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Posted By: rsdean Pouring Coffee - 04/26/19 12:37 PM
Hi All,

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Watching the day rise
The geese are flying high
The sound of the morning
And the far away cries

But I’m building my day
Piece by piece in your cup
Pouring coffee in the kitchen
And baby that’s what’s up

Running a shower
The heat is sounding rough
The mirror shows a bit of age
And it’s never warm enough

But I’m building my day
Piece by piece in your cup
Pouring coffee in the kitchen
And baby that’s what’s up

Counting on the shadows
The night is lifting off
The dark is just an orphan
And the hours are the cost

But I’m building my day
Piece by piece in your cup
Pouring coffee in the kitchen
And baby that’s what’s up

All BIAB Tracks:
2474: Bass, Acoustic, Held Ev 085
2505: Piano, Electric, HeldChords 085
2914: Guitar, Acoustic, Fingerpicking Folky16thsBrent Ev16 085
832: Guitar, Electric, Rhythm, AltCountryMoody Ev 075
RealDrums: PopPromiseEv16 a:Snare on 4, HiHat, b: Snare

As always - thanks for listening!

Bob
Posted By: Jim Re: Pouring Coffee - 04/26/19 01:19 PM
Good song to start off the day with my morning coffee...
Thanks, I enjoyed listening to your song!
Posted By: BlueAttitude Re: Pouring Coffee - 04/26/19 01:25 PM
Man, it totally blows me away how prolific you are! Just one great song after another.

Love this one, Bob, well done.
Posted By: Skyline Re: Pouring Coffee - 04/26/19 01:37 PM
Bob, where do you get so many ideas from!! I wish the muse descended on me a little more!
You have a lovely way of evoking a scene with lyrics and this is no exception, and the backing/choice of instrumentation is just perfect. Thanks for the listen, very enjoyable!

John
Posted By: Greg Johnson Re: Pouring Coffee - 04/26/19 01:39 PM
An interesting write Bob....very reflective and meditative!! I think you've created the perfect band for this. Vocal hits the spot too! Nicely done!! Take care. Greg
Posted By: musician17 Re: Pouring Coffee - 04/26/19 03:52 PM
This reminds me of "The First Time I Ever Saw Your Face", the Johnny Cash version. Beautiful, haunting, dark and simply wonderful. In its own way, a classic - I've bookmarked it to play it more times. Amazing job - I cannot underscore enough just what an achievement this song is - hats off to you.
Posted By: Tangmo Re: Pouring Coffee - 04/26/19 08:40 PM
Says what it says simply, yet profoundly. A fine morning song...not too chipper, like many of us that early. Very much enjoyed.
Posted By: Joe -PG Music Re: Pouring Coffee - 04/26/19 09:02 PM
I do love coffee! Very cheerful and uplifting lyrics. Thanks for sharing!
Posted By: rsdean Re: Pouring Coffee - 04/27/19 07:17 AM
Jim,

Thanks - much appreciated.

Bob
Posted By: Guitarhacker Re: Pouring Coffee - 04/27/19 11:52 AM
Coffee, nectar of the gods.

Cool tune, and nice track selection.
Posted By: Belladonna Re: Pouring Coffee - 04/27/19 11:56 AM
Bob you have such a great way with metaphors. Always love your lyrics especially "The mirror shows a bit of age". Another good song as usual.
Posted By: Noel96 Re: Pouring Coffee - 04/27/19 06:43 PM
Originally Posted By: Greg Johnson
An interesting write Bob....very reflective and meditative!! I think you've created the perfect band for this. Vocal hits the spot too! Nicely done!! Take care. Greg

Hi Bob,

I agree with Greg. You've got everything -- vocals, band, lyrics, melody, arrangement -- working together with terrific synergy.

A wonderful listen.

