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Posted By: Torrey Bliss TAKE ME AWAY - 02/15/20 10:53 PM
https://soundcloud.com/torrey-bliss/take-me-away

A little tune I wrote this week about longing for home! I ended up playing most of the instruments on this to make it all fit. The one instrument I reluctantly played was the pedal steel (actually played on my Yamaha keyboard). I just couldn't make the realtracks fit the tune so I went ahead and played it. This will probably be my last one for a while because of everything going on in my life right now. I hope someone enjoys the song!


BIAB
Drums-JazzFunkPop
Bass-700 PopHalfNotes
Guitar-1945 GroovinFolk

Me
Vocals
Guitars Rhythm and Lead played on my Taylor Acoustic
Electric Piano
Pedal Steel played on a Yamaha PSR970
Synths

Take Me Away
Words and music by
Torrey Bliss copyright 2020

I remember the time
When life was so simple
Just drifting along
With my head in the clouds
Then came the chains
Of a cruel taskmaster
Endless struggle goes on and on
One helping hand
Withdrawn in a moment
One points the way
To another wrong road
When will I learn
My answer has waited
In front of me here all along
You've made a way for me
The pain and tears will pass away
But until that day I know I'll plead
Take me away where living waters flow
Take me away I really I want to go
Take me away to joy I've never know
Take me away
You may think I'm down
But my story's not over
There's work left to do
So much is not done
As time marches on
I must use it wisely
But still I want to be there with you
Posted By: edshaw Re: TAKE ME AWAY - 02/16/20 12:00 AM
Great track.
Hey, hope things work out all right.
Best wishes and see you again, soon I hope. (ed)
Posted By: Ghostgum Re: TAKE ME AWAY - 02/16/20 02:38 AM
Lyrics fit the tune really well. Nice vibe!
Posted By: rayc Re: TAKE ME AWAY - 02/16/20 06:23 AM
You've constructed a really solid, smooth bed for the melody Torrey.
The vocal performance is excellent - always assured and seemingly effortless.
The disembodied backing vocals work really well & were a nice surprise.
A yearning narrative and your golden tones.
ACE
Posted By: BlueAttitude Re: TAKE ME AWAY - 02/16/20 08:30 AM
Excellent!!

Sounds like a track that could have been on a Steely Dan album.

Man, such attention to detail! Lots of subtle stuff going on.

Loved your vocal those background vocals at 2:40 or so sounded great.

Good beyond good!
Posted By: BabuMusic Re: TAKE ME AWAY - 02/16/20 11:21 AM
Superb in every way. Man, this song really does take us all away with you. Can't say I know you, Torrey, but I really love what you do, and hope to see you doing more soon.
Posted By: jannesan Re: TAKE ME AWAY - 02/16/20 11:58 AM
This tune expresses the longing perfectly, lyrics work on many levels. Wistful voice, nice chording and harmonic band complete the package, the pedal steel has nice sound and the melody it plays is an enjoyable addition. I hope the "cruel taskmaster" is not taking all of your time this year smile

Janne
Posted By: Janice & Bud Re: TAKE ME AWAY - 02/16/20 03:23 PM
Dave's reference to Steely Dan was spot on.

The more melancholy hints in the lyric lead us even more so
to wish you the best for the year given your statement.

Longing, wistful and soulful indeed.

And, it almost goes w/o saying, it's all wrapped in
a fine mix that sets a great soundstage.

Best to you!

J&B
Posted By: musician17 Re: TAKE ME AWAY - 02/16/20 07:03 PM
This is SO beautiful in every aspect. Loved the background voices - the chorus is inspired. To be honest, I can't really analyse this one because I just sat back and listened, it is that beautiful - so I can't and can't bring myself to pick it apart in the name of an "analytical critique". Just know that it is a genuine "hell yes" from me - and I wish you the very best with whatever life is throwing at you lately. Thanks for this track - it was exactly what I needed at exactly the right time.
Posted By: Ezekiel's Storm Re: TAKE ME AWAY - 02/16/20 07:51 PM
I am really impressed with your musicianship.

