This is Rock and Roll Bob! I really enjoyed it! Great way to end 2018!!

Happy New Year coming!
Posted By: rsdean Re: Taking Off For The Sun - 12/27/18 02:07 PM
Kenny,

Thanks very much.

Bob
Posted By: dani48 Re: Taking Off For The Sun - 12/27/18 03:07 PM
Hi, Bob !

This tune must be one of your best !
At least is my favourite Bobtune
from now on ! You´re off for the sun !
Maybe, just maybe it would be better to
try mars instead ? I´ve heard it can be
quite warm closer to the sun ?

Just anxious for your wellbeing
as you know !:))

Cheers
Dani
Posted By: PeterF Re: Taking Off For The Sun - 12/27/18 05:55 PM
Bob

A really nice composition, good lyrics and a vocal full of character.
Enjoyed.

Peter
Posted By: rsdean Re: Taking Off For The Sun - 12/27/18 09:39 PM
Scott,

Thanks so much!

Bob
Posted By: rsdean Re: Taking Off For The Sun - 12/28/18 08:26 AM
Robert,

I appreciate that - thanks!

Bob
Posted By: BlueAttitude Re: Taking Off For The Sun - 12/28/18 08:50 AM
I love everything about this! Man, I could listen to you you sing all day, just something about your voice that gets me.

Killer job on the production too, great dynamics and build, and the mix sounds great through the 'phones.

Well done!
Posted By: rsdean Re: Taking Off For The Sun - 12/28/18 03:04 PM
Torrey,

Much appreciated - thank you!

Bob
Posted By: rsdean Re: Taking Off For The Sun - 12/28/18 10:33 PM
Jim,

Thanks - I appreciate the kind words.

Bob
Posted By: rsdean Re: Taking Off For The Sun - 12/29/18 10:44 AM
Janice & Bud,

Thanks so much - always appreciate your kind words and support.

Bob
Posted By: rsdean Re: Taking Off For The Sun - 12/29/18 09:43 PM
David,

Thanks so much - Happy New Year to you as well. smile

Bob
Posted By: Will Josef Re: Taking Off For The Sun - 12/29/18 11:39 PM
Very nice song. You have a good and pleasant voice. Really enjoyed listening to your track!

Will
Posted By: Crossroads Re: Taking Off For The Sun - 12/30/18 07:36 AM
Hi Bob,

that's a lovely tune, perfectly arranged and very nicely sung. I really enjoyed the listen.

Cheers,

Stefan
Posted By: rsdean Re: Taking Off For The Sun - 12/30/18 10:08 AM
Dani,

LOL! Thanks so much. smile

Bob
Posted By: rsdean Re: Taking Off For The Sun - 12/30/18 05:00 PM
Peter,

Thanks - much appreciated.

Bob
Posted By: F.M.M. Re: Taking Off For The Sun - 12/30/18 08:57 PM
hey bob this is the 2nd time I listen to this really great job on this this is a keeper for sure thanks eric
Posted By: rsdean Re: Taking Off For The Sun - 12/30/18 10:31 PM
Dave,

You are very kind... I really appreciate that - thanks!

Bob
Posted By: gruverider Re: Taking Off For The Sun - 12/31/18 03:07 AM
I always love your songs! You are a true visionary! Happy new year!!!
Posted By: rsdean Re: Taking Off For The Sun - 12/31/18 09:04 AM
Will,

Thanks so much.

Bob
Posted By: rsdean Re: Taking Off For The Sun - 12/31/18 10:35 AM
Stefan,

That is very appreciated - thank you.

Bob
Posted By: rsdean Re: Taking Off For The Sun - 12/31/18 10:36 AM
Eric,

Thanks so much - you are very kind.

Bob
Posted By: rsdean Re: Taking Off For The Sun - 12/31/18 10:36 AM
Lawrence,

Happy New Year - thank you for the very kind comments.

Bob
Posted By: Noel96 Re: Taking Off For The Sun - 01/11/19 10:18 PM
Bob,

This is exceptionally good.

From a lyric writing perspective, I love how you've showed us all just how very effective repetition can be. I'm sure a number of people would look at these words and say something along the lines of "this is a 'simple' and very effective song".

For those of us who spend weeks agonising over which words to choose (when writing lyrics), though, the flow of 'simplicity' is often a very hard-fought battle with words, semantics, syntax, context and musical setting. This seeming 'simplicity' is also one of the main features of songwriting that makes a song memorable. On all fronts, these lyrics are thumbs-up-terrific and so very engaging!

From a melody perspective, I was mesmerised. The slow melodic movement in the A-section leading into the B-section with more melodic movement was a great choice. An equally great choice was the shape of the melody. That B-section really flies high!

All in all from top to tail, this song soars (literally and figuratively). What a way to close 2018!

All the best for 2019!
Noel
Posted By: rsdean Re: Taking Off For The Sun - 01/12/19 08:20 AM
Noel,

That is very kind and appreciated. Thanks so much for your support.

Happy New Year.

Bob
Posted By: Greg Johnson Re: Taking Off For The Sun - 01/12/19 06:51 PM
Originally Posted By: floyd jane
Bob,

An excellent "simple" write (not as simple as it seems - a sign of a writer who "knows what he's doing...)

The BAND is excellent. You have found a sound that works perfectly for you songs. Sounds like a band that has been backing you for years (and they know what they are doing, too).

Sounds like a record.

Terrific.

fj


I agree with Floyd!! You have really got your sound down and it works great! Nice feel on this tune!! Take care. Greg
Posted By: rsdean Re: Taking Off For The Sun - 01/12/19 10:08 PM
Greg,

That is very appreciated.

Thanks,
Bob
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