All the best,
Noel
Posted By: Ember - PG Music Re: Pouring Coffee - 04/27/19 07:17 PM
Wow, I really want some coffee now. grin Haha, thanks for sharing.
Posted By: Rob4580 Re: Pouring Coffee - 04/27/19 08:23 PM
Reflections of the day. Enjoyed the lone guitar in the beginning.
Really well done Bob. Rob
Posted By: Rustyspoon# Re: Pouring Coffee - 04/27/19 08:27 PM
Bob,
Good write! Strong arrangement and mix!
Lyrics work well with or without music smile

Thank you for sharing!
Misha.
Posted By: rsdean Re: Pouring Coffee - 04/27/19 09:59 PM
Dave,

Thanks. I really appreciate that.

Bob
Posted By: MarioD Re: Pouring Coffee - 04/27/19 10:11 PM
Great intro, super vocal and outstanding lyrics, what else is there?

Your backing tracks really fit your mood and your vocals. All i can say is WOW!

This is really good!
Posted By: 44kfl Re: Pouring Coffee - 04/28/19 12:00 AM
Your drums always sound awesome

nice build on the arrangement

good reflective moody write delivered powerfully

good stuff

enjoyed,

Kenny
Posted By: rsdean Re: Pouring Coffee - 04/28/19 08:06 AM
John,

Thanks so much for the kind words - very appreciated.

Bob
Posted By: olemon Re: Pouring Coffee - 04/28/19 10:05 AM
Hey, I've got a coffee song too. Rather universal I suppose. I'm sipping some now.

Enjoyed this, Bob. You described the morning ritual well. I like how you added elements as the song progresses or wakes up, if you will. Good RT choices. Everything fits.
Posted By: rsdean Re: Pouring Coffee - 04/28/19 01:28 PM
Greg,

Thanks so much - I appreciate the kind words.

Bob
Posted By: TuneMonger Re: Pouring Coffee - 04/28/19 02:56 PM
Always look forward to your poetry. Nice.
Posted By: rsdean Re: Pouring Coffee - 04/28/19 05:56 PM
That's very kind of you to say... I appreciate the listen and kind words.

Bob
Posted By: Steve Young Re: Pouring Coffee - 04/28/19 06:53 PM
Well, Bob, you did it again! You always find creative ways to express things. Once again, you inspire me to write better lyrics.

I guess we need to bestow upon you the title of Poet Laureate for the PGMusic domain!

Thanks for doing what you do.

Steve
Posted By: rsdean Re: Pouring Coffee - 04/29/19 06:47 AM
Tangmo,

Thanks very much.

Bob
Posted By: Deryk - PG Music Re: Pouring Coffee - 04/29/19 11:30 AM
Nicely done! A very uplifting tune for sure. Love the progressions and thought your vocals fit perfectly with the lush instrumental. Definitely getting a 90's vibe from this one. Very summery and nice and easy on the ears.

Great work and thanks for sharing smile
Posted By: rsdean Re: Pouring Coffee - 04/29/19 03:55 PM
Joe,

Much appreciated - thanks.

Bob
Posted By: Deej56 Re: Pouring Coffee - 04/30/19 12:54 AM
Bob,

Another terrific song and write. You are turning out some mighty, mighty fine stuff lately. Killer guitars on this one; and impressive production as always. Loved it!

Kind regards,

Deej
Posted By: rsdean Re: Pouring Coffee - 04/30/19 08:43 AM
Herb,

Very appreciated - thanks.

Bob
Posted By: Janice & Bud Re: Pouring Coffee - 04/30/19 10:10 AM
Enjoying the morning joe at the moment, and man what a treat to go with it.

"But I'm building my day" and your song also has a great build!

That lyric is tremendous...just the perfect amount of meat on the bone to let the listener add the rest. Who couldn't relate to the message?

This is what Americana is all about and fitting to be on any playlist of that genre. And a fine addition to our personal playlist I might add.

Outstanding!

J&B
Posted By: rsdean Re: Pouring Coffee - 04/30/19 07:12 PM
Donna,

Thank so much!