There is a lot to like about this song. Melody, singing, songwriting. The production is so beautifully textured.
Posted By: Torrey Bliss Re: TAKE ME AWAY - 02/16/20 09:47 PM
Thanks so much Ed! I always appreciate your comments! T
Posted By: Leon1 Re: TAKE ME AWAY - 02/17/20 12:12 AM
As usual, excellent writing, performance and production, Torrey.
Hope all is well.
Regards,
Leon
Posted By: furry Re: TAKE ME AWAY - 02/17/20 01:11 AM
Hi Torrey. Lovely track, enjoyed the backing as much as the vocals. Hope things improve for you.
Posted By: PeterF Re: TAKE ME AWAY - 02/17/20 09:02 AM
Torrey

A superb composition. Everything about it oozes professionalism.

Loved it.

Peter
Posted By: Birchwood Re: TAKE ME AWAY - 02/17/20 12:40 PM
Wow Torrey, this is a very good one from you. And I thought I heard all your good ones before.
Its also the first time I use the word 'wow' in a post ever. So its very special when that happens!
Of course I also tried to listen if you made any mistake in it, but forgot to concentrate on that, because of the attraction of your terrific song.
Have I said 'wow' before?

Hans
Posted By: dcuny Re: TAKE ME AWAY - 02/17/20 02:16 PM
The steel guitar sounds great!

Actually, it all sounds great. smile

Love the jazzy chords - I'm a sucker for the maj7 sound. Great harmonies.

Glad you could sneak in a song before you disappear for a while! laugh
Posted By: jptjptjpt Re: TAKE ME AWAY - 02/17/20 02:33 PM
Great recording. I love the instruments you play. Good use of BIAB too. Lovely melody and vocals. Sounds like the golden age of 70's hits. Well done. I hope all goes okay for you. Let the music take you away.
Posted By: Scott C Re: TAKE ME AWAY - 02/17/20 06:07 PM
Loved the tone on the Guitars Torrey. Super vocal and lyric. Some very cool effects.
Posted By: Rob4580 Re: TAKE ME AWAY - 02/17/20 06:13 PM
Hello Torrey. I really like this.
Very good production and well written.
Thank you for posting.
Rob4580
Posted By: floyd jane Re: TAKE ME AWAY - 02/17/20 08:54 PM
Originally Posted By: BlueAttitude
Excellent!!

Sounds like a track that could have been on a Steely Dan album.

Man, such attention to detail! Lots of subtle stuff going on.

Loved your vocal those background vocals at 2:40 or so sounded great.

Good beyond good!


Torrey,

I agree with everything Dave said.

LOVE the chorus!! Your vocals on this are superb.

fj
Posted By: TuneMonger Re: TAKE ME AWAY - 02/18/20 12:18 AM
Great job as usual, liked the chorus especially. Hope you're not gone too long, you will be missed on this board, that's for sure.
Posted By: Torrey Bliss Re: TAKE ME AWAY - 02/18/20 05:08 AM
Thanks Ghostgum for having a listen! T
Posted By: Torrey Bliss Re: TAKE ME AWAY - 02/18/20 05:09 AM
Thanks Dave for all the positive feedback! I appreciate it! T
Posted By: Torrey Bliss Re: TAKE ME AWAY - 02/18/20 05:09 AM
Thanks Marty! I appreciate all of that! T
Posted By: Tangmo Re: TAKE ME AWAY - 02/18/20 09:45 AM
One helping hand
Withdrawn in a moment
One points the way
To another wrong road


That's called social media, though why they would call something so anti-social that is beyond me.

