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Posted By: Al-David Another Day - 04/07/20 05:17 AM
Another Day

It's been a week since our last post, so I thought I'd post another old one. We originally posted this about 6 years ago. At the time it was a WIP. For practical purposes, it still is. We no longer have the stem tracks as this is one of the songs in the computer file that fried. All I had to work with was the "final" stereo mix-down. I did quite a bit of reshaping in Audacity that, I think, improved it somewhat.

Di was going to sing it on the redo, but her stroke got in the way of that and she has since lost so much strength she cannot sing any more ... we're hopeful that changes ... if so, it's going to be quite a while. She currently can't get out bed by herself and can only walk ten of fifteen feet before she's totally depleted of energy. I have to bathe her, dress her, do all the domestic chores, etc.

This one was a real stretch for my limited vocal range. But I managed a few of the higher register passes. Also, this is one of the last songs - there were a few afterwards but not many - on which I played my own lead guitar track. Fortunately, it's a fairly easy riff. I have Focal Dystonia which is quickly claiming my ability to control my fingers. But, that's okay ... I made a ton of money with my guitar playing for many years. So, I really have nothing to complain about.

This is written for a female vocal, such as Jennifer Nettles. But Di is, and was, incapable to singing. But we like the song so much, we decided to put it out there with my meager attempt on vocals.

Because we, mostly I (Alan), have very little time to dedicate to new projects, we hope you won't mind us re-posting a few of our early songs (2010 - 2016) or thereabouts.

I'll get back to everyone as quickly as I possible can with a listen and comment. Thanks in advance. Di and I hope all you are well and stay that way. Please be safe!!!

Also, for those confused about Di's name on the copyright credits: her previous married name was "Bowers", her legal married name is "Diana F. David". "Diana Randall" is her professional name ... Randall was the first name of her youngest son who died in a car accident.

PS: We wrote this on as a challenge to ourselves: Write and record a contemporary country ballad and make it big. I think we may have come close to achieving that. You can be the judge. I entered the lyric in larger print so it might be easier to read.

Alan & Di


Another Day

(v1)
The sky went dark
The wind stood still
You left me in the shadow of
Another lover's call
You left me here, standing on the edge
But there's no place for me to fall

Pre-Chorus
What will I do, where will I go
How could I find another, when I love you so
Perhaps I never told you, I guess I thought you knew
I'd give my life, I'd give anything for you

CHORUS
Another day of dying without you
No sun no moon, no early morning dew
Another day, of forever turning blue
Without you, there ain't no way
I can go on another day

INSTRUMENTAL

Repeat Pre-Chorus

Repeat Chorus

(c) 2012 Alan D. David, BMI / Diana Bowers
Posted By: BlueAttitude Re: Another Day - 04/07/20 07:50 AM
Really enjoyed this one, just an excellent song!

I've heard a couple in the past that you played guitar on, you were obviously a pro level player. Sounds great to me, lots of passion in those notes.

As far as posting the old songs go, keep them coming! I'm sure most on the forum here have not heard them.
Posted By: musician17 Re: Another Day - 04/07/20 08:21 AM
SO beautiful.
Posted By: floyd jane Re: Another Day - 04/07/20 10:35 AM
Alan & Di,

A really nice song. Beautiful melody.

Nicely put together - as are all of your productions.

That guitar is smoooookin'... hot!

Keep 'em coming. The best to you both, as always.

fj
Posted By: Birchwood Re: Another Day - 04/07/20 10:41 AM
Hello Alan,

The songs starts very strong with those drums. Love that. The band gives a nice tension to your song. And the leadguitar is pretty cool!
Also you are too modest about your singing qualities. In a way they are intriguing for that other day to come.
But you are right, if Di could sing it...

There is one thing though I want to mention here: when you post your songs you always write it were old songs rescued from a FRIED computer where one or two tracks are bad or missing or whatever, and then we hear a great song! How must we see those stories?

Stay safe you and Di,
Hans
Posted By: dani48 Re: Another Day - 04/07/20 01:31 PM
Hi, Al & Di !


A most superb tune
is this with your
emotional interpretation
of the beautiful lyrics !

Stay safe, both of you !

Cheers
Dani
Posted By: RichardB1985 Re: Another Day - 04/07/20 05:58 PM
Thank you for sharing this one - I thought the lyrics and melody were great. It may have been written for a female vocal but you do the song justice and especially do a good job of adding emotion to the song. Please do keep sharing your older tracks. I have only joined this community in the last year and would really enjoy getting to listen to them for the first time!
Posted By: Al-David Re: Another Day - 04/07/20 05:58 PM
Originally Posted By: BlueAttitude
Really enjoyed this one, just an excellent song!

I've heard a couple in the past that you played guitar on, you were obviously a pro level player. Sounds great to me, lots of passion in those notes.

