Just another "Three Act Play" country song...

https://soundcloud.com/888music/words-were-exchanged

Please let me know your suggestions about any aspect of the song or recording

There is a lot of experience and talent here in this community!

I want to improve so...I welcome your constructive criticism!

Thanks, David

Really well done I found it to be an engaging and fun listen. I found the mix to be concise as well. The vocals are crystal clear and blend with the instrumentation nicely.

Looking forward to hearing more - thanks for sharing!

This was a really fun song. I had a little bit of a hard time hearing your vocals, but otherwise the song was pretty great!

Good song.
Mix wise I reckon you could lower the vocal and settle it into the backing a little more with a touch of reverb.

Buja,

Nice job on this.

BAND sounds good and good vocals. Nicely mixed.
I like Ray's suggestion of a little more reverb (just a touch).

A nice "drop" at 2:18... and a good re-entrance with the stops...

Nice twist on the title. Well done. (the end id a bit "abrupt")

fj

I like the song idea and the way the boy-meets-girl story leads to vows...just enough of a twist to make it original.
The stops work well and your vocal sounds clear to me.
I enjoyed listening.

Robert

thanks for listening Deryk!

thanks for the feedback Ember!

thanks so much for that Ray!

The Recording Rebels looks like a great place to learn and progress

Floyd, thanks so much!

I've listened to over a dozen of your songs

I am impressed by your large, prolific body of work

(I got songs I started in the 90s that I haven't finished yet! )

Thanks so much for listening, Robert!

Much appreciated!

Clever lyrics that give the title two "understandings". Fun song.

Thanks Mark, I really appreciate you taking the time to listen and to comment...

This is a really clever idea for a song!! And you executed it very well....the story keeps you engaged and pays off! Really well done!! Take care. Greg

Thanks a lot Greg!
All the best!
David

Hi Buja! You had smiling within the first couple of lines! Great job on a fun little tune! I enjoyed it! Thanks, Torrey

Hi David,

I like what you've done here.

The way your lyrics pivot on the phrase "words were exchanged" captured my imagination. It's pretty clever writing how you give three completely different scenarios for the phrase and use that to create a cohesive 'play in three acts'. Nice work.

Very enjoyable listening.
Noel

I liked the lyrics, 'words were exchanged'

A clever way through multiple verses to keep delivering the same message but in so many different ways.

As Greg said, "clever." We'll add inventive and engaging.

Nice mix...vocal sounds nicely up front. Maybe a smidgen more reverb.

Enjoyed it!

J&B

Clever lyrics & story...
I really enjoyed it...
And I'm glad I caught up with this one before it disappeared into oblivion !

Very clever, great payoff, wish it worked like that in real life LOL. Good use of stops. Great work.

Excellent song. Loved your vocal delivery. Very different and engaging. Cool lyric. Well done