Loved this soft-rock tribute. I especially liked the heavily E!'d vox nearer the end. You seem to have a "theme" lately. I hope all goes well for you, no matter the cause.
Posted By: Torrey Bliss Re: TAKE ME AWAY - 02/19/20 06:01 AM
Thanks Janne for your comments! I appreciate it! T
Posted By: Torrey Bliss Re: TAKE ME AWAY - 02/19/20 06:02 AM
Thanks J&B! I always appreciate your comments! T
Posted By: Torrey Bliss Re: TAKE ME AWAY - 02/19/20 06:03 AM
Thanks James for all those kind words! I appreciate it! T
Posted By: rsdean Re: TAKE ME AWAY - 02/19/20 01:35 PM
Torrey,

This is an amazing piece of music and production... You only offer up the best!

Bob
Posted By: Torrey Bliss Re: TAKE ME AWAY - 02/19/20 10:32 PM
Thanks so much Scott! I always appreciate your supportive comments! T
Posted By: Torrey Bliss Re: TAKE ME AWAY - 02/21/20 12:22 AM
Thanks Rob! I always appreciate your comments! T
Posted By: Deej56 Re: TAKE ME AWAY - 02/21/20 02:10 AM
Torrey,

Love what you do . . . always such clean production and compelling vocal. The backing vocal in the chorus really resonate. An 80’s feel to this, with just hint of Steely Dan. Really impressive tune deserving of lots of listens.

Humbly yours,

Deej
Posted By: Deryk - PG Music Re: TAKE ME AWAY - 02/21/20 11:39 AM
Wow - what a song! It's been mentioned, but the production quality is astounding here. Really top notch stuff. Nicely catchy, and the vocals work perfectly with the backing tracks. The tones on the guitar are wonderful as well, the chorus had me sold.

Thanks so much for sharing smile
Posted By: Rustyspoon# Re: TAKE ME AWAY - 02/21/20 12:23 PM
Torrey,
Absolutely gorgeous instrumentation & arangement. Vocals are perfect, loved vocal FX on 2:40! Listens very well.
Thank you for sharing!

Misha.
Posted By: Torrey Bliss Re: TAKE ME AWAY - 02/23/20 01:09 AM
Thanks Floyd for the listen! T
Posted By: Torrey Bliss Re: TAKE ME AWAY - 02/23/20 01:13 AM
Thanks Ray for the nice compliments! T
Posted By: Torrey Bliss Re: TAKE ME AWAY - 02/23/20 09:55 PM
Thanks Tunemonger I appreciate it! T
Posted By: Torrey Bliss Re: TAKE ME AWAY - 02/23/20 09:56 PM
Thanks Tangmo for the listen and comments! I appreciate it! T
Posted By: Torrey Bliss Re: TAKE ME AWAY - 02/23/20 09:56 PM
Thanks Bob! I appreciate it! T
Posted By: Torrey Bliss Re: TAKE ME AWAY - 02/23/20 09:57 PM
Thanks a lot Deej! I appreciate it! T
Posted By: Torrey Bliss Re: TAKE ME AWAY - 02/23/20 09:58 PM
Thanks Deryk! I appreciate it! T
Posted By: Torrey Bliss Re: TAKE ME AWAY - 02/23/20 09:58 PM
Thanks Misha! I appreciate your comments! T
Posted By: Greg Johnson Re: TAKE ME AWAY - 02/29/20 04:42 PM
WOW!!! Beautiful!!! Always love your stuff and this is one of the best for sure! Vocal is my absolute fave of yours! LOVE IT!!! Take care. Greg
Posted By: Torrey Bliss Re: TAKE ME AWAY - 03/01/20 08:28 AM
Thanks Greg for having a listen ! I appreciate it! T
Posted By: chulaivet1966 Re: TAKE ME AWAY - 03/05/20 11:20 AM
Hwy Torrey....

Very good....I like this one.
Good performance, like the chorus, very smooth, easy listening vibe to this one.
Well done on all fronts.

Back in '74 I wrote a song with the same title....finished by never worthy of recording.
The difference is my song sucks and yours is very good. smile

Hope all is well...
Posted By: Jim Re: TAKE ME AWAY - 03/12/20 12:43 PM
I watched your video yesterday...
Then I discovered this post...
I like said...
You've created a beautiful uplifting song!
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