On Their Side

Bud & Janice kindly agreed to collaborate on a new tune.
I sent Janice Leon's lyrics and a set of chords.
Janice came up with melody and phrasing.

Janice - Vocals and melody.
Leon - Lyrics
Bud - Recording Janice and final mastering.
Me - arrangement and rhythm and lead guitar tracks.

The Band:
RealTracks in song: 2937:Bass, Fretless Electric Pop8thsRene Ev 085
RealTracks in style: 2692:Organ, Rhythm ModernPopSlowMike Ev 075
RealTracks in style: 832:Guitar, Electric, Rhythm AltCountryMoody Ev 075
RealTracks in style: 835:Guitar, Electric, Rhythm AltCountryRootsy Ev 075
RealTracks in song: 1761:Guitar, Acoustic, Strumming Pop16ths Ev16 085
RealTracks in song: 1543:Synth Pad, PopBelieve Ev16 065
RealDrums [in style:PraiseWorshipSlow16ths^2-a:Hat, b:HS4
Kontakt string section using midi super track.

On Their Side

Safe and sound
Finally found
Safe harbour in a stormy sea
Best thing that ever happened to me

That lucky day
You looked my way
Call it fate or serendipity
Best thing that ever happened to me

Could so easily have strayed
Into the danger zone
Might have struggled to remain
On the side of the angels
On their side
On their side

Look around
What’s going down
All the makings of a tragedy
Heaven knows what the future will be

Seize the day
Let’s fly away
Me for you and darling you for me
Heaven knows what the future will be

We’ll be careful not to stray
Into the danger zone
I sure hope that we can stay
On the side of the angels
On their side
On their side


Please be careful not to stray
Into the danger zone
We’ll find a way to stay
On the side of the angels
On their side
On the side of the angels
On their side

Janice, Peter, Leon and Bud ...

As expected with that cast of musical magic, this is is a truly wonderful song and listen. Peter, you always have a such a sweet touch on the strings. A strong lyric from Leon. And how could you ever go wrong with Janice on vocals? And that Bud guy is the best knob twister in these parts ... and probably most other parts.

Loved that strong guitar outro ... just soars so smoothly. Loved it from all angles!!! Best to all of you. be safe ...

Alan

Collaborations are the best.

Strong write from Leon and Janice has a real knack at coming up with a good melody, and of course always delivers a top notch vocal.

Smoking outro solo, Peter!

Great song guys and gal, enjoyed.

Thank you Alan.

J&B

Leon, Janice, Peter (and Bud)...

A good write. A very tight lyric. And the melody suits it nicely - "wistful".

A big sound. Excellent mix throughout.

Nice guitar. Cool bit of shredding in the outro.

And, of course...that angelic voice!!

Great team effort.

fj

Leon, Janice, Peter (and Bud great job guys love it, love your voice Janice always and great guitar fills and solo perfect fit on everthing thanks eric

Appreciate the comments Alan.

Peter

Hi there Janice, Peter, Leon and Bud.

A fabulous song with the whole team excelling themselves in this one.

A very evocative soundtrack which invoked pictures as it unfolded.

Great lyrics which can be interpreted in several different ways.

Wonderful guitar work - I'd have said this was a song simply for guitarists had
it not been for the fact that Janice was singing.

Janice - you know already what I mean to say. Perfect in every way.

Proper job, team.

ROG.

EXCELLENT.
The guitar licks do tread on Janice's vocals in the section before the solo - a bit of panning EQ or level work would easily sort that.
Super collab.
There are a couple of dream teams in this forum.

Sounds great! Some fine lyrics interpreted and delivered by an expert vocalist and some great guitar work. The outro guitar work is outstanding and reminded me that lots of players know how to rip off some wild shredding lines but very few know where to put them. Peter does. Well done all four, Tom

Hello Janice, Peter, Leon, Bud,

I can only agree with what all others have said about the song, the vocals en the solo. It's a very strong song and I liked it.

With all those well earned compliments, it is probably equivalent to suicide to suggest a change in the song.
I take that risk though:
The way Janice sings is in contrast with the time signature of the drumming and strumming (slow versus 16th, I guess). That can distract the attention to the vocals. If I was in charge for making this song (;-) the vocals gets the focus and the tempo of the instruments would be in line (in 8th). Of course that is a matter of taste. And beside that, I wasn't in charge and still the song is very nice...