As far as posting the old songs go, keep them coming! I'm sure most on the forum here have not heard them.


Hi Dave ...

Thank you for the time to listen and for the really nice comments. Although I almost never do my own tracks any more, I still practice at least an hour every day. I appreciate to nice comments about my playing on earlier posts! This one is actually a very simple lead, as I'm sure you can tell. The distortion seems to fill it out nicely. Anyway, many thanks for all the nice words!

Wishing you the best. be safe ...

Alan
Posted By: Al-David Re: Another Day - 04/07/20 05:59 PM
Originally Posted By: musician17
SO beautiful.


Thank you so much, James! I always appreciate you listening and commenting! Wishing you the very best. Be safe ...

Alan
Posted By: Al-David Re: Another Day - 04/07/20 06:02 PM
Originally Posted By: floyd jane
Alan & Di,

A really nice song. Beautiful melody.

Nicely put together - as are all of your productions.

That guitar is smoooookin'... hot!

Keep 'em coming. The best to you both, as always.

fj


Hi Floyd ...

Many thanks. For the next several weeks, I'll probably be posting some of our older stuff as time is at a premium. I am working on some new things, but only in very short time frames.

I sincerely appreciate the kind words on our music. i wish I could play like that these days! But, like I said in the intro narrative ... I was paid a lot of money for a lot of years for my guitar work. It's all good!

Wishing you and yours the very best. Be safe ...

Alan
Posted By: Al-David Re: Another Day - 04/07/20 06:07 PM
Originally Posted By: Birchwood
Hello Alan,

The songs starts very strong with those drums. Love that. The band gives a nice tension to your song. And the leadguitar is pretty cool!
Also you are too modest about your singing qualities. In a way they are intriguing for that other day to come.
But you are right, if Di could sing it...

There is one thing though I want to mention here: when you post your songs you always write it were old songs rescued from a FRIED computer where one or two tracks are bad or missing or whatever, and then we hear a great song! How must we see those stories?

Stay safe you and Di,
Hans


hello Hans ...

It's always nice to hear your comments. I appreciate all your comments and nice words. Di and I always smile when we read them!

For these older songs ... I have none of the original, individual tracks. All I have are the finals stereo mixes. I just take those stereo mixes over to Audacity and "massage" them the best I can. I mostly use graphic EQ and compression for the newer sound. Sometimes it works out pretty good. other times, not so much. i was happy with the way this one ended.

Again, many thanks. Wishing you the best. Be safe ...

Alan
Posted By: Al-David Re: Another Day - 04/07/20 06:08 PM
Originally Posted By: dani48
Hi, Al & Di !


A most superb tune
is this with your
emotional interpretation
of the beautiful lyrics !

Stay safe, both of you !

Cheers
Dani


Hi Dani ...

Thank you very much for your wonderful comments. Di and I appreciate them. Wishing you and yours the very best. Be safe ...

Alan
Posted By: Al-David Re: Another Day - 04/07/20 06:14 PM
Originally Posted By: RichardB1985
Thank you for sharing this one - I thought the lyrics and melody were great. It may have been written for a female vocal but you do the song justice and especially do a good job of adding emotion to the song. Please do keep sharing your older tracks. I have only joined this community in the last year and would really enjoy getting to listen to them for the first time!


Hello Richard ...

Thank you so much for the very, very nice comments. I appreciate them very much.

I'm delighted you enjoyed the song. And I will be posting some of our older songs ever y few days for the next couple of weeks. As the older members of the forum already know, my wife is significantly disabled and in very poor health, so much of my time is devoted to her needs. That doesn't leave a lot of time for music.

Thank you for asking for some of the older things we did. Appreciate it a lot! Wishing you the best. Be safe ...

Alan
Posted By: MarioD Re: Another Day - 04/07/20 08:31 PM
One - tell Di that she is in our prayers.

Two - this is fantastic. You have a very good voice, I am jealous!

Your backing tracks and mix are spot on.
Posted By: PeterF Re: Another Day - 04/07/20 09:15 PM
Alan

A really pretty song, and arrangement. Excellent guitar playing, and a good vocal.

Really classy project.

Peter
Posted By: jptjptjpt Re: Another Day - 04/07/20 11:42 PM
I never heard the first run of the song so it's all new to me. Outstanding recording. Nice country ballad. Good lyrics and vocal delivery. Loved that electric guitar. Good one.
Posted By: Belladonna Re: Another Day - 04/08/20 01:01 AM
That was really, really beautiful. I can only imagine what you and your wife performed in your heyday. So glad you're sharing all these little gems with us and so glad someone made some real money with their music along with enjoying it totally. Icing on the cake.
Posted By: Al-David Re: Another Day - 04/08/20 01:22 AM
Originally Posted By: MarioD
One - tell Di that she is in our prayers.

