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Posted By: Belladonna If I Open This Door - 05/26/20 12:05 AM
https://soundcloud.com/belladonna-amaya/if-i-open-this-door

VERSE 1
If I promised you my heart
will you please not break it
and pretend from the start
just so you could fake it?

If I let down all my walls
would you promise to stay
not be another downfall
and decide to run away?

CHORUS
These questions I must ask
Because my faith is fading fast
I’ve been here many times before
So please let me know
If I open this door

VERSE 2
If I bare my soul to you
will you promise to believe
or would you just say you do
intending to deceive?

If I fall in love with you
would you catch me if I fall
or walk away and say we’re through
without no committment at all...

CHORUS

CHORUS

_LONESON.STY
Posted By: jptjptjpt Re: If I Open This Door - 05/26/20 12:58 AM
A very heartfelt and authentic production. Very sweet vocal delivery. I like it.
Posted By: rayc Re: If I Open This Door - 05/26/20 05:46 AM
Really nice song and arrangement but I reckon you ought to retrack that 1st line so the song has a solid start.
Posted By: Belladonna Re: If I Open This Door - 05/26/20 07:30 AM
Thanks JPT.
Posted By: ROG Re: If I Open This Door - 05/26/20 07:57 AM
Hi Belladonna,

Just fabulous. Loved the whole thing.

The heartbreaking lyric and the wonderfully heartfelt vocal combine with
the excellent backing track to give the song an almost ethereal feel.
I need to listen to this again when it's dark, with the lights down low!

I DO like the sound of your voice and the harmony was just perfect.

Brilliant.

ROG.
Posted By: Scott C Re: If I Open This Door - 05/26/20 04:01 PM
Lovely song. Love the acoustic. Excellent lyric and heartfelt vocal. Well done
Posted By: Robertkc Re: If I Open This Door - 05/26/20 06:56 PM
I like the vulnerability of your vocal and the sincerity that comes through from the lyrics and your connection with them.
A good simple arrangement- understated and warm like the feel of the song.

Robert
Posted By: Greg Johnson Re: If I Open This Door - 05/26/20 07:55 PM
Pretty folky tune Donna!! I like the band you chose......works just right! Nice job on this!! Take care. Greg
Posted By: Deej56 Re: If I Open This Door - 05/26/20 10:48 PM
Belladonna,

Soft, bittersweet county ballad—well written. Very nicely done!

Kind regards,

Deej
Posted By: Belladonna Re: If I Open This Door - 05/26/20 11:04 PM
Thanks rayc, ROG. Scott C, Greg, Robert, and Deej56 for your kind comments. Appreciate the listen.
Posted By: Al-David Re: If I Open This Door - 05/26/20 11:27 PM
Hi Donna ...

I really enjoyed the acoustic presentation ... understated yet touches all needed bases. A bittersweet lyric with a heartfelt vocal. very nice, indeed.! best to you. Be safe ...

Alan
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