Bob
Posted By: rsdean Re: Pouring Coffee - 05/01/19 07:17 AM
Noel,

That is very appreciated - thanks.

Bob
Posted By: Torrey Bliss Re: Pouring Coffee - 05/01/19 07:32 AM
Bob, love the way you started this one off, just the guitar and vocal really setting the mood for the tune. You always manage to get so much done in a short song. That's the mark of someone who knows how to creat good stuff! Great vocal and song! Thanks, T.
Posted By: jannesan Re: Pouring Coffee - 05/01/19 09:59 AM
Your band is always playing in your enjoyable style, great vocals once again. You are building up your song nicely, the story really grows all the time, although I'd like to hear how the day progressed later on, surely not pouring coffee all day smile

Janne
Posted By: Scott C Re: Pouring Coffee - 05/01/19 04:34 PM
Loved the guitar in this tune Bob. Super vocal and lyrics. Excellent tube.
Posted By: rsdean Re: Pouring Coffee - 05/01/19 09:42 PM
Ember,

LOL! Thanks. smile

Bob
Posted By: rsdean Re: Pouring Coffee - 05/02/19 06:49 AM
Rob,

Thanks very much.

Bob
Posted By: rsdean Re: Pouring Coffee - 05/02/19 08:29 AM
Misha,

Thanks - much appreciated.

Bob
Posted By: rsdean Re: Pouring Coffee - 05/02/19 07:52 PM
Mario,

That is very appreciated. Thanks!

Bob
Posted By: rsdean Re: Pouring Coffee - 05/03/19 07:17 AM
Kenny,

Thanks very much!

Bob
Posted By: rsdean Re: Pouring Coffee - 05/03/19 11:06 AM
Thanks - much appreciated.

Bob
Posted By: rsdean Re: Pouring Coffee - 05/03/19 02:31 PM
Thank you!

Bob
Posted By: Ezekiel's Storm Re: Pouring Coffee - 05/03/19 08:35 PM
Nice production. I like the sparse instrumentation at the beginning and the gentle build. Oooh, an old-fashioned fade out at the end. I enjoyed this!
Posted By: rsdean Re: Pouring Coffee - 05/04/19 08:22 AM
Steve,

That is very kind of you - thank you.

Bob
Posted By: rsdean Re: Pouring Coffee - 05/04/19 08:55 AM
Deryk,

Thank you - much appreciated!

Bob
Posted By: rsdean Re: Pouring Coffee - 05/04/19 08:55 AM
Deej,

Thanks very much!

Bob
Posted By: rsdean Re: Pouring Coffee - 05/04/19 08:57 AM
Janice & Bud,

Thank you - I appreciate the support and kind review.

Enjoying your new music as well.

Bob
Posted By: rsdean Re: Pouring Coffee - 05/04/19 08:57 AM
Torrey,

That's very kind of you - thanks so much.

Bob
Posted By: rsdean Re: Pouring Coffee - 05/04/19 08:58 AM
Janne,

LOL! Thank you. smile

Bob
Posted By: rsdean Re: Pouring Coffee - 05/04/19 08:58 AM
Scott,

Thanks as always - much appreciated.

Bob
Posted By: rsdean Re: Pouring Coffee - 05/04/19 08:59 AM
Thanks so much. I'm big on fade-outs... LOL!

Bob
Posted By: floyd jane Re: Pouring Coffee - 05/05/19 03:51 PM
Geez, Bob... you are pumpin' out so fast I can't keep up!

"Running a shower
The heat is sounding rough
The mirror shows a bit of age
And it’s never warm enough"

Solid writing throughout. As per usual.

Excellent arrangement, vocal, mix... good BAND. A solid, cohesive sound.

fj
Posted By: rsdean Re: Pouring Coffee - 05/05/19 04:31 PM
Floyd,

LOL! Thanks so much as always!

Bob
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