Two - this is fantastic. You have a very good voice, I am jealous!

Your backing tracks and mix are spot on.


Hi Mario ...

Thanks for the listen and, as always, very nice comments! I appreciate your words very much, as does Di.

1. Thank you for the prayers. Although we don't make a public issue of it, we are Christians.

2. Many thanks! This is probably my best vocal. Just wish I could sing as such all the time. It's pretty much hit and miss for me ... a lot of miss!

3. Thanks for noticing the backing tracks. Most of them came pretty easy. but, played around with many drum tracls before settling on this one.

Wishing you and yours the very best. Be safe ...

Alan


PS: Yes, your wife is so thoughtful! What a caring soul!!!
Posted By: Al-David Re: Another Day - 04/08/20 01:23 AM
Originally Posted By: PeterF
Alan

A really pretty song, and arrangement. Excellent guitar playing, and a good vocal.

Really classy project.

Peter


Hi Peter ...

Thank you so much for your nice words and support. Sure so appreciate it very much! Wishing you the very best. Be safe ...

Alan
Posted By: Al-David Re: Another Day - 04/08/20 01:25 AM
Originally Posted By: jptjptjpt
I never heard the first run of the song so it's all new to me. Outstanding recording. Nice country ballad. Good lyrics and vocal delivery. Loved that electric guitar. Good one.


Hi!

Thank you so much! Your kind words do not fall on deaf ears. The guitar was a Telecaster played through a Peavey Nashville amp and a cheap, off=brand distortion pedal. Again, many thanks. Be safe ...

Alan
Posted By: Al-David Re: Another Day - 04/08/20 01:29 AM
Originally Posted By: Belladonna
That was really, really beautiful. I can only imagine what you and your wife performed in your heyday. So glad you're sharing all these little gems with us and so glad someone made some real money with their music along with enjoying it totally. Icing on the cake.


Hi Donna ...

Awe .... aren't you the nicest lady!!! Thank you very much.Delighted you enjoyed it.

Yes, music has been very good to me. On average, I played 20 - 28 nights a month for many years .. a lot of those years in Europe where live music was much preferred to DJs or prerecorded tracks. It was a blast!

Many years ago ... back in the 60s ... I lived in Woodbridge, VA, about 15 miles out of D.C. Had a good time there. And yes, I'm that old!!! i can actually remember when Harry Truman was president. Yikes!!!!!!!

Wishing you the best. Be safe ...

Alan
Posted By: Scott C Re: Another Day - 04/08/20 03:27 PM
Very cool chord progression on this song Alan. Awesome vocal and lyric. Well done
Posted By: Al-David Re: Another Day - 04/08/20 05:49 PM
Originally Posted By: Scott C
Very cool chord progression on this song Alan. Awesome vocal and lyric. Well done


Hi Scott ...

Thanks a bunch. So glad you enjoyed the listen. Thanks for letting me know ... much appreciated! Wishing you and yours the very best. be safe ...

Alan
Posted By: Ezekiel's Storm Re: Another Day - 04/09/20 12:30 PM
Love this, Al. In my mind, I hear the female voice singing. By the way, you did fine with the higher notes.

Beautiful song. Love the chorus melody.
Posted By: Robertkc Re: Another Day - 04/09/20 12:41 PM
Alan,
You fulfilled your intention to write a "big" ballad.This smokes all the way to to the emotional chorus and your vocal is a fine indication of where the song could go with Di singing... I do hope we`ll hear that version in the future.
Terrific guitar break btw!

Robert
Posted By: rsdean Re: Another Day - 04/10/20 11:50 AM
Alan,

This is how music is made... None better.

Bob
Posted By: BabuMusic Re: Another Day - 04/10/20 11:50 AM
Very emotional, and your voice brings it out so well, Alan. I for one am very happy you are posting the "old one" since I wasn't here then. Blessings to you and Di!! You are inspirational.
Posted By: Noel96 Re: Another Day - 04/11/20 11:36 PM
Dear Alan and Di,

Oh... my.... goodness....



If songwriting can be compared to baseball, this creation is out of the park; it's a home-run taken slow and easy! Wow!!!!

Right now I'm so in awe of what you've accomplished with this wonderful piece of music. It has competence, more competence and even more competence stamped all over it.

I love the way that this song begins with a feeling of minor mode and works it's way up the ladder of pitch and key to the chorus. I reckon that for anyone who has experienced loss, it would be impossible to listen to these words without the lyrics becoming personalised. Ultimately, that's what makes a great song. As I see it, when lyrics take on a specific meaning that's unique for each listener and then the melody and the arrangement amplify that personalised meaning, you've accomplished a mighty feat. Alan and Di, you have accomplished a mighty feat.

This truly is a wonderful piece of art.