Nice day,
Hans

Peter,Leon, Janice & Bud,
A gently uplifting song sent into the outer spheres by that fantastic outro guitar!
I liked the thoughtful lyric, yearning feel of Janice`s vocal and that you all agreed to let Peter ride it on out.


Robert

Thanks Dave - it was a treat having Janice come up with the melody.

Peter

Beautiful in every aspect - including that fiery guitar solo at the end. Janice sings masterfully as usual, the song is beautifully written and produced ... what is there to say? Congratulations!

Thanks floyd appreciate the comments.

Peter

Wow that one pulled on the heart strings. What a beautiful vocal Janice. Leon that lyric came from a very special place. Peter very cool backtrack and guitar was perfect for the song. So expressive. Well done.

Peter, Leon, Bud and Janice:

Now that’s quite the collaboration . . . and a very cool result all around. Agree with others on that killer solo in the break and on the outro. Well done—kudos to you all!!

My best to each of you,

Deej

Thanks Eric.

Peter

Peter, Leon, Bud and Janice: As soon as I saw these names listed in the credits I knew that this was gonna be a winner. And a winner it is!

As everyone has previously said everything about this is just plain perfect. This is so much better than what is on the radio today it is frightening.

Excellent work.

Thank you Dave!

Janice

What a lovely song. I love the lyrics and the vocals. Wonderful. Brilliant electric guitar. Great arrangement. Top notch recording. Good job to everyone. Congratulations!

Really nice stuff. Extra fine lyric that, to my mind, speaks to the need to not stray too far from the other in a relationship which I felt free to apply to my own life in my own way. In other words...didn't preach. Well delivered by Janice and supported with the band. The energy pumped up in that anthemic ending and I am very glad you let it play out. Much enjoyed.

Thanks Ray.

Peter



Thanks Rog, Janice always inspires.

Peter

Thank you big brother!

Janice

Thanks Tom appreciate the guitar comments and completely agree with your remarks about Janice.

Peter

Thank you Eric!

Janice

Thanks for the comments Hans appreciate the suggestions, always interesting to get another perspective.

Peter

Thank you Rog! That means a lot to me and I know Peter is equally appreciative.

Janice

Thanks Robert appreciate the review.

Peter

Thanks for listening and commenting Ray!

Janice

Thanks appreciated.

Peter

Thanks Deej.

Peter



Thanks Scott

Thank you Tom. It was a nice lyric to work with!

Janice

Thanks for the very nice comments Mario.

Peter

Appreciate the comments.

Peter

Thanks a lot appreciate the review.

Peter

Hi everyone!

Wow! This is such a terrific listen.

I've just been working on song lyrics that seem to have a million and one words to fit to melody. For this reason, when I listened to this song, my very first thought was how amazing lyric brevity is. To be able to say what is needed in the minimum number of syllables possible is an incredible skill. And it's breathtakingly effective.

Janice, I love this melody. The way that it flows against the song's harmony and arrangement is a perfect fit. You singing it, is the proverbial cream to the music's coffee. So easy on the ears and such a pleasure to listen to.

Peter and Leon, you've done a fine job creating this. Every where I look or listen, talent shines. The supporting chord progression is inventive and because it is a little outside the usual expectations, it made me sit up and pay attention. I like it!

Bud, thanks for putting the polish on a fine work.

So... all in all... I really enjoyed where this song took me.

All the best,
Noel

Wonderful you guys. Awesome lyrics, musicianship, singing, everything.

Sounds like some great 60s anthem or something.

Love those little feedback squeals in the guitar solo. Brutal man.

Ms. Beautiful Voice lulled me into a relaxed state, then Mister Blister Strings woke me up wit dat guitar: Wow! Great work as always, you folks perform at the highest level. A pleasure to listen to.

Thank you Robert. Yes, Peter did take it to the limit!

Janice

Well I say, thank you!!!

Janice

Noel
Thanks for the thoughtful review. We all appreciate your comments.

Peter

Thanks David - enjoyed your new one.

Peter

Much appreciated thanks.

Peter

Thank you Scott!

Janice




Thanks!

Janice

Cool song. This reminded me a bit of One Tin Soldier from back in the day. I'm not sure why... maybe the chords and snippits of the melody.

Nice work y'all.

Thanks Herb.

Peter

Thank you Mario!

Janice



Thanks. It was fun!

Janice




Thank you! Your description of the lyric is very eloquent.

Janice

Thank you Noel. I’m happy you like the melody especially coming from the melody man himself!

Janice

Thanks David!

Janice



Thank you. That was a fun description!



Thank you Herb!

Janice