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Posted By: Deej56 Rising from the Dead - 12/04/19 02:44 AM
Hi, all:

First off, I just listened to a host of impressive tunes tonight. Seriously great stuff . . . and this new offering likely pales in comparison. But here we go nonetheless . . . with fingers-crossed. smile

I started writing this song when I was vacationing in Italy this past summer. The hook/refrain came to me while on a boat out of Porto Santo Stefano, sailing along the Maremma coast. It took these past few months to finish the lyric and tune--and a bit longer to find its way into a BIAB production.

I had thought I'd keep the production fairly stripped, but then came across the Breathe Reso Acoustic Folk Rock song style . . . and went with it . . . though I subbed out and added some. Hope it's worth the listen.

Here's the song:

RISING FROM THE DEAD

Here are the lyrics:

Driving north to nowhere out of Rome
from the grasp of ghostly fingers round my soul.
With every turn and every mile
my face recalls a buried smile
that hints of freedom I have never known
in the rolling fields and hills that lie ahead . . .
As I drive along these Tuscan roads
I’m rising from the dead.

Gliding cross the blue Tyrrhenian Sea—
the sun and wind upon my skin, and I can breathe.
In the boneyards I forgot
the things I am and those I’m not,
and here I’ve found the better part of me.
So the emails on my phone all go unread . . .
As I sail along the Maremma coast
I’m rising from the dead.

And I’m trying to leave it all behind;
in my mind, to break the ties that bind.
So the New York City push and pull
that tears my soul and wears my will
it somehow seems to vanish more in time,
as I find me in my head . . .
Underneath these Tuscan skies
I’m rising from the dead.

Some day that life will call me home
and lay its claim to my body and my bones.
And if that’s meant to be somehow
it don’t matter much to me right now,
I’m worlds away in a heaven all my own.
‘Cause the sun just turned the sky Barolo red . . .
As it dips beneath the Tuscan hills
I’m rising from the dead.

And here's the band:

Bass: 3121 PopHalfNotes Push
Drums: Real Blues Rock
Guitar: Acoustic Strum 362
Guitar: 12 String Acoustic 1118
Mandolin: Background American Folk 3150
Accordion: Rhythm Pop8ths 1752
Posted By: musician17 Re: Rising from the Dead - 12/04/19 03:10 AM
Great job! A sunny track - one can feel wonderful Italy through your singing ... and one can feel you refreshed by it as you sing. Loved it.
Posted By: rayc Re: Rising from the Dead - 12/04/19 05:15 AM
It took until the 2nd stanza to catch up with the rhyming scheme - from tehre all was sweet sailing for my lazy brain.
This is very cool and the minimal backing works really well.
Excellent.
Posted By: BlueAttitude Re: Rising from the Dead - 12/04/19 06:11 AM
Yeah! I love the mood you set with this. Great job on the write, I love songs that take you to another place.

Nice production and mix, and I've always been a fan of your vocal.

Very much enjoyed, went along well with my first cup of morning coffee.
Posted By: Deryk - PG Music Re: Rising from the Dead - 12/04/19 12:21 PM
What a tune - it really sets a nice mod, and the production is top notch here. Really tremendous vocals too. The whole thing flows remarkably well.

Thanks for sharing smile
Posted By: Robertkc Re: Rising from the Dead - 12/04/19 04:15 PM
This rolls along beautifully both lyrically, with nice details in the travelogue, and musically. I like this style for the song and, no surprise your vocals command attention ( Whatever you`re doing on the processing- its working to a T for your voice).
Very good work... and uplifting- as the title suggests!

Robert
Posted By: Torrey Bliss Re: Rising from the Dead - 12/04/19 08:49 PM
That is awesome work Deej!! As I was listening I was hoping for a powerful chorus to come in and follow those great first couple of verses and you sure delivered it! Great instrumentation choices with a super vocal! Perfect title!! Thanks, Torrey
Posted By: Crossroads Re: Rising from the Dead - 12/05/19 10:51 AM
Hello DJ,

I think that everyone who has ever been to the Tuscan (during the right time of the year) will agree that this is one of the most beautiful places on earth. (And that's even without mentioning the wine and the food...). So 'Rising from the Dead' is such a good phrase for describing what one MUST feel when he's there if he doesn't have a heart of stone..