Please stay safe and all the best,
Noel

P.S. Di it's great to see you still having a presence on this forum. You're an amazing and inspiring woman.
Posted By: Al-David Re: Another Day - 04/12/20 03:09 AM
Originally Posted By: Ezekiel's Storm
Love this, Al. In my mind, I hear the female voice singing. By the way, you did fine with the higher notes.

Beautiful song. Love the chorus melody.


Hello Ezekiel ...

Thank you so much for those really nice comments. We really appreciate them. So glad you enjoyed it ... thanks for letting us know.

Wishing you the best and be safe ...

Alan
Posted By: Al-David Re: Another Day - 04/12/20 03:11 AM
Originally Posted By: Robertkc
Alan,
You fulfilled your intention to write a "big" ballad.This smokes all the way to to the emotional chorus and your vocal is a fine indication of where the song could go with Di singing... I do hope we`ll hear that version in the future.
Terrific guitar break btw!

Robert


Good Early Morning, Robert ...

Thank you so much! You encouraging and supportive comments put a smile on our faces!!! We appreciate that so much! Wishing you the very best. Be safe ...

Alan
Posted By: Al-David Re: Another Day - 04/12/20 03:12 AM
Originally Posted By: rsdean
Alan,

This is how music is made... None better.

Bob


Bob ...

You are much too nice! Di and I are appreciative of your comments. We're so glad it laid good in your ears. Wishing you the very best. Be safe ...

Alan
Posted By: Al-David Re: Another Day - 04/12/20 03:14 AM
Originally Posted By: BabuMusic
Very emotional, and your voice brings it out so well, Alan. I for one am very happy you are posting the "old one" since I wasn't here then. Blessings to you and Di!! You are inspirational.


Marty ...

You are so kind and encouraging with your comments. Di and I are humbled by them. Again, thank you so much!

Wishing you the best. be safe ...

Alan
Posted By: Al-David Re: Another Day - 04/12/20 03:21 AM
Noel ...

How does one respond to such glowing comments? We can only offer you a big and very serious "Thank you so much!" We were trying to create a build to the chorus that was subtle and, perhaps, sliding smoothly up the path without being too noticeable until the "bang" of the chorus. We then wanted to drop the drama and then quietly renew the energy of the song before "going out big".

You have seriously humbled us with your words and wisdom over the past few years; but this review nearly took our collective breaths away.

Again, many sincere thank yous. Wishing you and yours the very best. And please be safe ...

Alan & Di
Posted By: EdZ314 Re: Another Day - 04/12/20 10:51 AM
Alan - I'm really glad you decided to post this. It's a real heartstring puller and does it flawlesssly. It's got that magical quality that just whisks you away into another world. The vocals are just right - you carry words and meaning through perfectly, and while Jennifer Nettles might sing it prettier, I don't believe she could put more heart into it. I really hope that you continue to post your music - some of us in the forum are relatively new.

Wishing you and Di all the best! Thanks for the inspiration!
Posted By: beatmaster Re: Another Day - 04/12/20 04:14 PM
Nice one , a lovely dramatic love song and loved the way this was delivered in a sort of dark mysterious way.

Thanks
Posted By: Al-David Re: Another Day - 04/12/20 10:32 PM
Originally Posted By: beatmaster
Nice one , a lovely dramatic love song and loved the way this was delivered in a sort of dark mysterious way.

Thanks


Beatmaster ...

Thank ya bunches. Appreciate the nice comments. Glad you enjoyed the presentation! Wishing you the very best. Be safe ...

Alan
Posted By: Janice & Bud Re: Another Day - 04/13/20 05:49 PM
That is a sophisticated arrangement.

The emotion oozes throughout it driven by the lyric,
the vocal, the fine melody and the outstanding guitar work.
Perfect tone on that axe also.

Show no hesitancy to repost. They are enjoyed!

Best to you two. Be safe.

J&B

Posted By: Al-David Re: Another Day - 04/13/20 08:48 PM
Originally Posted By: Janice & Bud
That is a sophisticated arrangement.

The emotion oozes throughout it driven by the lyric,
the vocal, the fine melody and the outstanding guitar work.
Perfect tone on that axe also.

Show no hesitancy to repost. They are enjoyed!

Best to you two. Be safe.

J&B



Thanks so much, you two!

Always a pleasure to read what you think about our music. We sure have appreciated the support over the many years. You guys are the bewt! So glad you enjoyed this. Will be posting a few more "oldies" ... hopefully a new one or two along the way.

Again, thank you so much! Wishing you everything good. Be safe ...

Alan
Posted By: Torrey Bliss Re: Another Day - 04/14/20 07:25 PM
Alan & Di, a wonderful emotive tune that is worth investing time in to update at a future point! My heart goes out to you folks for the challenges you face! I have an adult child that has major physical problems that require our constant attention but God gives grace as I know He does you! It's a terrific song! Thanks, Torrey
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