And you really wrapped this feeling in a wonderful song - the backing track is the right one, the lyrics are most beautiful and your singing (especially when your voice is climbing the Tuscan heights) is really remarkable.

A brilliant production which gave me a most pleasant listen.

All the ebst,

Stefan
Posted By: Keefmeister Re: Rising from the Dead - 12/05/19 11:22 AM
Love this song, Deej!

Great lyrics and an excellent vocal performance. Makes me want to visit Italy. smile Your BIAB style choice works well for this tune. Bravo!

Marc
Posted By: Jim Re: Rising from the Dead - 12/05/19 02:52 PM
A great write from what seems to have been a great experience for you...
I believe you have deftly captured your personal experience...
And conveyed it to me...
So that I feel like I was there on your journey...
Very nicely done!
Posted By: Evenios Re: Rising from the Dead - 12/05/19 03:10 PM
not bad at all love the folksy style!
Posted By: floyd jane Re: Rising from the Dead - 12/06/19 05:54 PM
Cool song, Deej. A good write, an interesting lyric start to finish.

Great BAND choices. And a good mix. Terrific drum sound. Good vocal, of course.

Enjoyed it.

fj
Posted By: Scott C Re: Rising from the Dead - 12/08/19 09:47 AM
Really enjoy your vocals. This is also a very cool song
Posted By: PeterF Re: Rising from the Dead - 12/09/19 01:13 AM
Loved it - rolled along just beautifully and a wonderful rousing vocal.

Great stuff.

Peter
Posted By: Deej56 Re: Rising from the Dead - 12/10/19 12:58 AM
James, rayc, Dave, Deryk, Robert, Torrey, Stefan, Marc, Jim, Evenios, Floyd, Scott and Peter:

Thanks to you all for the listen and kind feedback. Every time I listen to this it brings me back to that moment on the boat. Vacation memories CAN last, lol!

My best to you all,

Deej
Posted By: EdZ314 Re: Rising from the Dead - 12/10/19 01:29 PM
Really, really like this. An excellent song. I think what jumps out most for me are the moments when I'm feeling like I'm listening to a performance at something like Austin City Limits. There are several points where the music transcends the instruments, and you just get lost in the song - only the best songs can do that.

Its great as is, but if you were to add more layers and some backing vocals or make it a duet with a smooth but crystal clear voice in the vein of Leann Rimes or Carrie Underwood I think it would be completely different but really cool, especially those parts where the vocals soar into the high ranges. As I said, just an idea, but with a song this strong, the possibilities for variations are endless.
Posted By: Greg Johnson Re: Rising from the Dead - 12/10/19 09:19 PM
This is REALLY, REALLY good!!! Wonderful lyrics, wonderful music, and a great band to back it!! You sang the heck out of it too!! I visited Italy for the first time last Summer. Beautiful country, wonderful people! Loved this!! Take care. Greg
Posted By: TuneMonger Re: Rising from the Dead - 12/11/19 02:06 AM
Terrific song and a terrific voice, I enjoyed it a great deal. Nice to learn a little geography in the process, you got me looking up Maremma and Barolo.
Posted By: Deej56 Re: Rising from the Dead - 12/12/19 03:55 AM
Ed, Greg and TuneMonger:

Thanks to you each for the listen and supportive feedback. Means a lot!

Ed: Yeah, some backing vocal could make this shine more . . . just wasn't sure about the where and how, so kept it simple. I ended up going bigger than I intended originally on the music tracks, so also didn't want to weigh it down with additional vocals. But it's worth revisiting when I get some space and better skills.

Greg: My last trip this summer was #5 for me . . . and I can't wait to go back. Curious . . . where'd you go?

TuneMonger: Wine-o-philes can likely call me out on this song. Barolo is from the Piedmont area . . . It would be more in keeping with the song to sing "Brunello red" but "Barolo" just sang better--dunno why. So I went with it.

My best to each of you,

Deej
Posted By: dcuny Re: Rising from the Dead - 12/12/19 04:03 AM
First and foremost: excellent vocal performance.

Good write, interesting arrangement, good mix, catchy chorus.

Enjoyed the listen. smile
Posted By: jannesan Re: Rising from the Dead - 12/12/19 05:51 PM
Great write, very beautiful vacation images full of freedom and happiness. The same feel of ease can be heard in your vocals. I like the folky rhythm, like marching along old stone alleys. Nicely mixed, accordion, strumming and mandolin create a sunny feeling. Catchy classic chorus, getting better on each listening.

Janne
Posted By: Janice & Bud Re: Rising from the Dead - 12/13/19 02:10 PM
Strong imagery that would lead to a powerful
video!

Thanks for sharing what your vacation spawned.

Nice band, vocals, production and a mix that sounds superb on the monitors.

As Jim said, "I believe you have deftly captured your personal experience...
And conveyed it to me..."

That!

J&B
Posted By: Ezekiel's Storm Re: Rising from the Dead - 12/14/19 09:57 PM
Even with the acoustic instruments, this comes across a a powerful song. Quality lyrics, melody, and vocal. I enjoyed this!
Posted By: Rustyspoon# Re: Rising from the Dead - 12/15/19 02:50 AM
Deej,
Excellent work on this! Sounds big and happy. Arrangement and vocals shine! Mandolin was a very nice touch.
Thank you for sharing!

Misha.
Posted By: lambada Re: Rising from the Dead - 12/15/19 05:03 AM
Great Song. Great production. Just been in France, Italy and Spain.
Posted By: Deej56 Re: Rising from the Dead - 02/10/20 06:00 PM
David, Janne, Janice & Bud, Ezekiel, Misha and lambada:

I hate to have to bump this song up at this point, but I’d hate even more not taking the time to thank you for your listen and kind comments. I got busy right before Christmas with family coming in for the Holidays. I had thought I responded to everyone, but apparently not. So, only right to do so now.

My apologies for delayed response—your comments and support are so very much appreciated. Glad you all seemed to enjoy the tune.

Regards to you all,

Deej
Posted By: Noel96 Re: Rising from the Dead - 02/22/20 09:09 AM
Hi Deej,

This is....



Where do you get your ideas from??? Does taking vitamins help? I'd love to get some of this kind of inspiration! These lyrics are extraordinary.... actually I'd better back up a bit first smile

Firstly, I'm a huge fan of AABA and you've presented a variation of it that I cannot recall hearing but it worked s-o-o-o-o well. The format I usually use is A1, A2, B, A3, Instrumental, B(repeat), A3(repeat). What you did by leaving out that third A-section before launching into the instrumental was a songwriter's equivalent of Van Gogh's expertise. Just wow! And that B-section... man it soars!

Your band is superb and your production and your singing are breathtakingly excellent.

As I sat here travelling with your lyrics, you lifted me out of the mundane and into a world of delight. It was such a good journey. The whole concept of being caught up in the death-throes of a rat-race existence and managing to survive by allowing one's imagination to bring some Tuscan escape and freedom is wonderful. I wish I had your ability to craft such tantalising, eidetic imagery.

You've really pulled out all the stops with this one.

All the best,
Noel
Posted By: BabuMusic Re: Rising from the Dead - 02/22/20 09:58 AM
Oh, what a great song, Deej. It's great to be alive, and thanks for sharing that feeling.
Posted By: Deej56 Re: Rising from the Dead - 03/05/20 02:28 AM
Noel and Marty,

So glad you liked the tune . . . and sorry for the delayed reply. I'm finding it hard to settle down and spend some time here . . . plus the forum is moving sooo fast--so many new posts, with so many great songs . . . amazing to see. But, again, happy mine resonated. It's one of those personal songs, that every time I listen to it, bring me back to that moment when the song was born . . . under a beautiful blue sky, motoring along the Maremma coast.

Noel,

You are being very humble--you have that ability in spades. I don't write many "personal" songs, but this one was is about as close as it gets. On the boat, in the moment, removed from everything, I truly felt like I was indeed rising. Sadly, it was only temporary, LOL . . . but good while it lasted.

My best to you both,

Deej
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